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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 7:18am | IP Logged
Good update please continue soon ;)

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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 7:29am | IP Logged
sweet update. Precap is superb. Continue soon.

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thankyew all 4 da commentz..luvng u all..<3.. Guyz as tomorrow z ma uni so i may update late in da eveng so here goes ff ehmmbh: virman virika "life as we knw it" CHAPTER 10.. recap: roka done marriage date fixed aftr 14 dayz nd varath fiasco started wid virika virman decided to fast... (scene started 4rm early in da morng 4pm ladies sittng on da dinng wid only two boyz viren nd virat) swamini: i dnt beleive dz itnay saloon main aj pehli bar humaray bhanjay varath rakhein gay woww its shocking biwian abi ai b ni aur itna positive affect...:)   virat: itna positive affect hai bua ji ky kia btao...(he said under hz breath) viren: virat chup chap beth okay aur kia tu nai chahta ky mannu ki omer lambi ho... Virat: chahta hn par bhai varath kay ilawa aur b toh koi rastaa hosakta hai na... Viren: virat meray bhai varath ky ilawa koi rasta ni nd mannu b toh rakh rai hai na .. Virat: haan par... Viren: haan par var kuj b nai... (viren virat smiled) (here manvi wz hell hungry nd thnkng abt da fastng throughout da day made her restless "hey mummy papa ma kaisay bhoka raho gi i want ky apkay damad ki umar lambi ho par varath wo b pura din , mujy rona araha hai koi mini varath ni hota"... Swamini noticed manvi) swamini: kia howa manvi beta... Tmay dar lag raha hai?.. Manvi: sach kaho toh ji bua ji main kbi pura din bhoka ni rai pata ni main varath tek say pura kar b paon gi ya ni wo kia na jeevika dii ma patience hain par mujh ma ni hn bua ji kia dii ya dabbu ya koi aur meray hisay ka varath rakh sakta hai?... (virat laughed nd viren glared to hm rest all also laughed nd virat thought "kitna bak bak karti hai") swamini: ni manvi yeh varath tmay hi rakhna paray gai aur koi ni rakh sakta nd eb say practice karo gi toh agay kelye perfect hogi (manvi wz abt to ansr bt felt jeevika hand upon her nd stopped) manvi:ji bua ji apnay tek kaha.. Ma varath rakho gi virat kelye... (just dn vanshika came wid da trolley) vanshika: swamini didi yeh lijay aur jeevika ko sargi da dijay... Aur manvi beta yeh tmari sargi (she went to manvi nd sat beside her) aray virat aa aur apni honay wali biwi ko khila... Aur tm b viren... (dn virat nd viren went to jeevika nd manvi stood beside dm first viren made a spoon nd made jeevika eat it dy both lukd at eachodr... Male: yeh dil seenay ma tha par ky dharka hi ni yeh teri aheitein isay day gai dharkan.. (jeevika blushed nd viren smiled shyly) dn virat made a spoon full ov rice nd made mannu eat it dn manvi did da same to virat which virat happily eat... Wen manvi looked around every1 wz staring at her) manvi: wo kia hai na maa jb honay wala pati khila sakta hai toh honay wali patni b toh khila sakti hai (dz made virat virika nd all smile upon manviz antics) (scene dn move in da afternoon where in da garden manvi wz roming here and dre nd muttering smthng nd virat wz passng by he saw manvi roamng here nd dre nd he went to her) virat:kia howa mrs wud b virat vadera??... Manvi: chep pati tm mera sar na khao agay ic bhook ny mujy kamla kardia hai eb tm meri vatt na lagao apni bakwas karkay... (virat laughed naughtily) virat: ufff aek toh waisay hi sherni upar say bhooki matlb bhooki sherni deadly combinatn hai... (Manvi glared at virat which made hm put hz figer on mouth whch made mavi smile) manvi: kia yar chep pati ho tm b em sorry ma khamkha bharak pari... Virat: bharakna toh apki adat hai wud b vadera ji nd trust me main agay keliye adat daal raha hn... (manvi lukd down blushingly dn lukd at virat... Female: janay ku khwabo pay khoi khoi ha yeh nazar... "she smiled at virat" male: hosh ma hn kiskay ab khud ki nai hai khabar "virat too smiled" virman: hua kia hua kia hua yeh pyar humay bhi...) (scene dn shift to dring room where dre were dabbu nd shlok playng togeather nd virika just lost into eachother) (viren looking at jeevika) viren: aray dabbu tujhay bhook toh ni lag rai na... Dabbu: mujy ku bhook lagni hai mainay naishta kia hai baray jiju.. (jeevika knew dt it wz 4 her) jeevika: dabbu bilkul tek hai usay bhook ni lag rai bs tensn hai... Dabbu: dii mujy kia tensn hai?... (viren lukd worried) viren: tjhay kia tensn hai dabbu? (but b4 dabbu cud reply ) jeevika: mannu ny pata ni ab tk kia tufan uthaya hoga haina dabbu(dabbu again wz abt to say) viren:oh 4 dt dabbu dnt wri mannu keliye chep hai (jeevika smiled at dz nd dabbu wz confused so slok got up nd took jeevikaz hand nd dn took viren hand made dm stand infron ov eachodr) shlok: bhaiya bhabi main aur dabbu bhaiya ja rahay hn eb ap aek dosray say khud baat kar saktay hn apko koi bahanay ki zarorat ni (wid dt shlok nd dabbu left nd virika lukd at eachodr embaraced...virika: tu hi tu hai tu hi tu hai ik meraa khudaaa..) (scene dn shift to at ny every couple standing waitng 4 da chand nd dadaji swamini, vanshika dabbu b.beeji nd shlok were standng togeather) manvi: pata ni yeh chand kub niklay ga... Virat: meri sherni hav patience... Viren: fm ji aj ap bht achi lag rai hn... (jeevika blushed) shlok:wo deko chand agaya... (all ladies lukd towardz da chand nd were happy nd started da ritiual) background music: hathon main poja ki thali... Ai raat suhagon wali (jeevika manvi da chachis were dng aarti nw) chand ko deko hath main joro karwa chauth ka varath main toro.. (nw jeeman along wid chachis lukd at chand dn to dre patnerz manvi lukd through da veil to virat who winked ...) teray hath say peekay paani bnjao dasi say rani... Aj ki raat jo mangay wo paajaye ray... Ghar aja pardesi tera deis bulaye ray ho man mita tainu rab day hawalay kitaaa (nw it wz tym 4 da men to make dre patnerz drink water viren made jeevika drink so does da chachaz but wen virat wz abt toh made manvi drink da water manvi started coughng..) manvi: ohogh ohogh... (dn she felt smthng black infront ov her eyes she raized her hand but da hand touchd da glass virat wz holding nd it fell down dn manvi world tilted she try to hold viratz collar but collapsed to da back hittng her head to da ground virat who wz till nw confused wid wt manvi wz dng wz nw panicked he try to hold her but she fell wid da thall..) virat shouted: mannu mannu kia hua... Jeevika: (hell scared ran wid viren to manvi) mannu mannu uth kia hogya tujhay viren ji dikhixe (nw all were gathered around manvi nd callng her name so she cud wake up but no she wznt dadaji called da dr he wz on hz way) dadaji: virat beta manvi ko andar lay kay chalo jaldi dr atay hi hongay... (virat nodded took her in hz armz nd went in da house wid every1 still panicked after sm tym dr came nd checked manvi) swamini: dr humari bahu tek toh hai na... Dr: ji swamini ji b.p bht low hai ma ny injectn day dia hai kuj dair ma hosh ajaye ga nd yeh kuj davaiyan hn virat beta tm meray sath clinic chalo ma tmay medicine day du ga... Virat:ji dr (virat wz so serious 4rm da tym she fainted he hz been sick wid da worry viren noticed he wz happy as well but tense to bcz ov mannu) viren:ma b chalo ga saath main... (wid dt virat nd viren left wid da dr swamini nd vanshika came nd touched manviz face nd went to wid dadaji nd every1 nw it wz jeevika who wz cryng nd huggng manvi too) (scene changed to viren virat who were cumng back 4rm da click wen sm guy hit viren , viren turned to apologize but froze to luk who he wz) virat: bhai wt happen r u ok (dn virat lukd at where viren wz lukng nd wz shocke too) da guy: oh luk at dz vadera khandan ky 2no betay akhatay aek saath yaha... Viren: luk manan humaray paas tmari faltu ki bakwas ka wakt ni hai (ya it wz manan in ma ff he z villain :p) manan:hoga b kaisay suna hai tm 2no ka roka hogya hai congratz to both suna hai larkia bht khubsurat hn... (nw virat came 4rwad nd pointed da finger at manan) virat: meri baat sun aur kaan khol kay sun bhai aur meri personal life say dur reh aur dobara kbi b unkaay baray main kuj b kaha toh yad rakhna virat singh vadera naam hai... Manan: chill virat abi toh main manvi ji say mila b ni aur itna gusa khair jeevika ji nd manvi ji ko hi kehna (b4 virat cud say nythng furthur viren took virat nd dy went) manan to himself: oh toh vadera boyz ki kamzorian akhir pata lag hi gai jeevika ji manvi ji welcum to da war... (nd he laughed evily) the end i hope u enjoyed it nd do comment next part kal in da eveng ... Precap: mid nyt walk ov virika nd virman ...<3 yushna here.. Smile

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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 9:59am | IP Logged
It was good but plz add a bit more of virika :)

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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 10:19am | IP Logged
very nice and plz add more of virika...

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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 3:42pm | IP Logged
Awesome update loved it lol @ virika antics loved virats concern hate manan already continue soon

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Posted: 23 September 2012 at 4:13pm | IP Logged
awesome update, hate manan already

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Posted: 24 September 2012 at 2:51am | IP Logged
So villan is introduced. Virat already hate manan! Nice. Do continue.

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