Originally posted by Neha.K.
<font color="#000066" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">First of all m extremely sorry for the late comment... kal kardi kardi reh gayi main comment..
anways m here now finally after reading two beautiful updates...
Actually dnt know where to start but lemme try...
Start frm Manvi being an apple of everyones eyes.. Just beautifully written..this is how our mannu is.. Didi's lil kiddo Mannu :):):):) as J said - <font color="#CC3300">"meri ankho ka tara aj sbkay jeenay ka sahara hai"</font>
Lovedd how u showed everyone's changing routine, like bua ji's yoga, vanshika aunty's dancing, etc etc... everything was superbbb...
this line literaly made me laugh -
<font color="#CC3300">dadaji: kia ho tm? Marasi ho? Gaviyee ho?? </font>
- typical old punjabi line mostly used by PAPA-dada type lol
<font color="#CC3300">Gulabi aankhein jo teri dekhi
<font color="#CC3300">virmanz room manvi waz standng on bed nd virat was throwng rose petal upon her nd singing</font>
<font size="4"> - </font>Saare hi maraasi bane hoye hain
the best thing after jeeman scenes in ur ff is - SONGSSS!!! the most attractive thing especially for me
Ok coming to Next chapter which just stole my HEART!!! awww update it was, especially the begining, where Mannu was feeling restless and Jeevika felt it frm distance... this was the USP of this show sometime Back... The TELEPATHYYY... and then Temple scene...shittt i miss those days but thanks to u for bringing those memories back.. though they haunt me but i loveee them.. :)
<font color="#CC3300">jeevika: mera dil bechain tha, i cud feel dt something is wrong wid my mannu toh mai agai, ni so pari na wo -</font> Awww the way she asked NAI SO PAA RI NA WOH
- it was just BANGGG ON!!!
as soon as manvi felt jeevikaz scent she moved closer to her nd put her
head on jeevikaz shoulder while holding virens hand nd smiled in her
sleep - AWWW :):):):)
the following scenerio was Awesome... the foursome were in same room for their Mannu :):) Sapno ki duniya :):):)
Manvi's prayers were so touchy...<font color="#CC3300">aek spcl prayer meri ek hazaro mai behna kelye jo meri bhagwan hn meri
maa hn, mai jb b ankhein band karon unka chehra dekho aur jisdin na dekh
paon wo mera akhiri din ho</font> - Typical Didi's Mannu :):)
<font color="#CC3300">pandit ji took da tilak nd was abt to put it on manviz forehead but
manvi at the time bend to take pandit ki ashirvad nd meanwhile by
mistake pandit ji put the tika on jeevikaz forehead</font> -<font size="5"> EPICCC
<font color="#CC3300">tjhay kia lagta hai ky mai ni janti ky teri har dua mai mai
manvi: bilkul waisay hi jaisay apki har
dua mai main hn.. (jeevika kissed manviz forehead) jeevika:meri har dua
mai ni har saans mai tu hai.. - </font>SUPERBBB... m falling shot of words now...
just wanna say I love u for this yushna... keep continuing...God Bless You!!! :):):):)
awwwie neha u r such a sweeheart<3<3 thankyew so much for your precious comments.. I truly enjoy readng ur feedback.. It feels gr8 dt sm1 likes your work... Sweety u r really sweet sweet.. Nd all deze scenes u mentioned r my favrtz r well... i knw dt its filmi but i love filmi stuff.. Keep commenting nd stay blessed.. <3 lots ov luv yush...:)