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Posted: 20 September 2012 at 12:35pm | IP Logged

Son's Last Letter To His Mom.. Will being tears in your eyes :(


I went to a party Mom,

I remembered what you said.

U told me not to drink,

Mom,So I drank soda instead.


I really felt proud inside, Mom,

The way you said I would.

I didn't drink and drive, Mom,

Even though the others said I should.


I know I did the right thing, Mom,

I know you are always right.

Now the party is finally ending, Mom,

As everyone is driving out of sight.


As I got into my car, Mom,

I knew I'd get home in one piece.

Because of the way you raised me,

So responsible and sweet.


I started to drive away, Mom,

But as I pulled out into the road,

The other car didn't see me, Mom,

And hit me like a load.:(


As I lay there on the pavement, Mom,

I hear the policeman say,

"The other guy is drunk," Mom,

And now I'm the one who will pay.


I'm lying here dying, Mom...

I wish you'd get here soon.

How could this happen to me, Mom?

My life just burst like a balloon.


There is blood all around me, Mom,

And most of it is mine.

I hear the medic say, Mom,

I'll die in a short time.


I just wanted to tell you, Mom,

I swear I didn't drink.

It was the others, Mom.

The others didn't think.


He was probably at the same party as I.

The only difference is, he drank

And I will die.

Why do people drink, Mom?

It can ruin your whole life.

I'm feeling sharp pains now.

Pains just like a knife.


The guy who hit me is walking, Mom,

And I don't think it's fair.

I'm lying here dying

And all he can do is stare.


Tell my brother not to cry, Mom.

Tell Daddy to be brave.

And when I go to heaven, Mom,

Put "GOOD BOY " on my grave.


Someone should have told him, Mom,

Not to drink and drive.

If only they had told him, Mom,

I would still be alive.


My breath is getting shorter, Mom.

I'm becoming very scared.

Please don't cry for me, Mom.

When I needed you, you were always there.


I have one last question, Mom.

Before I say good bye.

I didn't drink and drive,

So why am I the one to die?



After Reading this  few have quit drinking and many have quit habbit of "DRINK & DRIVE". Did You read he said "Someone should have told him, Mom". 


Now I'm telling u...(if there is any person who drink's)...Plz Do not Drink...and If u drink plz Do not Drive...

and plz try to not to drink...its only harmful for ur health...


It will damage ur lever




P.S - this poem is not written by me...I dont know...who wrote this...but whoever he/she is...I bow him/her for this heart touching poem




Edited by Kriti_rox - 20 September 2012 at 1:00pm

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It was fab Clap
hearttouching . . . . . . He lost his life bcoz of someone else Cry
thats very unfortunate Pinch
hope ppl could understand the simple issue behind this Embarrassed

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Very nice! Keep writing.

So well narrated. Smile

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It's fab 
Loved it
Thanks for the pm

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GUD 1!! Kritzz
U EXpressed so AMAZINGLY...

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kriti it was fab...Touched...

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