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Neha.K.

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Posted: 01 December 2012 at 3:30pm | IP Logged
First of all m extremely sorry for the late comment... kal kardi kardi reh gayi main comment..
anways m here now finally after reading two beautiful updates...
Actually dnt know where to start but lemme try...
Start frm Manvi being an apple of everyones eyes.. Just beautifully written..this is how our mannu is.. Didi's lil kiddo Mannu :):):):) as J said - "meri ankho ka tara aj sbkay jeenay ka sahara hai"
Lovedd how u showed everyone's changing routine, like bua ji's yoga, vanshika aunty's dancing, etc etc... everything was superbbb...

this line literaly made me laugh -
dadaji: kia ho tm? Marasi ho? Gaviyee ho??
ROFLROFLROFLROFL - typical old punjabi line mostly used by PAPA-dada type lolROFL

Gulabi aankhein jo teri dekhiROFLROFLROFL

virmanz room manvi waz standng on bed nd virat was throwng rose petal upon her nd singingROFLROFL - Saare hi maraasi bane hoye hainROFLROFLROFL LOVEDDD Ittt...
the best thing after jeeman scenes in ur ff is - SONGSSS!!! the most attractive thing especially for meLOL...

Ok coming to Next chapter which just stole my HEART!!! awww update it was, especially the begining, where Mannu was feeling restless and Jeevika felt it frm distance... this was the USP of this show sometime Back... The TELEPATHYYY... and then Temple scene...shittt i miss those days but thanks to u for bringing those memories back.. though they haunt me but i loveee them.. :)

jeevika: mera dil bechain tha, i cud feel dt something is wrong wid my mannu toh mai agai, ni so pari na wo - Awww the way she asked NAI SO PAA RI NA WOH - it was just BANGGG ON!!!


as soon as manvi felt jeevikaz scent she moved closer to her nd put her head on jeevikaz shoulder while holding virens hand nd smiled in her sleep - AWWW :):):):)

the following scenerio was Awesome... the foursome were in same room for their Mannu :):) Sapno ki duniya :):):)

Manvi's prayers were so touchy...aek spcl prayer meri ek hazaro mai behna kelye jo meri bhagwan hn meri maa hn, mai jb b ankhein band karon unka chehra dekho aur jisdin na dekh paon wo mera akhiri din ho - Typical Didi's Mannu :):)

pandit ji took da tilak nd was abt to put it on manviz forehead but manvi at the time bend to take pandit ki ashirvad nd meanwhile by mistake pandit ji put the tika on jeevikaz forehead - EPICCCHeartHeartHeart

tjhay kia lagta hai ky mai ni janti ky teri har dua mai mai hn..
 manvi: bilkul waisay hi jaisay apki har dua mai main hn.. (jeevika kissed manviz forehead) jeevika:meri har dua mai ni har saans mai tu hai.. -
SUPERBBB... m falling shot of words now...

just wanna say I love u for this yushna... keep continuing...God Bless You!!! :):):):)

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Posted: 02 December 2012 at 7:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by deepika03

nice...bt kch zyada hi filmy ho gya wo prayer scene lolz...im totally luking 4wd to virman romance...hope u wl gv lots of it n this time widout virika's interference puhleeze!!!
hey deepika sweety thankyew for commenting, nd yup it was filmi but dtz what i write nd love filmi stuff.. Ill keep ur request in mind.. Bless yew..:)

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Posted: 02 December 2012 at 11:10am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Neha.K.

<font color="#000066" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif" size="4">First of all m extremely sorry for the late comment... kal kardi kardi reh gayi main comment..
anways m here now finally after reading two beautiful updates...
Actually dnt know where to start but lemme try...
Start frm Manvi being an apple of everyones eyes.. Just beautifully written..this is how our mannu is.. Didi's lil kiddo Mannu :):):):) as J said - <font color="#CC3300">"meri ankho ka tara aj sbkay jeenay ka sahara hai"</font>
Lovedd how u showed everyone's changing routine, like bua ji's yoga, vanshika aunty's dancing, etc etc... everything was superbbb...

this line literaly made me laugh -
<font color="#CC3300">dadaji: kia ho tm? Marasi ho? Gaviyee ho?? </font>
ROFL - typical old punjabi line mostly used by PAPA-dada type lolROFL

<font color="#CC3300">Gulabi aankhein jo teri dekhiROFLROFLROFL</font>

<font color="#CC3300">virmanz room manvi waz standng on bed nd virat was throwng rose petal upon her nd singing</font>ROFLROFL<font size="4"> - </font>Saare hi maraasi bane hoye hainROFLROFLROFL LOVEDDD Ittt...
the best thing after jeeman scenes in ur ff is - SONGSSS!!! the most attractive thing especially for meLOL...

Ok coming to Next chapter which just stole my HEART!!! awww update it was, especially the begining, where Mannu was feeling restless and Jeevika felt it frm distance... this was the USP of this show sometime Back... The TELEPATHYYY... and then Temple scene...shittt i miss those days but thanks to u for bringing those memories back.. though they haunt me but i loveee them.. :)

<font color="#CC3300">jeevika: mera dil bechain tha, i cud feel dt something is wrong wid my mannu toh mai agai, ni so pari na wo -</font> Awww the way she asked NAI SO PAA RI NA WOH - it was just BANGGG ON!!!


as soon as manvi felt jeevikaz scent she moved closer to her nd put her
head on jeevikaz shoulder while holding virens hand nd smiled in her
sleep - AWWW :):):):)

the following scenerio was Awesome... the foursome were in same room for their Mannu :):) Sapno ki duniya :):):)

Manvi's prayers were so touchy...<font color="#CC3300">aek spcl prayer meri ek hazaro mai behna kelye jo meri bhagwan hn meri
maa hn, mai jb b ankhein band karon unka chehra dekho aur jisdin na dekh
paon wo mera akhiri din ho</font> - Typical Didi's Mannu :):)

<font color="#CC3300">pandit ji took da tilak nd was abt to put it on manviz forehead but
manvi at the time bend to take pandit ki ashirvad nd meanwhile by
mistake pandit ji put the tika on jeevikaz forehead</font> -<font size="5"> EPICCCHeartHeartHeart</font>

<font color="#CC3300">tjhay kia lagta hai ky mai ni janti ky teri har dua mai mai
hn..
manvi: bilkul waisay hi jaisay apki har
dua mai main hn.. (jeevika kissed manviz forehead) jeevika:meri har dua
mai ni har saans mai tu hai.. - </font>SUPERBBB... m falling shot of words now...

just wanna say I love u for this yushna... keep continuing...God Bless You!!! :):):):)
</font>
awwwie neha u r such a sweeheart<3<3 thankyew so much for your precious comments.. I truly enjoy readng ur feedback.. It feels gr8 dt sm1 likes your work... Sweety u r really sweet sweet.. Nd all deze scenes u mentioned r my favrtz r well... i knw dt its filmi but i love filmi stuff.. Keep commenting nd stay blessed.. <3 lots ov luv yush...:)

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Posted: 02 December 2012 at 4:59pm | IP Logged
jus read lst two commnts here so diffrent
on one scene two absltly difrnt comnts - pryr scene. 1 is doin LOLZ n otherz syin EPIC hahaa
mus sy uve wndrful redrs :p
 i gree wid neha.. updt ws truly outa wrds spcly Prayr scene:-)
hpe nthin bad hppns..m scared
do cnt soon
~sonal~

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Posted: 02 December 2012 at 8:36pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Hello-hi-by-by

jus read lst two commnts here so diffrent
on one scene two absltly difrnt comnts - pryr scene. 1 is doin LOLZ n otherz syin EPIC hahaa
mus sy uve wndrful redrs :p
i gree wid neha.. updt ws truly outa wrds spcly Prayr scene:-)
hpe nthin bad hppns..m scared
do cnt soon
~sonal~
hahahaha sonal darling firstly thankyew so much and 2cndly sbki apni apni choice hoti hai.. Cnt sy nythng.. Indeed i hav wonderful readers:p nd finally apka comment agaya nd i am glad u like it.. <3<3 dnt be scared read on ur own risk :p update will be soon.. <3

Edited by yushna - 02 December 2012 at 8:37pm

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 5:46am | IP Logged
Eagerly waiting 
continue soon...

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 7:44am | IP Logged
Plz cont soon...

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 3:26pm | IP Logged
plz update asap...

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