New FF:Adhuri Si AasPart50(pg53) - Page 4

aww.w... Loneliness is so scary... I dont Arohi is suffer from that! Btw.. you're an awesome Writer :) :)
Edited by Varshu_Karthik - 11 years ago

good one naina - who is this new entry now? will wait to know more about this guy? nice update

Originally posted by: Varshu_Karthik

aww.w... Loneliness is so scary... I dont Arohi is suffer from that! Btw.. you're an awesome Writer :) :)

Thank u . . .😃

nice update.poor arohi😔

Adhuri si Aas: Part---:06

When Arohi come back home it is evening then. Today she thought about Shirin, & as usual she felt sad. Arohi Then controlled herself & started thinking about next Day morning.  She don't want to go to receive Mr.Rajib. But as uncle is sick there is no option. As she hears about Mr.Rajib from her dad he is a arrogant man & very petulance in nature. After sometime she switched off the dining room & come to her bed-room & lay down.

Next day morning . . . She wakes up early . . . & stands in front of the cupboard. She couldn't understand what to wear. As Mr.Rajib is a businessman so some formal dress will be perfect. So she decides to wear a pink & white simple sari. She wears the sari & looks herself in the mirror. After 2 years she wears a sari . . . she thinking----

Before 2 years . . . an evening; Arohi & Aakash were lying in their garden . . .

-"Aakash- Arohi tum kabhi saree kyun nehi pehenti??(Aakash said looking at the sky)

-kyun ki I hate sari . . .(Arohi said spontaneously)

-kyun?? Tumhe pata hei ladkiyaan sari mei hi acchi dikhti hei after all you are Indian girl . . . kabhi toh sari pehna karo . . . (Aakash smile)

-kya kehna chate ho tum?? Mein acchi dikhti nehi hu??(Arohi frown & look at him)

-Are Arohi meine aisa kab kaha . . . ?? aur fir dekho shadi ke time toh tumhe sari pahanni padegi . . . aur shadi ke baad bhi . . . tab kya karogi??(Aakash try to manage Arohi's "gussa")

-toh ek kaam karo tum koi sari pehennewali acchi dikhnewali ladki se shadi kar lo aur mujhe chod do . . .(Arohi said with a "gussawala" tone & get up from the ground)

-tumhe chod du . . .?? thik hei agar tum aisa kuch chahti ho toh aisa hi hoga .par tum mujhe chod ke kaise rahogi??.(Aaksh said & hugged her back)

-Aakash . . .!" (She smiled & goes away)"

  "Knock . . . knock . . . knock" Arohi come back to the present & control her tears . . & come to open the door. There is a boy standing with a flower bouquet in his hand.

The boy said---

-Mam apne order diya tha special bouquet ke liye . . . ye hei . . .

-thank you . . . ye lo . . .

She give him the money.

Suddenly her phone rings it was from Manager Uncle ,  Arohi received the call, Uncle said---

-Arohi tum aaj ja rehi ho . . . mujhe bahot bura lag raha hei . . .

-Nehi Uncle its ok . . . haan mei abhi nikal rehi hu . ..

-thik hei vaise vo 12:15 ki train se anewale hei . . . tum pahoch jana . . .

-ok uncle . . .

-aur ho sake toh mei ekbaar office chala ayunga . . .

-Nehi koi jaruraat nehi hei vaise bhi apka tabiyaat kharab hei . . .

-fir bhi mujhe ekbaar milna chahiye unse . . .

-thik hei jaisa ap thik samjhe . . . mei ab phone rakhti hu

-thik hei . . .

She cut the call & start her car!!

Who is this Rajib? When will my hero make his entry?
Nice update naina / thx - will wait for ur next update
Edited by Arjuhisis - 11 years ago

hmm.. who is Rajib?

Adhuri si Aas: Part---7

 Arohi come to the small station name "Jogindarnagar" this is a narrow-gaze line. The station is cover with big trees. Outside of the station she parks her car. When she comes inside of the station . . . she comes to know that the train is 2:00 hours late. Arohi said herself---

"Oh . . . Shit!! . . . Train 2 ghante late . . . ab mein kya karu . . ."

She feels irritate & come to sit in a bench. She is waiting for Mr. Rajiv. After sometime she stands up & starts walking . . . then she come & sit in the bench. Suddenly she notices that a boy watching her. Arohi feels embarrass. She adjusts her hairs & 'dupatta' pretends like nothing was happened. Then she looks at the boy the boy still seeing her. Arohi give him a smile. The boy smiles her back. Arohi tries to see the railway-watch, but the watch is far away;

  "11:30" – Arohi turn back to the boy & said---

-sorry!!

-11:30 . . . time (The boy said without seeing her)

- . . . (Arohi can't understand what to say) Thanks!!

-Train bahot late hei . . . ap ghar chale jaiye . . . apka Boyfriend aaj nehi aa payega .

-Boyfriend?????(Arohi frown to him)

-haan . . . ap jiske liye wait kar rehi hei . . . (The boy said & wink)

-Apko kaise pata mei apna BF ke liye wait kar rehi hu??(Arohi said & fold her hand)

-Toh kiske liye??(The boy pretend to be serious)

-apko kyun batau??(Arohi said surprisingly)

-kyun ki mein bhi yahaan kisiki intezaar kar raha hu . . . (The boy said & smile)

-kiski??(Arohi said but control herself)

- dekha . . . tum bhi puch rehi ho na . . .(The boy wink at her)

-sorry . . .

-nehi nehi . . . chalta hei . . . pehle tum batao . . . kyun ki ladies first. (He gave him a smile)

-vo koi anewala tha . . . yahaan hamari ek tea-estate hei . . . vo dekhne ke liye koi London se anewala tha . . . uska hi intezaar. (She said & heaves a sigh)

- Really??? Uska naam kya hei . . . (The boy said very seriously)

-Mr. Rajiv . . . (Arohi said but she can't understand what is happening, why the boy is become so serious)

-Arre . . . yaar . . . pehle kehna chahiye tha na ye???? Tum ladkiyan bhi na . . . toh tum ho vo???? Chalo ab baithi kyun ho???(The boy said & stand up)

-Par tum???? Tum Mr. Rajiv ho????( Arohi said with wonder & stand up)

-nehi . . . (The boy said & hold his luggage)

-toh fir???(Arohi said surprisingly)

-toh fir kya????? Are matlab mei uska beta hu . . . vo mera "pop" hei . . . koi meeting aa gaya tha toh isiliye vo nehi aa paye . . . mei aa gaya tumhe koi problem hei???(The boy said looking at her)

-nehi . . . par ap toh is train se anewale the . . .??(Arohi said surprisingly)

-haan . . . par mei pehle train se aa gaya . . . ab chale . . . (the boy said eagerly)

-haan chalo . . . par ek sec ruko . . . tum kaun ho?? I mean naam kya hei??(Arohi said & look at him)

-Arjun . . .(He said & give her a smile)

-ok . . . chalo . . . accha ek sec pura naam kya hei??(Arohi ask & frown at him)

-Arjun Singhania (He said with a "gussawala tone")

-ok . . . accha . . .

-nehi ab mei aur ek sec bhi nehi ruk sakta . . . mujhe jana hei . . . tumhara sawal ke chakkar mei mei bhuka yehi mar jayunga . . . itna sawal kyun karti ho tum???? Mei ghar jake tumhe apna pura details e-mail kar dunga with pincode khush????? Ab chale please . . . (He said painfully . . . & eagerly looks at her)

-ok ok chalo . . . (Arohi control her smile)

-thanks!!(He said "Thanks god")

Arohi & Arjun come outside & Arjun keep his luggage in the back-side of the car & come to sit in the front. Arohi said---

-tum drive karoge???

-haan. . .kyun?? gadi ka break-fail hei??khatara hei??

-nooo vo actually . . . mujhe nehi pasand koi aur drive kare . . . (Arohi said in mumble tone)

-Darti ho?? Mei agar tumhe khai mei gira diya . . . (He said & smile)

-Hey tum pagal ho?? jeetajata insaan ko khai mei gira ke marna chahte ho?(Arohi said surprisingly)

-nehi . . . khai mei girne se tum nehi maroge . . . i can guarantee you(Arjun said & starts the car) Ab chale??

She sits in the car reluctantly without said nothing.

    Arjun moves the car!! Now Arohi said to herself—"save me God"!! . . .

At last our hero has made his entry
Nice update naina - pls continue

finnaly arjun ka entry hogai hai😛.lagta hai arjun bohut fun loving hai.!