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Jannat94

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sweet and cute update
Vadhera are too gud with them
Update Soon

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 6:48am | IP Logged
it was awesome...when u updating next???

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Posted: 21 September 2012 at 6:57am | IP Logged
Cute update. Loved this part. Last part is awesome. Continue soon.

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very nice update...
continue soon n plz add more if virika scenes..

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i thoroughly love what you've written

and the title is after i one of my fav movies

so love it!!

pm me when you update next

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:) thankyew all 4 da beautiful commentz its gud dt u all r lykng ma ff.. Guyz pmz r difficult take tym bt 4 u all em gna try it soon... 4 nw enjoy all luv u all 4 encouragement..<3 ff: viraman virika "life as we knw it" recap: manvi met vaderaz nd vaderaz r obliged wid da two new wud be bahuz ...        (scene start wid da chaudaryz nd vaderaz sittng around da dinning table 4 breakfast jeeman sittng togeather nd so are viren nd virat but dy r sittng accross eachodr virman front ov eacodr nd virika infrnt of each odr) manvi to herself:eb yeh mogambo order karbi day meray pait ma toh chuhay tennis khel rahay hn... (virat heard he blabbering) virat: kuch kaha tmnay??... Manvi: ni ni main kia keh sakti hn... Dadaji: 8 bj gaye naishta shuruh kia jaye... Manvi: shukar hai... Jeevika: mannu chup chap naishta kar... (here viren wz making hz spoon full of pasta bt stopped mid way bcz hz gaze stop at da beautiful creature infront ov him jeevika who wz making mannuz plate... Jeevika also looked at viren find him staring at her nd dy were stuck in da eye lock) "background music" male:ky dil seenay main tha magar ky dharka hi nai yeh teri ahetein isko day gai dharkan... Female: ky jbsay deka hai tjhay yeh nazrein hat ti ni ky dil main horai ik ajab c hal chal... Male: tu hi tu hai tu hi tu jeenay ki adaa.. Female:tu hi tu hai tu hi tu ha saanso ki wja... (deze lyrics r mine sm ov it of virika song zindagi ma aj lamhay) (virat nd manvi who noticed dz togeather cleared derez throatz) virman: ehum ehum... (virika came out ov da moment nd both of dm blushed lukng here nd dre) manvi: haan diii yeh kia ho raha tha? Nain mataka???... Jeevika: aek dun gi tjhay chup chap khana kha smjhi... Virat: pehlay kha lo bhai phr carry karna wid da sweet eyelocks... Viren: khanay py dehan day bhai humpay ni... (here virman exchanged smiled nd manvi acted as if holding her hand as mb nd lukd at virat who smiled noddingly) jeevika: mannu tera mobile kidhar hai... (all lukd towardz jeeman nd virat thought "eb kia karo gi bandriya eb maza aye ga") manvi: wo kia ha na dii main bahar ti mera pair phisla aur mb sarak pay gir gaya nd toot gaya virat b wahan pay tha usnay kaha koi baat ni wo mujy naya laa day ga.. Ku virat?? (manvi winked at virat nd viren also saw dz) virat: ji bhabi aisa hi howa...viren: sach main aisa hi howa bhai... Virat: ji bhai ap plz breakfast khayee... Swamini: jeevika, manvi tm dono yeh gravy taste karo bht tasty hai... (jeeman nodded nd poured da gravy in dre bowl nd manvi took a spoon ov da gravy nd taste it nd soon as she gulped it down she started coughng hard nd wz nt able to breath properly) jeevika: mannu kia how? (patted manvi back) mannu tu tek ha na... (all panicked viren nd virat wid vanshika stood 4rm dre seat nd went near manvi...) viren: mannu kia howa are u ok... Virat panickng: wtz rong.,. Vanshika: beta kia howaa?.. Manvi: diii diii ... (she cudnt utter a word just breathng heavily nd coughng all shockd swamini dada ji nd da odr chaudary were tense dn jeeka took da bowl nd smelled it nd face expression dropping) jeevika: beeji vinegar (beeji stood 4rm da seat nd came to manvi wid pinki madan nd dabbu all panicked) jeevika: mannu relax ... Dabbu upar meray bag ma medicine ha jakay jaldi lay kay aaa... (Dabbu ran nd came back wid da medicine nd gave it to jeevika, jeevika poured da syrup in water nd make manvi drink it nd aftr 5 mintz she wz back to normal all relaxed) jeevika: i am sorry every1 wo kia hai na mannu ko vinegar sy alergy hai... Dadaji: manvi beta ab tm tek ho na? (manvi nodded still pantng a little bit) swamini: thank God hum toh dar hi gaye thay... Vanshika: ji didi nd jeevika tmay humay pehlay bta daina chai tha na... Khair eb agay sy hum khyal rakhein gay... Swamini: humara naishta hogya shaam ky functn ki tyari b karni ha bhabi kadambari nd beeji ap aye... (all left da dinning table except b.beeji dabbu virika nd virman) viren: oh God mannu u scared da hell out ov us... Manvi: sorry jiju logo ki jan nikalna meri buri adat hai sory.. Nd chep tm apni shakal deko dnt wri srf alergy hai mari ni hn aur marun gi b ni abi tmari lyf ka band bjana ha meray future chep hubby... Jeevika: chup kar mannu warna aek du gi tjhay ... (nd dn she went to virat) virat ji aj tk meri mannu ki har zimaydari meri ti par aj say apki hai yeh li jay (she handed da medicine to virat) isko hmesha apnay sth rakhi jaga ku kay kbi b zarorat par sakti hai... Ap rakhein gay na meri mannu ka khyal virat: ji bhabi ap fikar mat ki jay main vada karta hn ky apki is pagal behn ka pura khyal rakho ga... Viren: haan fm ji dnt wri hum sb haein dnt wri... (jeevika had tearz dn mannu came nd hugged her 4rm behind) manvi: fm ji fm ji uff tauba dii ap thakti ni hn tensn lay lay kay... B.beeji: chup kar chudail tensn daina tera kaam hai par jinta mat kar ma abi marnay wali ni hn... Manvi: b.beeji ticket toh apko katwani paray gi tbi toh wo apkay sonay ky kangan ma harpo gi... Jeevika: mannu... Manvi: kia mannu dii apni tape ko mannu pay arao mat jb deko mannu mannu mannu eb ap viren ji viren ji karo mannu manu ni... (jeevika blushed nd virat nd viren smiled upon seeing mannuz tactics) b.beeji: besharam chudail tu mujy bta aj ma pink suit ky sath kaun c jewellery pehno... Manvi: b.beeji ap pink ni pehn ri ku ky pink ma pehn ri hn ku jy main dulhan hn... B.beeji: main toh pink hi pehno gi... Manvi: toh phr ap hi mrs virat vadera bnjao... (wid dt she ran) b.beeji: shaitan kahi ki... (viren patted viratz shouldes nd laughed) virat: bhabi yeh shuruh say aisi hai ya demag pay chot lag gai ti.. (jeevika smiled) jeevika: ni devar ji shuruh say yeh default hai... (wid dt dy all laughed thnkng mannu wz really a kid) (scene changes da vaderaz were down in da hall welcumng da guests nd viren nd virat both lukng 4 jeeman) viren: bhai zada besabra mat ho mannu ati hi hogi... Virat: exactly bhai same goes 4 yew bhabi ajaein gi control... Viren:oh toh mr.vadera badmashi haan wo b apnay baray bhai kay sath... Dnt be such a lawyer... Virat: i am nt u r being a detactive .. Plz bhai.. Let me wait 4 bandriya i wanna c woh kaisi lag ri hai (viren astonished wid virat behaviour nd smiled nd put hz arm on hz shoulder) viren: so u r already attatched to mine nd jeevikaz daughter? Haan?... Virat: bhai plz stop teasng... Viren: em so happy 4 u bhai (wid dt dy both hugged) (scene changed to upstairz where pinki madan beeji were w8ng 4 jeeman dabbu nd b.beeji were dowstairz nd dn two angelz came out ov da room omg both lukng just wow manvi wz wearing light pink anarkali frock long pearl earingz nd makeup nd jeevika wz wearing maroon anarkali wid lon bunday nd lukng beautiful) pinki: hayeee meri bachian nazar na lagay ... Beeji: sach main bht pyari lag ri ho tm dono par itna tym neechay sb intezar kar rahay hn... Manvi: wo kia ha na beeji us nikamay makeup artist ny itna wakt lagaya aur waisay b hum dulhan hn intezar toh karwaein gi na.. Beeji: manvi bs aek din keliye jeevika jaisa bartao kar meri bachi... Manvi: matlb sharmao aur viren ji ky khyalo ma kho jaon... Jeevika: aek paray gi mannu chup krja... Beeji: isay koi umeed ni ha eb rab hi sambhalay sb khair chalo neechay... (wid dt dy headed towardz dowstairz dn sm1 sed "hey luk i thnk dy r da brides" viren nd virat turned around nd were speechless to c da both angels in front ov dm both dre mouhs opened) swamini: viren virat plz mu band karlo humari bahon ko nazar na lagana... (virika lukd eachodr while jeevika wz heading down da stair: male: zindagi ma aj lamhay... Female: meri ankho ki toh manzil chehra hai tera) (virman lukd at eachodr too.. Manvi: wow chep toh ala lag raha hai gud gud... Virat: yeh bandriya itni adorable b lag sakti hai... Male: hua kia hua kia hua yeh pyar mujy b... Female:hua kia hua ki huaa) (dn vanshika nd swamini came nd took viren virat nd make dm sit on sofa nd beeji came wid jeevika nd manvi nd make dm sit opposite to their patnerz so it wz virika on left nd virman on right all were on da same sofa lukng at eachodr rest all were praisng da couples ) swamini: sach beeji dy lukng very beautiful.. Vanshika: ji beeji nazar na lagay thankyew itni pyari bchiyo keliye.. Beeji: aray ni swamini ji vanshika ji meray dono betay b kuj kum ni... (here virika nd virman were lukng at each odr) the end sorry guy next part will surly b roka nd jeevika dance ... Nd next part at nyt hopefully do comment nd giv feedbacks... Precap: virika virman roka rasam jeevika dance "lo chali main" nd karwa chauth ahead... Enjoy yushna here..<3 Smile

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Posted: 22 September 2012 at 5:36am | IP Logged
superb i just loved ur update plzzz continue soon

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simply amazing...such a superb update...
continue soon...

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