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thankyew guys for commenting, nd i am sorry for updating late.. Buddies dre z a question nd i want a sacha wala ansr, are u all liking my story?? Ff ehmmbh:virman virika 'life as we knw it' CHAPTER 46... Recap: virman virika wedding night:p... (scene starts with viren and jeevikaz room, where jeevika was sleeping while virens arm was on jeevikaz waist, nd jeevika wz holding virens hand tightly..suddenly jeevikaz sleep wz disturbed wen she thought of the previous day incident where she saw manvi gng away from her nd suddenly she got up wid a jerk nd she sat up lukng here and dre, jeevika was sweating badly thinkng 'meri mannu, hey bhagwan meri mannu mujhsy dur ni ja sakti, soch kay bhi saans ni ati plz meri jaan ko mujhsy dur mat karna' jeevika took a tissue paper and wiped her sweat remembering virens words 'jeevika eb sb tek ha, humari bachi tek hai eb kuj ni hoga mai usay kuj ni honay du ga relax eb koi humari mannu ko humsay dur ni karpaye ga' jeevika nodded her head nd lukd towardz her left side where viren wz sleeping peacefully, instantly a smile took over jeevikaz face nd wen she remembered her suhaagraat , jeevika blushed... Viren slightly made an irritated face as da sun rays hit his charming face jeevika smiled and dn bend towardz viren blocking da sun rays and dn smiled naughtily , jeevika again moved aside nd viren got irritated with da rays nd made faces, jeevika cudnt control her smile, she did da same thng twice, thrice nd dn thought it was enough, jeevika was abt to get up wen viren pulled jeevika towardz him, nd jeevika hit his chest, viren smiled givng 'yeh kia horaha tha' look nd jeevika gave 'mainay kuj ni kia luk' jeevika tried to move but viren tighten his grip) viren:yeh kia horaha tha jeevika??? (he asked smiling)      jeevika:mainay kuj ni kia viren ji... (jeevika said feelng shy)     viren:mujy sb pata hai fm ji tang kr ri ti na ap mujy? Raat ky badlay lay rahay ti? Maza araha tha apko?? (jeevika blushed hard but smiled) jeevika:viren ji ap b na kaisi batein kar rahay hn...chaliye hatiyee mujy janay dijay mujy nahana hai phr mannu ko bhi uthana hai...chaliye choriyee mujy... (viren got up from da bed and took jeevika into his arms nd kissed her cheek jeevika eyes got widened)    viren:jeevika yar tm b na mujy toh distrb kia hi nd nw u want to distrb my daughter noway.. Usay sonay do jo raat bhar ni soya ho:p (jeevika cudnt beleived nd hit her head blushngly) viren:aur jaha tk rai nahanay ki baat aoo na akhatay nahatay hn... :p            jeevika:tauba ho viren ji suba suba ap pay shaitan savar hai, besharam mat bniye aur mujy neechay utariye... (viren bit his lips nd shook hs head nd took jeevika into da washroom nd make her stand turned her around nd hugged her from da back, dn turned da shower on) BG MALE: GOONJI HAI HAR DISHAAA, GAA RAI HAI HAR HAWAAA, SUN RAHA HAI JISAY YEH GAGAN... (viren nuzzeled jeevikaz neck nd placed a kiss dre, jeevika tighten her grip on hs hand ) AGAI TUM KAREEB, JAAG UTHA HAI NASEEB BG FEMALE: HON MAI ANJANI NAJANI KIA KEHTI HAI DHARKAN...        VIRIKA:TUMSAY KAHEIN YA HUM NA KAHEIN ( Jeevika turned around nd viren placed a soft kiss on her lips dn dy hugged happily nd tightly)     (here virat nd manvi wz sleeping while huggng eachodr, a sweet smile was on both dre faces like dy were contended... Manvi moved nd hid her face in viratz neck nd virat felt a sudden current nd opened his eyes nd luk at da beautiful creature sleeping in his arms 'wow suba ka har suraj jaisay tum , raat ka har chand jaisay tum, zindagi tumsay shuruh aur tumhi pay khatam manvi wah beta virat tu toh shair bngaya kia shairi ki hai' wid dt virat kissed manviz forehead, dn he kissed her cheek dn virat smiled nd kissed her chin, virat was about to kiss manviz lips but b4 dt manvi opened her eyes nd smiled) BG MALE:HAR SUBA JAISAY TUMMM (VIRAT CARESD MANVIZ FACE ND SHE SMILED HUGGNG HIM TIGHT) MAIN TOH HN JAISAY GOOM , ANKHO MAI GHUL GAYA IK SAPNA , CHAHAY DEKO KAHIN , CHAHAY SOCHO KABI, YADOON KY RANGO SAY NIKHRI HO JAISAY ZINDAGI... (manvi separated from da hug nd sit lukng at virat dn suddenly thnkng ov previous day incident but dn lukd at virat nd smiled..) (virat knew dt manvi was still scared   but he didnt touched da topic as he want manvi to forget it quick, nd smiled) (manvi to change the mood threw her arms around virat neck nd virat got shocked 'sherni ki rooh agai hai wapis lagta hai') manvi:hw romantic chep, suba suba agr mujy aisay uthao gay na toh mujy toh kehna paray ga na ky mera virat no1 hai... Virat:meri jaan wo toh mai hn (virat moved his hand nd hold manviz waist) virat:aur manvi mai yeh tmara chera apni har raat ky end pay aur har suba ki shurwat ky sath dekhna chahta hn (manviz eyes got tears..nd she kissed virat on his nose)      manvi: raat aur suba ki kia baat kartay ho chep eb mera chehra toh tmay har second nazar aye ga vada hai mrs.manvi virat singh vadera ka... (virat smiled whole heartedly listeng to manvi wen she said mrs manvi virat singh vadera 'yes yes yes she is mine, meri jungli sherni wife, she is only mine' virat touched his head with manvi nd dy smiled) virat:chalo chalo morning romance pay break mai tyar hokay ata hn...               manvi:chep kay chep hi rehna tum... Virat:eb mainay kia kiya...                  manvi:chup raho... (virat put his finger on his mouth nd manvi laughed) manvi:daro mat chep pati dev.. shadi ky baad Rule no1 wife first hmesha yad rakhna ok.. (virat nodded obidiently)   manvi:gud.. Mai vadera baho hn, pehlay mai tyar hokay ati hn phr tm .. (wid dt manvi hurried towardz da washroom nd virat laughed 'em such a manvi ka ghulam but em happy' here manvi in washroom came infront of da big mirror nd saw flashes of da previous night, da torture upon her, da car cuming towardz her she closed her eyes nd put her palms on her mouth nd sobbed, dn she saw da good side wen she waz huggng jeevika, viren nd virat da moments she spend wid dii, jiju nd virat... Nd thought 'manvi tujhay mazbot hona paray ga tu dii jiju aur virat ky samnay apna darr, apna dard ni dikha sakti warna yeh log kbi ic cheez say bahar ni aein gay, be strong.. Yes i hav to be' she wiped her tears nd splash water on her face., took bath nd came outside in a bathrobe) (virat lukd at her nd was lost so sexy, wet hairs 'omg em drooling' ) virat:o o o o sm1nz wife lukng hot...:p        manvi:sm1nz wife want sm1nz husband look hot aswell (she winked at virat) virat:mai abi ata hon.. (virat hurriedly went in da washroom to take bath) (here viren was sitting on bed nd lukng at jeevika while jeevika was selecting a dress for her, she wz also in her bathrobe, with wet hairs but viren was dressed in white t shirt nd blue jeans)   jeevika:samjh ni araha kia pehno, mannu hoti toh woh help kardaiti (she lukd towardz viren who wz lost nd shook her head) agr romance ka bhooth utr gaya ho toh ap meri madad kardaein gay... (viren got up immediately nd stood wid jeevika) viren:kia help chai??     jeevika:green pehno ya maroon, kia pehno btaye na...       viren:(smiled naughtily nd started to play wid jeevikaz hair) mujy kapray pehnanay ni atay jeevika bs utarnay atay hn...        (jeevika mouth opened ) jeevika:viren ji plz sharam kijay kia hogya ha apko, plz meri madad kijay...   (viren lukd at jeevika smilng)   viren:tek ha mai madad karta hn par badlay mai mujy kia milay ga...      jeevika:wakeel hokay rishwat, btao dadaji ko?       viren:dhamka rai ho.? Tek hai phr khud socho mai toh chala... (jeevika hold his hand ) jeevika:ni ni viren ji plz mai late hojaon gi help kariye na apko jo chai wo du gi...    (viren got excited nd showed jeevika his cheek) viren:aek kiss..:p    (jeevika blushed but dn kissed viren)   viren:maroon churidar mai tm aek dum meri bachi ki maa lago gi.. (both ov dm laughed thnkng abt dre manvi) (jeevika got dressed up done wid makeup weared her mangulsutr, put sindoor , viren showed a thums up to her) jeevika:eb mai mannu ko dekh ky ati hn...   viren:mai b chalta hn (he forward his hand nd jeevika smilngly took it) (here virat came out ov da washroom wearing a black t shirt nd blue jeans dryng his hairs wen lukd at manvi nd got shocked) the end guys do comment plz plz plz.. Next part may be at eveng... Precap:more romance nd fun... (if ny ov u wanna giv ny idea u cn.. Wt u wana c ill surly keep ur views in mind..) yush updatng<3 Smile

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 4:34pm | IP Logged
Awesome update loved it continue soon

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 5:44pm | IP Logged
waooo maja hi aa gya.. wht an updt yar
nd ofcrs v al r enjoyin n lovin ur ff.. keep it up

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Posted: 18 November 2012 at 11:36pm | IP Logged
very nice...loved virika...

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 4:46am | IP Logged
heya guyz update will be late as i updated early in da mrng.. U hav to w8 4 da odr update.. Stay blessed..:)

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 7:04am | IP Logged
superb amazing romantic... thanks for the update i really liked it... continue soon and update soonn

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 7:43am | IP Logged
thankyew nish dear... Em gng to update late at nyt... Do like and comment..:) nd i am happy u liked it.. If u wanna giv ny suggestions abt what u want, u cn giv.. Ill surly add up..

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Posted: 19 November 2012 at 7:51am | IP Logged
babe I loved it,
I think what u shud do Is space the word out more I mean in like paragraphs, cause there all cramped up and I sometimes forget what line im on loool
sorry if u feel offended I didnt mea. it.
xxx

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