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Adhuri si Aas: Part---9
Arohi come back home; but she is still thinking about Arjun. His smile, his behavior, her thinks----
"Ye ladka bahot ajeeb hei . . . ajeeb nehi I think pagal hei . . . kitna bate karta hei . . . aur mujhe kehte hei mei jyada bolti hu. Ab iske saath hi mujhe kaam karna padega Oh!! God . . . ab kya hoga!!"


"Jagte jagte ek umr kati ho jaise , Jaan baki hei magar saans ruki ho jaise . . ."

Arohi come out of the house & sit in the bench in the garden. Gradually Evening is coming with cold breeze. Arohi is wrapping herself with a shawl. Arohi look at the hill, which like many light-worms covers it. Arohi look at the sky. She closed her eyes. Her think---
Before 2 yrs. . . . Aakash & Arohi were come to visit a hill-station:
Arohi- Aaksh tum abhi tak taiyaar nehi hue?????? Jaldi karo na . . . (Arohi shouted at Aaksh)
-Kyun kaha jana hei? (Aakash said & yawn)
-tum bhul gaye . . . wow . . . very good . . . (Arohi said & sat at the bed)
-Arohi . . . tum yun hi chillaogi ya bataogi bhi . . . jana kaha hei? (Aakash get up from the bed)
-Aakash . . . tum yahaan kya karne ke liye aaye ho??? Mei bahar jana chahti hu . . . (Arohi said & turn back at him)
-Ok . . . par bahar nehi hum kahi aur chalenge . . . (Aakash give her a mischievous smile)
-kaha . . .??(Arohi said surprisingly)
Aakash covers her eyes with a piece of cloth & took him to the terrace, & uncovers her eyes Arohi is standing, it was an amazing view. The sky is full of stars; there is light-worm in whole terrace. Aakash whisper in arohi's ears---
-Arohi . . . kaisa laga??(Aakash smile)
-Bahot khubsurat hei . . . Aakash tum hamesha aise hi mere saath rahoge na?? aise hi mere sare khawaise bina kahe hi samaj jaoge na??(Arohi said & turn back to him)
-Arohi . . . mei toh tumhare saath hi hu . . . aur jab mei nehi rahunga na tab tum ankhe moond kar ek baar aasman ki or dekh lena . . . (Aakash hug her)
-Kya Aakash . . . aisa koi kehta hei . . . tum nehi rahoge matlab . . .(Arohi said angrily)
-Tum bhi na Arohi bahot bacchi ho!!(Aaksh come near her & hug her)
Suddenly her phone rings . . . Arohi open her eyes . . . & receive the call---
-Hello . . . (she said & controls herself)
-Hey Arohi . . . kya kar rehi ho??(It is Arjun . . .)
-Tum . . . tumhe no. kaha se mila??(She is feel surprised
-Tum bhi na bahot bacchi ho . . . Mr. Kalra se mei no. mang liya . . . after all hum dono ek saath kaam karnewale hei . . . (Arohi was shocked to hear that line . . . because Aakash always said to her "Tum bahot bacchi ho" )
-bolo kuch kaam tha??(She said unmindfully)
-Nehi . . . kuch khass toh nehi . . . just aise hi . . . (Arjun said . . .& his voice was become low)
-ok . . . Arjun mere sar mei bahot dard hei . . . hum kal milenge toh baat kar lenge ok!! Gn . . . Sd!!(Arohi said all those line & try to smile but it seems a fake smile . . . she cut off the call)
   Arjun is standing beside the window. His think---
"Kuch toh chupi hui raaz hei is ladki ke andaar . . . par kya hei . . . ye ladki kitni bhi hasne ki . . . khush hone ki kaushis kar le lekin uski ankho mei ek ajeeb si dard hei. Kya mei is bare mei Arohi se baat karu . . . ya fir Mr.Kalra se . . . nehi chodo . . . mujhe kya . . . agar jyada interest dikhunga toh Arohi kuch aur hi sochengi mere bare mei . . ." Arjun shut all windows, & then go to sleep. Arohi is sitting in the garden for sometime then she also goes to sleep . . .!!!


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Posted: 19 October 2012 at 6:40am | IP Logged
Wat happened btn akash nd arohi? neways its gud 4 our hero..LOL m sure arjun vil change arohi 4 d gud.. continue soon..Smile

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Posted: 19 October 2012 at 6:44am | IP Logged
very nice update naina
 
so we get some flashbacks about akash and aru / what happened to akash / is he no more /
 
how come arjun also said the same lines - destiny -
 
good update / continue soon pls

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Posted: 19 October 2012 at 5:21pm | IP Logged
brilliant update

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Posted: 19 October 2012 at 8:28pm | IP Logged
Nice update:):)

Is Akash dead?

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awesome update..Smile

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Nice update

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Adhuri si Aas: Part---10
Next day morning . . . Arohi wake up hearing the door-bell. She get up from the bed & look at the clock, it shows the time 5:30 . . . Arohi feels surprise, she think---
"Itna subah kaun aya hei . . . sone bhi nehi dete hei log . . . subah subah chale ate hei. . ."
Arohi come downstairs to open the door . . . outside of the door there is Arjun standing with a big smile. Arohi frown at him . . . she can't believe that Arjun is coming. She can't understand why he is coming . . . & she tries to remember any work or project which they'll do together. Arjun now pretend to be serious & fold his hand, said---
-kya hua??? Aise ankhe fad ke kya dekh rehi ho????
-Tum???? Itni subha . . . koi kaam tha tumhe??
-Arohi kaam mujhe nehi hei hume hei . . .
-kya kaam hei . . . aur jo bhi hei Arjun . . . mei toh thodi der baad janewali thi na tea-estate pe tabhi kar lete . . .
-tab toh hota hi nehi na vo kaam. . .
-aisa kya kaam hei??
-sare bate yehi karne ki irada hei ya andar bhi bulaogi??
-sorry . . . andaar aao . . .
Arjun come in the house, Arohi lock the door & said---
-baitho . . . tea ya coffee??
-kuch bhi chalega . . . tum bana rehi ho toh mei zeher bhi pee lunga . . .
-tum kya itna subah yahaan flirt karne aye ho??
-are waah . . . smart ho . . . jaldi samaj jati ho . . .
-kya??????

-nehi . . . actually mei tumhe le jane ke liye aaya tha . . . jaldi taiyaar ho lo . . .
-jana kaha hei??
-surprise hei . . . ab jao . . . jaldi karo . . .
-ok . . . ja rehi hu . . . par coffee . . .
-baad mei pee lenge . . .
-ok . . . wait. . .
Arohi go upstairs . . . after 10 min. she comes down , she is wearing a pink track-suit . Arohi said---
-chalo . . . I'm ready . . .
Arjun stand up & said---
-chalo.
Arohi lock the door.
They are walking in the road. The road is empty & foggy. A mild breeze is blowing; they are silent for long time. They have no word to say. After 2 yrs Arohi is walking with a boy except Aakash. When they were together every day was a valentine's day. Today is the same situation but something is missing. Arohi is tries to be normal but she can't. Arjun is watching at her for long time. He knows that something is rumbling in her brain, but he is not sure to ask her about that. After some hesitation he said---
-kya soch rehi ho??
Arohi become startle with this sudden question. She said---
-kuch nehi . . . accha tum bata rahe the hum kahi janewale hei . . . kaha??
-kuch toh soch rehi thi . . . batana nehi chahati ho . . . mat batao . . . vaise bhi hum kaal hi mile the . . . hei na??
-nehi Arjun aisi baat nehi hei . . .

-It's ok . . . chodo . . . haan . . . chalo tumhe aaj kuch dikhata hu . . .
    Arjun take her in a flat space . . . it is a hill-side, far away the whole city is looking like small, very small. Arohi look at the sky, the sky is red, the sun is rising. The whole view is mesmerizing, Arohi look at Arjun, and she is amazed to see this type of view. She said---
-bahot khubsurat hei . . . thanks mujhe yahaan lane ke liye
-Arohi itna formal behave mat karo . . . hum dono ek saath kaam karte hei . . . par dost bhi toh hei . . .
-shayed . . .
-Arohi tumhari ek bahot buri adaat hei . . .
-kya?
-tum apne andar baat chupa ke rakhti ho . . . tumhe share karni chahiye . . .
-haan . . . share karne se khusi badhti hei . . . par kuch batein aisi bhi hoti hei jine share karne se sirf dukh badhta hei . . . aur kuch nehi.
-Arohi . . .
-Time dekho Arjun . . . 7:30 . . . I think ab hume chalna chahiye . . .chalo!!
Arohi starts walking back, Arjun heave a sigh & starts walking beside her. He is thinking about her. Her unspoken sadness is now hurting him. Arjun is a very happy-go-lucky type of boy; he wants to know what was happened with her. But Arohi is seems a lifeless hill to him , from outside it looks beautiful but from inside its very deep , there is no surface , Arjun is try to dig that surface , but he can't. Arohi is buried her all memories , all dreams , desire in her own choice , she is leading her life as the life goes on , but she is not living her life , every time she is busy to make herself happy. Who is hiding something by her own choice it's impossible to finding them back. Arjun don't want to find them, but he is attracted by her those eyes, her eyes tells all. From that hill-top to Arohi's house Arohi said nothing not a single word. When they reach Arohi's house Arjun said---
-Bye . . . Arohi . . .

-coffee??
-fir kabhi . . .
-ok. . . bye!!
   She turns back & goes away. Arjun looks at her for a long time then he also starts walking back . . .!!

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