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SS: Love VS Death : ch3 pg10 sep20 NEW! - Page 11

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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: dumas

awesome loved the conversation between arjun and his bil loved his advice and he started to move on awesome well written thanks for the pm





aww thanks allloottt.😳...your welcome...😃





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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: sbp1971

Very nice SS and you ended it just right.

Wonderful writing.





aww thanks alooottt😳
thanks😳



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Posted: 11 years ago

VERY NICE STORY😛

Edited by saba.ali81 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago

HI IT WAS A GOOD STORY PLZ WRITE MORE STORIES ON ARIYA...WE ALL ARE WAITING😃😃😃😃

Edited by saba.ali81 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: saba.ali81

hi guyz plz any one will give me the links of all chapters.😃😃😃 bcoz i could'nt find it by my self😭. plz someone help i'll be very thankful😊...



part 1 link  


part 2 link


part 3 link
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Posted: 11 years ago
that was really awesome...finally riya's love won over roshni's death...
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Posted: 11 years ago
The SS is lovely...& ending is wonderful. I think it's the best ending for this SS.
it's some thing like...just not ending but beginning. Sometimes, silence is the best word.
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Posted: 10 years ago
wow. 
i really like this story, nd little bit disappointed bcz u it consists only 3 chapters, i wanted to read more.
 
i liked the way u expressed arjun's feeling toward his lost wife and the fear of losing his love riya once again. arjun's love and concern in hospital, and addressing his frnd as "sam"
 the way he rathod says arjun to move on
and the most liked words "   how difficult it was to expect something and not get it 
 
it was really nice

i loved it, first tym am reading ur work, and i really really loved it
but i can't access ur blog. so plz plz add me in ur blog 

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Posted: 10 years ago
hii muskaan..rd da 3 parts in one go
its touchng my heart...aftr rd it hv a feel dat 
may b dis scn can b shwn on da serial too..if sana wnt quit
trulyy if it ws shwn it wl b a perfct treat 4 any arjunian
well dat wl nvr happn
bt your stry is too intense da way u portray arjun s inner turmoil regardng roshni and riya and riya z selfless n helpless love toward him(bng rejectd allws) ..intense...write 4m da core
den on da 2nd part 
due 2 her kidnappng..finalyy arjun hv 2 break his shield pour his heart 2 wake riya up
den rathore part ...how he tries 2 brng back his old n best frnd 
his lines r realyy works as pathfinder 4 da broken heart
den at da end
2 parts r realy touchn 4 me is arjuns imagination of 3 of dem
i feel like i hv visualize his imagntn too
den at da very end through smilling as his dream shows its perfct...more dan perfct its beutifull
da best thing u hv wrote in it is da end as begnng
aftr a longgg time rd sucha beutifull intense ariya
lvd it heartlyyy 
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Posted: 10 years ago
Muski
awesum wrk
lovely!