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updt soon

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Nice update:)

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nice update.wasa arjun ki entry kab hoga?? 
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Originally posted by Rimpikmh

nice update.wasa arjun ki entry kab hoga?? 


hoga hoga . . . patience rakho!!Big smile
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Adhuri si Aas: Part---5

Arohi stopped her car in front of the Tea-Garden, some people are working there. Arohi said---

-Bhaiyaa manager uncle kaha hei??

-Are Arohi beti . . . manager saab

toh aaj aya hi nehi . . .

 Arohi frown for sometime & said to herself---

"Aya nehi . . . tabiyaat toh thik hei . . .!" then she said---

-Thik hei . . .

 She moves her car. Mr. Kalra manager of the "Sharma Tea-estate". He is the most efficient worker of the Sharma Industries. So when Arohi's father decided that he wants to buy a Tea-estate in Barot he employed Mr.Kalra as the post of manager. Kalra lives in a small Bungalow, near "Uhl" river. That river-side is a most beautiful place in Barot. Mr. Kalra has no child . . . his wife and he established a orphan-house in his house . . . there are 6 children in this house.

  Arohi park her car & come down. She starts walking. A small bell is hanging from the front gate of the house. Arohi ring the bell. Shirin come & give her a smile & said---

-Are Arohi didi . . . Ap?? Uncle se milne aye hei??

  Arohi pulls her cheeks & said---

-nehi . . . mei toh tujse milne ayi hu . . . accha ek baat bata uncle ki tabiyaat kharab hei kya??

-haan didi . . . uncle ko na kaal se bhukhar hei . . .

-accha . . .

-haan . . . ap aiye na andaar . . .

   Arohi come inside with Shirin. Uncle is lying in the bed . . . Aunty is sitting beside uncle. Aunty seeing Arohi & said---


-Arohi . . . Aao . . . mujhe pata tha tum aaogi

-Uncle ab kaisa hei??

   Uncle opens his eyes & said---

-Mei thik hu Arohi . . . aao idhar ake baitho . . . tumse ek jaruri baat karni hei

-kya baat hei uncle??

- Arohi hamare ye tea-estate india aur india ke bahar bhi bahot famous hei toh London se Mr. Rajiv aa rahe hei hamara ye tea-estate dekhne ke liye vo hamare tea bahar export karne mei hamari madat karenge  aur tumhe toh pata orphan-house ki kharche agar koi investor mil jata

-par Papa ko pata hei ye saab ke bare mei?

-haan pata hei meine use is bare mei ek letter vega tha unhone haan kar diya par ek pareshani hei

-kya??

-Arohi dekho mujhe toh bahot bhukhar hei toh mei use receive karne kaise jau . . .

-ye koi prob nehi hei uncle mei chali jayungi kaal thik hei?

-tum jaogi??

-haan ab ap rest kijiye . . .

  Arohi stand up & said---

 -Aunty Mei aaj chalti hu . . .

-abhi chali jaogi . . .

-haan aunty . . .

-thik hei Shirin tumhare saath chali jayegi . . .

-thik hei . . .

Arohi & Shirin board in the car. Arohi starts her car.

After sometime Shirin said---

-Arohi didi ek baat puchu?

-ha pucho na . . .

-ab shadi nehi karnewali ho kya??

  Arohi's smiley face become sad she said---

-kyun??

-nehi vo Radha hei na uski didi ka shadi ho raha hei . . . toh mujhe laga ap kab shadi karengi . . .??

-mein shadi nehi karungi . . .

-kyun??

-kyun ki mera jo prince tha vo toh kahi kho gaya hei . . .

-sach??

-haan . . .

-toh ab kya hoga . . .

-ab pehle toh tum school jao . . .kyun ki tumhara school aa gaya . . .baad mei hum dono mil ke use dhoond nikalenge ok?

-ok . . .

  Shirin give Arohi a kiss & go away. Arohi's eyes become wet. She controls her tears & moves on.

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Posted: 13 October 2012 at 1:43am | IP Logged
aww.w... Loneliness is so scary... I dont Arohi is suffer from that! Btw.. you're an awesome Writer :) :)


Edited by Varshu_Karthik - 13 October 2012 at 2:03am

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Posted: 13 October 2012 at 4:11am | IP Logged
good one naina - who is this new entry now? will wait to know more about this guy? nice update

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