SwaRon ff :Unconditional Love..updated ch10 : pg78 - Page 13

This content was originally posted by: pratik54000

Hey nisha first of all i am very sorry for being late in reading and commenting on this wornderful update of yours...sorry hai bahot bad kan pakad ke..hehehe..

.gandi baat sorry bolte waqt has rahe ho,pata chal raha hai,kitna sorry feel kar rahe ho

This content was originally posted by: Pratik54000

have you ever tried to sneak peak in a casinova's brain

hum taak-jhak karne vale logo main se nahi hain

This content was originally posted by: Pratik54000

There is an essential character of a casinova that if a girl ditches him for a date than that girl has like hit his confidance for a world of good and he unknowingly becomes passionate to cash in that girl...

itna confidence...aapko kaise pata?😈

This content was originally posted by: Pratik54000

waise ek baat bata muje tere os mein

chindi size n tukdo mai update deti hu.
.par aise mere ff ko os to mat bolo.
.merse update nikalvana aapke bas ki baat nh h😆
btw thanx for the luvly comment😃Edited by cuteswayu - 11 years ago

This content was originally posted by: cuteswayu

.gandi baat sorry bolte waqt has rahe ho,pata chal raha hai,kitna sorry feel kar rahe ho are hasi ko chod feelings dekh sahi me sorry hun yar hum taak-jhak karne vale logo main se nahi hain acha fir ek casinova ki itni detailing kahan se aayi itna confidence...aapko kaise pata?😈 bacha bhul mat mai ek ladka hun aur mere group me bhi casinova's ho sakte hai chindi size n tukdo mai update deti hu...are ab vo teasers ho gaye hai😛😛
.par aise mere ff ko os to mat bolo...acha baba ye galti kan pakad ke manta hu sorry
.merse update nikalvana aapke bas ki baat nh h😆 acja bacha to ab jab tak tera update nahi aayega mere ff bhi update nahi hoga...ab mat kar update who cares meri efforts bach jayegi ek update likhne ki
btw thanx for the luvly comment😃 and pleasure is always mine

This content was originally posted by: Pratik54000

hasi ko chod feelings dekh sahi me sorry hun yar

pc ki screen se kisi ki feelings dekhna merko nahi aata,aapko aata hain to sikha do!

This content was originally posted by: Pratik54000

acha fir ek casinova ki itni detailing kahan se aayi

jaha se aapko apne ff mai sharon ki feelings samajh aati hai

This content was originally posted by: Pratik54000

bacha bhul mat mai ek ladka hun aur mere group me bhi casinova's ho sakte hai

aap bhi to unme se hi ek ho

This content was originally posted by: Pratik54000

ja bacha to ab jab tak tera update nahi aayega mere ff bhi update nahi hoga...ab mat kar update who cares meri efforts bach jayegi ek update likhne k

maine kb kaha i wil nt update,maine kaha aapke bug karne se nh karungi,apne man se karungi

This content was originally posted by: Pratik54000

are ab vo teasers ho gaye hai

aapke jitni achi writer nahi hu,ek baar mai utna hi aya dimag m..to m kya karu.

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acha baba ye galti kan pakad ke mantahu sorry

jao maaf kiaEdited by cuteswayu - 11 years ago

This content was originally posted by: Nehal92

res' unres
BAS ITNA HI!! nish i want to read more..
nish tu ready reh..ab main tere dimaag kahungi update ke liye!!0„2
update toh hamesha ki tarah mindblowing tha0„2

Nehal dear mujhe bhi bada comment chahiye
thanku!

This content was originally posted by: marauder

I'm here before the PM🤡
Well coming to the update. Just awesome. This FF is getting better and better by each update. Swayam's character as a casanova is the best one I ever read in any FF, SS or OS so far. His entire casanova image was just brilliantly written again in this update. And gald to see the whole gang is here and they are basically the same awesome friends we knew.
And what to say abot SwaRon second meet. Its even better and even superbly penned than the first. Swayam's cheekness and flirtness and Sharon's stubberness. Nice combo. Waiting for some serious explosions in next update.

Thanku so much shishir...😃Edited by cuteswayu - 11 years ago

This content was originally posted by: Sudha-SK

Nish as per me this is the best update to the FF so far. Loved how you are shaping up Swayam's character. His thoughts on how to score a chick, what do i say..spot on..you wrote that part very well. The whole gang was the same friends we know and made a perfect addition to the update. The SwaRon meet was just superb..both their reactions and how Sharon reminded him of the previous night and how Swayam tried flirting with his charm trying to hide the disappointment from Sharon each reply was nicely done.Looking forward to the next update.

Thanks sudha..
😊

NISHA 🤗

Res Edited by Karen_sharon - 11 years ago

Hey nish, meli pyali behna...hugs...fab update tha...and really its fun to read swayam in such an avtar!!! waiting for the next one sweetie...love di..;)

I love how much Sharon has already affected Swayam !! And Go Sharon for playing hard to get with Swayam !! He's gotta work way harder to get a date with Sharon !!