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anupm

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anupm

Joined: 19 March 2013

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Posted: 05 May 2013 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
wow. 
i really like this story, nd little bit disappointed bcz u it consists only 3 chapters, i wanted to read more.
 
i liked the way u expressed arjun's feeling toward his lost wife and the fear of losing his love riya once again. arjun's love and concern in hospital, and addressing his frnd as "sam"
 the way he rathod says arjun to move on
and the most liked words "   how difficult it was to expect something and not get it 
 
it was really nice

i loved it, first tym am reading ur work, and i really really loved it
but i can't access ur blog. so plz plz add me in ur blog 
my id is abnaabdulla4@gmail.com

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naughtykittyyy

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Joined: 20 July 2010

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Posted: 31 May 2013 at 1:01pm | IP Logged
hii muskaan..rd da 3 parts in one go
its touchng my heart...aftr rd it hv a feel dat 
may b dis scn can b shwn on da serial too..if sana wnt quit
trulyy if it ws shwn it wl b a perfct treat 4 any arjunian
well dat wl nvr happn
bt your stry is too intense da way u portray arjun s inner turmoil regardng roshni and riya and riya z selfless n helpless love toward him(bng rejectd allws) ..intense...write 4m da core
den on da 2nd part 
due 2 her kidnappng..finalyy arjun hv 2 break his shield pour his heart 2 wake riya up
den rathore part ...how he tries 2 brng back his old n best frnd 
his lines r realyy works as pathfinder 4 da broken heart
den at da end
2 parts r realy touchn 4 me is arjuns imagination of 3 of dem
i feel like i hv visualize his imagntn too
den at da very end through smilling as his dream shows its perfct...more dan perfct its beutifull
da best thing u hv wrote in it is da end as begnng
aftr a longgg time rd sucha beutifull intense ariya
lvd it heartlyyy 

Payal_156

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Posted: 31 May 2013 at 7:47pm | IP Logged
Muski
awesum wrk
lovely!

ila_tanwar

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Joined: 14 February 2013

Posts: 1945

Posted: 07 July 2013 at 12:50am | IP Logged
awwwhh,,, it was nice and cute

beenish248

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Posted: 26 August 2013 at 1:25pm | IP Logged
wow yarr ..
awesome story ..
love it

hangok

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Posted: 24 October 2013 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
wow another one,
greatSmile

i think im late to be a fan of arjun and riyaUnhappy
how i wish we could see them together...

samvedha

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Posted: 29 January 2014 at 2:51am | IP Logged
Wow excellent ss.
loved sam arjun conversation and 
arjun roshini part.
The dream sequence is really adorable.

Areesha566

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Posted: 15 April 2014 at 1:07pm | IP Logged
Beautiful

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