i remember reading this story as a silent reader months back ..okay now not thrash me for this please ! i remember having a good laugh back then at shree,chottu and riya's antics and specially arjun's comment
rathode'jaha ye teeno ek saath ho,waha problm na ho,aise kaise sakta hai..with his'samjhe ya samjhaun' look he leaves from there..
matlab usse bhi pata hai ki yeh teeno cheez kya hai. and trust me as i read the story again months later, i had the same laugh again. that itself proves how much i loved your story. arjun's fight with yadav at the police station was the typical angry young man attitude that he had in the initial days. not that he doesnt have it now, but i find it quite toned down nowadays. the last line of arjun as he parted ways with riya ..mann ko bhaari kar diya, really felt for him at that moment. but overall, i loved your story.