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ArIya group ff:We wear the Mask up ch9 pg19pms l8 - Page 9

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Posted: 11 years ago
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Ariya romance...



mein to sharm se pani pani ho gayi...


mere pass koi words nahi hai ...



thanks for the pm...


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Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: minirox

amazing yaar

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thank u πŸ˜³πŸ˜Š
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Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: MjhtFan_Mahima

Can't believe i skipped this till dat

But thank god finally read it

Else i would have missed one of the best ffs on this forum

A gr8 effort by all the writers

The story is so well mentained

Love Arjun a lot... He is so confused...

Hope he soon finds out that S is Rathore and not Shree




Update soon

And add me to the pm list


😳 thank u so much dear...πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
thank u😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Well done Mushi!
ArIya scenes are a treat.
Rathore is one big idiot.
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Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: FeistySoul

Well done Mushi!
ArIya scenes are a treat.
Rathore is one big idiot.

thanku sweety..😳
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  CH 7 By Kohli..

Riya open her eyes & see otherside of bed, bt find it empthy. He must be awake. She thinks to herself. She touch d bedsheet whr he slept & her face turn crimson red. She remeberd thr last passinote night.. Suddenely she hear her jaan , her son's voice . " Gul Molning Mumma " Riya smiles @ tht. She kisses his cheek. & tell him . "Yuvi nw its time for bath baby. " & bathed him. After tht she applied powder on his body. & anyhow manages to put Diper on him , bcoz Yuvi is so naughty. Riya just turn around to get Yuvi's dress frm cupboard. Yuvi knows ths is d time to run, he slowly climb down frm bed & run frm thr.
Riya find tht he wants to play wit her. So she goes in nxt room to catch him , bt she cn't find him . " Yuvi , Yuvi baby , kaha ho tum? " Thn she noticies small pair of foots behind curtain, she try to catches him , bt Yuvi is sharp enough to run frm thr, Riya notices he ran to downstairs. She grabbed his cloths & hurridly goes to down stairs. " Yuvi yuvi ruko , ruk jaao baby plz " bt Yuvi is in no mood tod. He run to hall while laughing , Riya also run behind him . She unnoticed all her team members r thr. Actualy Arjun called thm to came home to discuss sme imp issuse on case. Shree & Chotu look @ Riya. Thr eyes pooped out wht thy see , Rathore & Arjun fuming wit anger . while Riya happily chases her son. Shree , Chotu & Rathore also notices sme marks on her upper side of arm , near her lips. Rathore get angry on ths. " She is really shamless nw." He thinks to himself. Arjun pissed of ths & shouted out of his lungs. "Biwi " " Biwi " Riya somehow catches Yuvi & turned around to find why her husband scolding her. She find tht all her team members look @ her weridly. She just look @ thm & thn herself & get shocked , bcoz she is in still her nightdress. 
 
(Riya's nightdress )
She cluctches Yuvi tightly to her & filps her hair , tht comes on her face , Rathore notices sme bite marks on her neck also . "Biwi , abhi ke abhi uper jaao , " Riya look @ Arjun , Arre itna scream kyun kare ho kya hua? 
baby muhje nahi pata tha ki yeh sab itne subha yahaan hai main tho humare bedroom main thi aap ki yeh shazaada ko ready kar ne par yeh tho khelne ki mood main tha ab kya kar thi uske peech bhaagi  main  wiase tum dono baap beta ek jasie hai yeh din main mere saath khelna chata hai aur aap raat main she says and winks
 
Rathore and team along with arjun r shocked  @ wat she said  
yeh sab tum purposely akre ho ri thinks rathore
 
ab please gussa choro jaan
 
 she blushes & run frm thr. Arjun is in so much embrassed now , look @ his team. All team look @ him. " Aaa mmm tum sab ab jaao , hum ofc mai milte hai. "
 
Rathore goes to his home back , bcoz it's just 8 :00am nw. He changes his dress & wears black vest wit black track pant. He goes his room where he kept his punching box He put on gloves on his hands . Nw he only remebered Riya's marks. how can she act like this  and damn woh arjun shit ...how dare he mere riyu ki saath damn . rathores alter ego woh uska husband hai haak hai uska , tuhmare nahi , agar koi marks and love bites hai bhi , hine do you lost your chance ...his alter ego goes away .. He get mre angry on her & hit his punching bag madly for sme hours.
In Ofc
Whole day Riya felt shy , bcoz of mrng incident she cn't look @ her team members. she try to avoid thm . Arjun notices ths. He call her in his cabin. Riya goes thr , & ask him , " Ys Sir , do u want somthing?" & look @ Arjun. As sson as whn she recongizes her husbands intention through his eyes , she stpe backward , bt Arjun fastly cme near her & hold her. Thy r too close nw.
Riya : ( Cn't look @ him ) Choda na , plz...
Arjun : Kyu..
Riya : Hubby plz ..
Arjun : No way..
Riya : Kisi ne dekh liya to
Arjun : Jo dekh na tha , vo to dekh liya hai sabne subha.
Riya : ( Blushes & hides her face in Arjun's chest)
Arjun also hug her back satisfily. Rathore look @ thm through his cabin , get irriated by Ariya romance nw. " thy dn't have any wrk to do ? " he muttered under his breath.
Aftersomttime Riya goes to her dek. Shree ask her , " Ri what is ths , u r so mannerless . "
Riya : What happen Shree ? Ab maine kya kiya?
Shree : Itne saare din ho gye tumhe yaha aaye hue , ghar liya hue , aur tumne abhi tak hame party bhi nahi di , house warmnig party ki invitation kab milegi Ri.?
Riya : (Hits Shree's shoulder playfully ) Shree tumne ne to meri jaan hi nikal di thi.
Shree : Kyu tumhe kya laga , ki mai tumse kal raat ke bare ...
Riya : ( Immeadatly recongzise wht he want to say ) K. thik hai. to Aaj raat 8 baje ghar per...
Shree : Nahi nahi ghar par nahi , kahi aur chalete hai , yaha pe naya hotel open hua hai , vaha pe Disco bhi hai ...
Riya : K . i just inform Arjun , u just inform others.
In Party.
Riya & Arjun , Yuvi comes to d Hotel "Blue Shine " @ 8.oopm. Riya wears one piece purple colour short dress wit white Diamond earrings on thm. While Arjun wear Riya's fav black t-shirt wit denim. All meet @ table no 24. tht Shree booked for thm.
Shree : (Cn't tke his eyes off on Riya ) Omg Ri ur lukng ossam tod.
Riya : Thx Shree (Smiles to him )
Rathore & Arjun : ( Clenched thr fists angrily)
Chotu : Chal Shree dance karte hai ..
Shree : Ha chal ... Ri , Arjun Sir , Rathore Sir aap bhi chaliye na..
Arjun agress , bt Rathore did nt agree wit thm He stays back. Nw Ariya , Shree & Chotu on dancing floor . Rathore & Yuvi giving each other company. Riya's gaze only & only on her Yuvi. after somtime she notices Yuvi seems bre wit ths atmosphere.She tld Arjun she comes in a minute. Arjun okies wit it. Riya goes to Yuvi , "Kya hua mera bachha bre ho gya?"
Yuvi spread his little hands to his mother . Riya pick him up. "Mumma pani" Riya searches for his waterbottle , bt she cn't get it."
Riya : Ohh so sry baby , lagta hai mumma aapka waterbottle car mai bhul gayi. Chalo hum leke aate hai . (She goes frm thr & goes near d car she open car & keep Yuvi in front seat & started searching his bottle backside . Yuvi playing wit car keys. during d playing Yuvi closed d door , bt Riya could nt notice ths , bcoz she is busy in searching his bottle. Riya find his water bottle " Ha mil gayi finally " She said to herself & close d backdoor .
"Chalo baby ab hum paani peete hai , mere baby ko bahut pyass lagi hai na.." & She look @ Yuvi , who ne trap in d car . She dn't know wht to do. Arjun is nt thr , nobdy is thr . she is alone in tht place. She try to open d door , bt door are lock nw. She panicked nw , she dn't have her phn wit her , so she cn't call Arjun r any others. Nw yuvi also realises tht He lock in d car , & his mumma crying outside badly. Seeing his muuma crying , he also start cryiong bitterely. Riya kick d car in frustation. Suddenely she hears Rathore's voice . She run towards tht dirction & found Rathore talking somone on phn. (Actually he gets imp cal , he cn't talk inside bcoz of loud noise , so he comes in a parking lot. ) Rathore end his convo & keep his phn in his poket . He is abt to go frm thr , thn he felt somopne Hold his hand. Rathore look @ tht person. & shocked to find Riya hold his hand & crying badly.
Rathore : Riyu , kya hua ? tum ro kyu rhi ho? kisine kuch kaha tumse ? tumhe kuch chot to nahi lagi ? ( he ask her in concern , afterall she is his first love )
Riya : ( only crying & crying , only able to lift her finger & show d dirction whr thy parked thr car. Rathore & Riya immedatly goes thr , Rathore found tht Yuvi stuck in d car alone & crying bitterely. Dn't knw bt his heart die a thousand times whn he see Yuvi crying . He immeadlty ask Riya abt d car keys. Riya inform him tht car keys wit Yuvi. & duplicate keys on home. thy cn't go home also , bcoz home is vry far away frm ths hotel. And Rathore cn't tke risk for Yuvi's life. Rathor look here & there & found one wooden stick & hit on window's glass. after 1st attempt he broke glass , nt fully bt little , Rathore carefully put his hand under d car , through tht shattered glass & try to open car lock. And yes he succed in tht. He sucessfully open d lock & thn open d car's door & pick Crying Yuvi & give it to Riya. Riya kisses Yuvi all over d face & wipe his tears. Rathore looking @ thm , dn't know bt he also felt relived now. A small smile crept on his lips. Riya give water to Yuvi & keep him on d car's top & hugs Rathore tightly . She still crying . Rathore feel happy & hugs her back. He kisses her hair & tell her
Rathore : Shhushh Riyu rona nahi , mai hue na ab yaha .
Riya : Sammy , sammy agar aaj tum nahi hote to mai ne Yuvi ko kho diya tha . Sammy ...
Rathore : (Felt relived , bcoz after years she is in his arms again , she called his name again... ) Shhu ekdum chup , ab kuch aur mat bolna.
Riya : (Animatedly nooded on ths , she is in nt her senses , bcoz she is in big shock , tod she nearly lost her son , if Rathore is nt thr. ) She hugs Rathore more tightly.
Rathore : ( Patted her back slowly & kisses her hairs)
Time goes on bt thy dn't know abt tht , bcoz after years thy found each other. Bth r nt in thr senses . Thy remain in a hug.
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Posted: 11 years ago
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Omg manuu di.. you have done it once again...πŸ‘πŸ‘
Awesome writingπŸ˜‰
hayeee I love the way you excuted everything...
 
specially the end I wonder who's going to write the next part.. yaar jaldi likhooo Shru se sabar nahi hota🀣
 
Lovely updateπŸ˜›πŸ˜‰
 
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Edited by funkylicious - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
omg...arjun is soo naughty!!!
and riya runs after yuvi..in dis styl...imagining the face of all etf members πŸ˜ƒ
rathore's first love is riya!!!!and he still loves her!!
poor yuvi and riya!!!thank god rathore came at the right tym...
but the end made me shocked!!!!
plz update the next part!!!!Edited by priya00147 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey it awsome

how can u stop at this point
continue soon

it was too emotional