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hey guyz thankyew 4 da luvly cmntz u all rock <3... Ff ehmmbh: virika virman "life as we knw it"CHAPTER 11 Recap: manvi fainted during karva chauth vaderaz nd viren virat hell tense , nd da entry ov first negative role "manan"... (scene starts from viren drgging virat away from manan nd took him towardz da side) viren: virat control kar yeh wakt aur yeh jaga apna gusa dekhanay keliye tek nai hai... (but virat wz so much in anger) virat: par bhai apnay dekha na wo khud bhabi aur mannu ko bech main laya ucki himat kaisi hoi apni gandi zuban say bhabi nd mannu ka naam lainay ki... Viren: bhai sun, idhar dekh wo humara aek competitor hai virat jo usnay pehlay kia tha humari gari ki breaks fail karkay dtz y hum jantay hn ky wo ghatia shakhs kici b had tk jasakta hai nd u knw dt dadaji ko b yeh baat humnay ni btai ku kay hum nai chahtay thy dt koi chaos ho.. Wo jeetnay keliye kuj b kar sakta hai tbi i am sayng yahan larna tek nai hai nd jistaran usnay jeevika aur mannu ka naam lia usay saaf zahir hota hai kay wo humaray baray main information rakhta hai aur ab hum akelay ni hn bhai humaray upar do aur logo ki zimadari hai islye humay jeevika and mannu ko insbsay dur rakhna hoga.. Virat: we hav to protect dm bhai.. Viren: exactly bhai nd bhul ja usay abi is wakt chal ku ky teri sherni ghayal hai ok (dz made virat smile a little he thought "ya ma sherni" wid dt viren and virat went to da vadera mension) (scene shift to jeeman room where manvi wz still sleeping nd jeevika wz sittng besides her giving her a little lori...) jeevika: hmmm suraj jb chup jata hai, chand nikal kay ata hai, taray jhilmil kartay hn, mannu ankhein band karlay ku kay parian neechay agai hn tujh ko geet suna gai hn hmmm hmm hmmm... (viren virat were cumng to jeeman room wen stood outside dy listen to jeevika sweet lori 4 mannu) virat: really nw bhai bhabi mannu ko lori suna rai hn hw sweet.. (viren smiled) viren: hmm akhir mannu bachi hi toh ha humari... Virat: bhai apki bachi ki eb shadi honay wali hai u c da difference.. Viren: chup kar virat (wid dt viren knocked jeemanz door jeevika stood up nt making a noise nd went to open da door nd to her she knew who it can be viren ji nd devarji afcource so she opened) viren: jeevika wo mannu.. (b4 he cud complete it jeevika put her finger on viren lips making him shhh viren lukd at jeevika nd jeevika quickly removed her finger whispering) jeevika: virenji shhh warna mannu uth jaye gi... Viren: oh sorry par eb mannu kaisi hai?... Virat: haan bhabi ab mannu tek toh hai na... (jeevika smiled teasingly) jeevika: dnt wri devarji apki honay wali wo eb tek hai suba tk fit nd fyn hojaye gi... (virat lukd down embaraced nd viren appreciatingly smiled at jeevika" oh toh fm ji ko cherna b ata hai em impressed" jeevika blushed as if reading viren thoughts.. Dn virat handed da medicines to jeevika nd lukd at mannu nd smiled "get well soon sherni" ) viren: apna and mannu ka khyal rakhna... Ok.. Jeevika:ji viren ji ap b apna khyal rakhna (dn viren also lukd at mannu nd smiled nd both viren nd virat left to dre room jeevika closed her da door) (it wz 3:30 am when suddenly sm1 knocked on viren nd viratz room.. Viren got up all ov a sudden nd thought who it might be at dz time he hurridly went to da door nd opened it nd wz shocked to c manvi standing infront ov him .. Viren wid concern put hand on manviz head to check wz she ok) viren: mannu tm yahan pay wo b itni raat ko tm tek toh ho na... Manvi: shhh jiju ahista boliye (nd she went to hide behind viren) viren: yeh tm kia kr rai ho mannu... Manvi: jiju plz mujy ic dusht fm say bachao wo karwi davai lay kay hath dho ky meray peechay par gai hai... Viren:mannu relax davai toh peenay pari gi na warna tm tek kaisay hogi ... Manvi: jiju mujy deko meray kis angel say lagta hai main bemar hn (dn b4 viren cud ansr jeevika came inside wid a spoon wid syrup on it) jeevika: viren ji i am sorry par mannu viren ji kay peechay say bahar nikal aur abi yeh davai pee aur chal akay soja...(nw jeevika wz infront ov viren nd manvi behind viren nd viren in btwn jeeman) manvi:ni dii ma ni piyo gi jiju bachao na... Jeevika: mannu chup chap bahar aja ku kay jiju toh kia jiju ka bhai b ni bacha sakta... (viren smirked on jeevikaz dz line nd manvi turned to luk dt virat wz peacefully sleeping so she went towardz hz side nd slapped hz arm) manvi: oye kumbkaran kay kuj lagtay utho tm itni chain say so kaisay saktay ho tmaray lye varath rakha tha jiski wja say behosh hogai aur eb yeh karwi davai yukhh.. Utho pati dev (virat sat rubbing hz eyes to c mannu standing infrnt ov him wid jeevika bhabi tryng to make manvi drink da syrup but manvi pulled jeevika bhabi hand away nd da da syrup fell on viren kurta who wz standng behind jeevika just inches away jeeman lukd at viren wid dre handz on dre mouth wid eyes open wide nd virat controlled hz laughter) viren: shut up virat...(he wid hz handz was removng da syrup when jeevika also did da same wid her handz viren lukd at jeevika face whch wz concerned nd smiled nw manvi sat wid virat on bed noticng da virika scene) jeevika: i am sorry viren ji yeh mannu b na i am really sorry (she wz continusely tryng to vanish away da stain nd viren wz just lukng at jeevika) viren: its ok jeevika kuj ni hota... Jeevika: ni viren ji yeh apka kurta ganda hogya yeh mannu bht shetan hai (she wznt listng so viren hold her hand nd jeevika lukd at viren surprised) viren: fm ji itni fikar mat kijay its really ok kurta hi hai... (dy were lukng at eachodr wen manvi cleared her throat) manvi:ehum ehum romance haan.. (dn virika lukd at dre siblngz who were enjyng da scene) (jeevika nw went near mannu nd slapped her arm)jeevika: mannu aek du gi chup kar aur tujhay kia laga ky eb davai ni pilao gi ma devar ji zara isko kaskay pakriye ap b viren ji... (virat hold manviz shoulder tightly so she cannot run dz tym) virat: ji bhabi pakr lia ap dawai pilaye aur saali ky jiju ap b idhar akay help ur wud be... Manvi: ni jiju plz nd chep choro mujy ma davai ni piyo gi nii (manvi opened her mouth to tawk just dn jeevika put da spoon in her mouth nd she drank it) manvi: yukhhh (nd she started to cry virat left her shoulder nd came infront ov her wid virika also sat on da bed) jeevika cuppng mannu face:karvi ti davai??... Manvi: (while cryng) haan toh aur ni toh kia ... (jeevika nw hold her ear nd made puppy face) jeevika: i am sorry mannu par davai to karwi hi hoti hai ... Viren nd virat: haan we all are sorry ( virika nd virat were holding dre ears manvi lukd up wiped away her tears) manvi:aek sharth pay maaf karo gi... Virika nd virat: kiya??... (manvi stood up excitngly) manvi: agr hum ic wakt walk pay jaein gay tb... Jeevika: mannu chup kar tym deka hai 4 bj rahay hn ic wakt walk... Virat: haan mannu...kici ko pata lag gaya toh?... Manvi: kici ko pata ni lagay ga main guarantee daiti hn (wid dt she dragged virika nd virat off da bed nd put da pillows as if sm1 wz sleepng nd coverd it wid da comforter nd she went to her room wid virika nd virat followng her nd did da same to da pillows nd turned) manvi: tan taraaa c waisay toh hum jaldi wapas ajaein gay par agr koi uth b gaya toh dy will thnk ky hum kumbkarano ki taran so rahay hain (viren virat controlled dre laugh nd jeevika wen to mannu hold her shoulder) jeevika: mannu yeh sb tunay kaha say seekha?.. Manvi: fm ji yeh mera khud kay kandh hain... Jeevika: jo b ho hum ni jaein gay wakt dekh (manvi dn slip away nd went to viren making puppy face) manvi: jiju plz...:(:( ma aur chep paka apko quality time ka bonus daein gay 15 mintz ka apkay nainmatakay aur romance kelxe... (virat laughed dn mimicked mannu) virat: jahan bhabi ny gusa kia waha "jiju plz" start... Manvi: tm itnay unromantic ku ho... Virat: dekhao tmay drama queen (he said while takng stepz towardz manvi but viren intrupted btwn dm nd cupped mannuz face) viren: saali sahiba ji hum jaein gay... Jeevika: lekin viren ji .. (but viren cut her in btwn) viren: kuj ni hoga fm ji its ok (jeevika nodded nd manvi hugged viren wid joy whch made virat nd jeevika to praise "jiju saali duo") the end guyz part 12 at nyt... Enjoy nd do comment... Precap: da mid nyt walk realizatn ov closeness nd manvi to fell from da grill..:p keep guessng... <3 yushna Smile

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Loved this update. Night walk! Interesting. Continue soon.

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awesome update

Edited by mika17 - 24 September 2012 at 1:12pm

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Awesome update loved it

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superb update dear
Awesome
Manvi is so funny
Update soon

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superb update...continue soon

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thankyew guyz 4 lykng nd commentng...<3 ff ehmmbh: virika virman "life as we knw it"CHAPTER 12 recap: manvi well nd virika virman decided to go 4 a walk at 4:am... (virika and virman were walking down da hill dre wz no1 else instead ov dm nd manvi wz full ov excitmnt running above dm) manvi: wow dii yeh deko kitna haseen sama hai nd aisay main hum tm yahan hain (she turned nd winked to virika nd virat) par dii yaha toh koi b nai hai? (virika smiled nd virat just thought ov teasing dz bandriya) virat: wo kia hai na mannu ji itni raat ko insan yaha pay kia karein gay ? Bs 4 ullu hi ghoom rahay hn... Manvi: kia kaha tmnay mujy chep?... Virat: main aur tmay kuj kaho na baba na i knw ic wakt yeh sherni ghayal hai par itna bara risk main itna b pagal nai hn... Manvi: jiju deko na yeh apka nikama aur not so romantic bhai mujy tang kar raha hai... Jeevika: mannu bs b karja... Manvi: kia dii apka casette hamesha mannu bs b karja bs b karja pay ku atak jata hai , dii plz ab apna casatte viren ji bs karjaein bs karjaein pay araein (virat laughed jeevika blushed nd viren embaraced) manvi: oye hoye jiju aur dii toh tomato ki tara lal hogye hn ku chep vadera ji... Virat: exactly mrs wud be junior vadera ji... Manvi: toh phr quility tym dia jaye?? (she lukd towardz virat but he wz confused) virat: quality time??.. Manvi: chep tm chep hi ho tmay kia laga jiju yahan meray lye aein hn aray ni yar jiju toh yahan quality time ki rishvat pay aein hai ku jiju??... (viren embaraced) viren: aray ni mannu... Manvi: janay do jiju ap aur dii yaha pay quility tym spend karo main aur virat us pahar pay ja rahay hn humay b thora quality tym chai lekin zara control... Jeevika: du gi tjhay aek mannu... (wid dt manvi slid her arm wid viratz arm nd dragged him away.. Now it wz only virika) viren: waisay fm ji mannu ka idea na itna bhi bura ni tha ... Jeevika: ji??... (Viren came closer) viren: quality tym ka...:p thankx 4 givng me mannu as a daughter nd saali... (jeevika lukd at viren nd smiled shyly at his comment) (viren dn gave hz hand infron ov jeevika by which she lukd at him confused ) viren: dance??... Jeevika: yahan viren ji??... Viren:ku yaha kia kharabi hai fmji.?...    jeevika: par viren ji no music...:(... (Viren took hold ov hz hand and put her hand on shoulder nd with the other hand he grabbed jeevikaz waist whch made her blush) viren: ap saath to dijay fm ji sur khud hi chi jayee ga... (jeevika lukd at straight in virens eyes which were deep wid love, affectn, care 4 her 4 her family nd 4 da most imp her behna mannu so she smilingly noded) (viren started hummng a tune nd jeevika lukd at him nd dy swayed wid viren music) viren: tm paas ayee... Yun muskarayeee (he made jeevika turn so nw her back wz touching hz body which created da magic nd hz handz were holding jeevika by her waist so nw jeevika sang whch made viren smile ) jeevika: tm nay najanay kia sapnay dikhayee... (viren dn twirl her outside nd dn twirled her in wid jerk nd jeevika hit hz chest) virika: ab toh mera dil jagay na sota hai kia karon hayee kuj kuj hota hai... (nw dy were swayng while jeevika put her head on hz heart listng to hz heart beatz nd viren put hz hand around her) viren: do u trust me fm ji??... Jeevika: ji viren ji... Viren: ill be alwayz dre 4 u... Jeevika: i knw... (dt waz a magical momen 4 both nd here at other side manvi dragged virat on da corner edge of da mountain) manvi: tm itnay unromantic ku ho chep?? Virat: unromantic nd me sherni tm kuj zada hi besharam ho... Manvi: oh really??... Virat: oh yae... Manvi: apnay honay walay pati ky sath kia jo b kia toh ismay sharam kia hai chep zindagi guzarni hai itnay ma hi sharma jao gay toh agay (dn she realized wt wz she abt to say nd luk down virman embarced) virat: agay kia??... Manvi: kia?? Agay kia??.. (virat started to move towardz manvi who wz movng back) virat: agay jo b hoga acha hi hoga sherni... (nd he held manvi by her shoulder make her turn towardz da sky wid holding her arms open) manvi: yeh tm kia kar rahay ho... Virat: kamzor yadash ki malik titanic pose bhol gai... Manvi:oh toh soothing therapy chep dnt be a copy bilaa... Nd aj hum hawa ko mehsos ni karein gay... Virat: toh phr kia karein gay?? (she sat on edge nd making virat sit too) manvi: aj hum log silent pray karein gay dil ky sakoon kelye... Virat: silent pray? Wo kaisay... (manvi put her handz on viratz eyes nd close dm) manvi: wo aisay ky ankhein band karkay asman ko face kartay vay jo jo log tmari lyf ma imp hain jinsay tm bht pyar kartay ho unkay baray main sochein gay.. (she close her eyes aswell nd lukd at da sky dn virman first saw dre family, dn dre dii/bhai dn it wz all white nd dre at so far came virman virat imagined manvi nd manvi imagined virat "jo imp hai jisay bht pyar kartay ho" virman opened dre eyes wid jerk ov eachodr thought dn luk at sky dn luk at each odr "imp pyar aur manvi" "imp pyar aur virat") background music: hum milein na milein hum rahein na rahay , rahay gi sada yahan pyar ki dastan sunay gay sada jisay yeh zameen asman hum hain is pal yahan hum milay na milay... Scene divided into 2 parts... One virika huggng nd da other virman eyelock... (enjoy guyz nd comment ch 13 at late nyt ya phr kal) precap: manvi fell from da grill... <3 yushna... Smile

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