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Nice update. Loved this part. Continue soon.

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awesome yaar

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Just read all of your updates and all I can say is wow seriously Just loved it continue soon

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Liked it so much dear
Awww so sweet and cute update
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thankyew all 4 da appreciation .. <3 u all r lovely ppl... Here da part all w8ng 4 enjoy nd keep commentng nd lykng ma work... Nd ya guyz pm z difficult..:( sorri ... Ff ehmmbh :virika virman "life as we knw it"CHAPTER 8.. Recap: manviz alergy nd roka started (scene starts wid virika nd virmaan eye lock) manvi: haan toh chep pati dev ma kaisi lag rai hn?? (virat smiled "thora mazak toh bnta hi ha mrs wud b virat vadera") virat: bhabi to by God bht beautifull lag rai hn... Ku bhai?... (manvi thnkng: oh toh mr vadera smartness ahan par ma b mrs vadera bnay wali hn chep ji keep dt in mind) viren: aray bhai tu mannu pay dehan day na jeevika ki tareef karnay keliye main hn na... Virat: jaleousy bhai? Oho par kiya kia jasakta hai jo cheez tareef laik hai ucki tareef toh karni parti hai , bhabi u luk smashing... (Jeevika blushing) jeevika: thankyew devar ji... Manvi: chep ji dosro ka haq marna chordo apnay haq pay claim karo lawyer hotay vay lawyer giri ni ati tmay... (virat leened closer to manviz face nd whisper manvi moved a little back) virat: apko bara law pata hai?? Manvi: apnay romantic panay pay control karo chep pati aur btao hw i am lukng.? .. Virat: sach kaho ya jhoot?... Manvi: chalo jhoot hi kehdo par kuj bako... Virat:oky toh tm bht bht buri lag rai ho.. (manvi blushingly smiled) manvi: aur tm b kuj kum ni lag rahay... Viren: oyee hoyee chep ji nd sherni ji kia commentng shmntng horai hai (jeevika smiled nd virman lukd down embaraced) virat:bhai meri tang khenchna band karo aur btao bhabi kaisi lag rai hn?? (viren lukd at jeevika) viren: fm ji toh roz hi sundar lagti hn... Manvi: wah jiju deko chep yeh hoti ha tareef ayee hayee nazar na lagay... (viren jeevika blushed) viren: waisay sali ji u r quite a beauty too... Manvi: thank u thank u jiju ap b dashing lag rahay hn...(wid dt virman nd virika smiled nd dadaji announced) dadaji: mohrat ka tym hogya hai bheenji aye rasam shuruh kartay hn... Beeji: ji vadera sahab.. Pinki thali pakra (wid dz beeji took da thal to virika nd does da aarti first dn put da tilak on virens forehead nd gave him shagun giftz nd dn did same wid virman put da tilak on viratz forhead dn gave him giftz dn vanshika came wid da thal nd wz abt to do da tilak to jeevika but stopped) vanshika: swamini didi viren ko bachpan say apnay pala hai isliye jeevika apki baho hoi islye ucka tilak karna apka haq hai main manvi ka karon gi akhir indono ki bhi do do saasein hn... (wid dat she handed da thaal to swamini nd swamini did da tilak ov jeevika nd gave her gifts dn handed da thal to vanshika who did da arti nd tilak to manvi nd gave her giftz, manvi thought dt hw pure vanshika aunty wz so sweet so she got up nd hugged vanshika infront ov everybody.. Viren smiled nd lukd to virat who wz touched wid mannu gesture nd wz lukng towardz mannu nd hz maa...) manvi: (while hugging) aunty ap bht achi hn... (vanshika wz touched nd attached to manvi 4rm da tym she came vanshika thought dt she got a daughter) vanshika: aunty ni bacha maa bolo.. (manvi wid teary voice) manvi: aek maa ki kami ti eb apko mil kay wo b puri hogai (nd dy hugged again virat wz smiling "sach bhai u were ryt mannu bht achi hai da way she z attached to every1 i hope ma ucko hmesha khush rakho") (dn virika went to dadaji took hz blessingz dn to every elder) swamini: sach beeji aj hum bht khush hain aj say apki dono betian humari hoi... Beeji: aur apkay dono betay humary... Pinki: hayee eb rasmein toh hogai eb kuj gana bajana b hoga ky ni.. (beeji glared to pinki who got scared nd lukd down) dadaji: ku ni hoga zaror hoga akhir aj humaray 2no poton ka roka jo ho (he came to viren nd virat nd put hz 1 arm around viren nd da other around virat) par nachay ga kaun... Kadambari: baujii devar ka roka hai toh nachnay ka pehla haq bhabi ka hona chai ku jeevika apni behn keliye nacho gi na?.. Jeevika: ji main?? Par main... Dadaji: par var kuj ni jao jeevika aur shuruh hojao (jeevika went infront of every1 nd lukng down "main kia karo kis ganay pay nachon" dn a song hit her.. Here viren wz tense bcz he thought wt wud jeevika do) virat to viren: bhai sambhalo dnt get faint... Viren to virat: bhai chup kr meri aur band na baja... Manvi: yeh mogambo mujy nachnay ko keh daita eb dii kia karein gi (virman nd viren lukd at eachodr tense just dn da music start nd dy lukd at front virman viren shocked) (jeevika singing nd dancing) jeevika: lo chali main... Lo chali main apnay devar ki barat lay kay lo chali main (she went to virat nd took hz hand nd make him stand behind her) na band baja na hi barati khushiyo ki saugat lay ky lo chali main... ( manviz mouth wz open bt viren smiled "wow u dance reall well") jeevika: devar dulha bana.. (she imitates ov a sehra on viratz head) sar pay sehra saja, bhabi bankay aj baliya laiti hai... (dn she went to manvi grabbed her hand nd took her to da centre nd make her stand near virat just inches away) prem ki galian khilay pal pal khushi milein (she hugged manvi) sachay maan say aj duaein daiti hai.. (dn she went to viren nd stand wid him actng her self as a hoarse) ghoray pay char kay chala haan banka apni dulhan ko milnay lo chali main... (dn manvi cudnt control she grabbed virats hand nd went infront ov virika) virman: waha waha raam ji hmmm jodi kia bnai... Hmmm jiju aur di di ko hmmm badhai ho badhai (dn virman grabbed virika nd took dm in centre nd danced virika were lukng at eachodr while dancing so wz virman nd smilng all were enjoyn) pinki nd kadambari: sb rasmo say bni ha jag main dil say dil ki sagai... Jeevika again: kal tak ti ma naii aj bani ma bari kal tak ghar ki bahu ti aj hn jaithani.. (she showed manvi fake anger nd jerked her) hukum chalao gi main, ankh dikhao gi main sehmi khari rahay gi meri devrani hazr sapnay palko main apni dewani lay kay chali lo chali main ( all were dancing enjoyn virika virman wz just lukng at eachodr) virika: tu hi tu hai tu hi tu hai jeenay ki wja... Virman:hua kia hua kia hua... (jeevika: viren ji ap sachmain bht achay hn... Viren:jeevika dnt wri main hmesha tmay aur mannu ko khush rakho ga.. Virat: yeh kia ho raha hai par jo b hai acha hai mannu sach aek nai hawa ki taran meri dunia main ai hai.. Manvi: manvi tu us chep ko yun dekhna band kar warna kahi meri ankho say meri dil ki beatz na dikh jaein par thankyew bhagvan ji 4 keeping me nd ma dii togeather nd happy nd givng jiju nd chep yeh kia horaha ha mujy) "when destiny play cardz love enterz lyf dt wz da case wid vaderaz nd virika nd virman " (the end so enjoy guyz nd do comment too luv ya all next update in da morng) precap: karwa chauth nd virika virman first mid nyt walk... <3 yush here Smile

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Wow another update

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Awesome. .waiting 4 karwa chauth

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wow both of da updates r beautiful

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