Fan Fictions

   

virika virman" life as we knw it" pt 81 pg 133 (Page 47)

Post Reply New Post

Page 47 of 137

Garimavirmanksg

Senior Member

Garimavirmanksg

Joined: 23 September 2012

Posts: 693

Posted: 11 November 2012 at 12:09pm | IP Logged
Great update do pm me whn update...

Dear Guest, Being an unregistered member you are missing out on participating in the lively discussions happening on the topic "virika virman" life as we knw it" pt 81 pg 133 (Page 47)" in Fan Fictions forum. In addition you lose out on the fun interactions with fellow members and other member exclusive features that India-Forums has to offer. Join India's most popular discussion portal on Indian Entertainment. It's FREE and registration is effortless so JOIN NOW!

Hello-hi-by-by

Senior Member

Hello-hi-by-by

Joined: 13 March 2012

Posts: 225

Posted: 12 November 2012 at 6:10pm | IP Logged
lovddd it.. n ya give sme rest to dm nd bring some romance now. bki tragdies baad me le ana..
tell u one mor thing dat u ve bcum to slow.. :( updte like b4 na...
newz thnxx.. keep cntinuin

~sonal~

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

arvijee

LV88

IF-Rockerz

LV88

Joined: 08 October 2012

Posts: 7073

Posted: 13 November 2012 at 12:45am | IP Logged
plz update the story soon.

yushna

Senior Member

yushna

Joined: 12 September 2012

Posts: 494

Posted: 15 November 2012 at 1:30am | IP Logged
thankyew so much buddies 4 cmntng, nd w8ng, 4 da new cmntrz i alwayz try to pm bt i cnt pm, nd i wrote dz chaptr b4 bt due to sm stupidity ov mine it got deleted so i have to ryt it again, i want alot ov cmntz as it motivates me to write more, sm 1 pmd me to add suhaag raat well described scenes so let me tell u dt i will giv alot ov lovy dovy romance, sweet scenes , romantic scenes to a limit but nt fishy fishy scenes bcz mujy aisay scenes likhtay way hasi ati hai so em sory.. Nw enough wid ma tawkng here it goes da tour to happiness enjoy nd giv feed back, i will luk 4rward 4 dt... Ff ehmmbh: virman virika 'life as we knw it' CHAPTER 44...   recap:manvi back in vadera house, jeevika nd everybody happy nd relaxed... (scene starts 4rm virman where virat opend da door)    virat:welcum to virat nd manvi paradise <3 (manvi came inside nd wz shocked as da room was in a mess)(virat also lukd towardz da mess nd bit his lips)   manvi:paradise is it???                   virat:actualyyy (virat also came inside nd closed da door)    manvi:virat yeh sb kia hai??     virat:wohhh (he lukd around)        manvi:woh kia???      virat:(let his breath out nd said) i got panicked when i came to knw dt u got kidnappd, nai seh paya mai... Nd...    manvi:nd??tmnay apna gusa kamray pay nikal dia?? Ryt??        virat:hmmm mujy gusa araha tha us manan pay, ucki himat kaisay hoi... (manvi went to da bed nd sat upon it nd started to cry) (virat got tensd nd went to sit beside her)   virat:heyy mannu luk here, i didnt mean to, mai tmay us incident ki yad ni dalana chahta tha, plz tm ro mat, dekho mai sb bardash kr sakta hn par apni jan apni zindagi ki ankho mai anso ni.. (manvi stood up lukng at virat nd wiped her tears , virat went to manvi nd stood infront of her) manvi:jo hona tha hogya virat, mai kbka bhool gai hn, mai yahan apnay ghar mai hn, apnay kamray mai hn, dii, jiju , tmaray sath, apnay shadi ki joray mai, mai bhula chuki hn sb, aur mai islye ni ro rai (nd she started cryng again)    virat:(got confused) toh ku ro rai ho??      manvi:deko yeh sb jo howa iski wja sy meri mehndi kharab hogai ha, aj humari wedng night hai, aur meri halat dekho.. (virat cudnt beleive 'hw cn u b so selfless manvi, apna dukh bhula ky u r tryng to make me smile') yeh dekho virat (manvi pointed towardz her face) mera makeup, meray baal, yahan tk ky mera bridal wear sb kharab hogyaa...(virat started to laugh loudly)   virat:manvi tm bhi na, tmay in sbki pari hai, watsoever meray bhai aur bhabi ki baby u luk amazng (manvi smiled lukng at virat)   manvi:bs yahi mai chati hn, tmari hasii, virat jo howa hogya na, eb bhula b do sb plz, meray lye plz.. I dnt want u to get into dz... (virat hugged manvi nd manvi huggd hm back tightly) (virat thnkng 'manvi i knw tm chahti ho ky mai in sbsay dur raho hn par sori meri jan , tmari kasam khai hai mainay, jb tk mai us manan sy tmharay har aek dukh ka, dard ka, takleef ka tmaray har ik ansoo ka hisab ni lay laita mai chain sy ni beth paon ga, wo manan pachtayee ga, par eb mai tmhay is sb sy dur rakhon ga tmay kuj ni hoga kbi ni') (virat separated 4rm da hug)   virat:chalo eb sojatay hn , tm thak gai ho na... (manvi opend her mouth in shock) manvi:so jatay hn? Aek bar dobara kaho? Tm pagal ho kiaa??     virat:tmay aram ki zarorat hai mrs sherni vadera...     manvi:aj humari suhagrat hai chep pati dev, suhag raat tmay smjh araha hai na suhag raat hai aj humari, aur tm sona chahtay ho... (virat laughed again 'puri ki puri sherni ha, meri sherni, aj jo huwa ucko bhula ky she want to enjoy our suhagrat')   virat:toh kia karein???     manvi: (again in shock) toh kia karein? Tm yeh mujh sy poch rahay ho ? Chep kahi kay, hw un romantic, mainay kia kia socha tha first night yeh hoga wo hoga, romantic mahol hoga kuj spcl hoga, mai hongi tm hogay, par sb miti mai mil gaya (manvi turned around in anger)    virat:(went to her nd held her shoulder)acha acha meri bhoki sherni naraz toh na ho, kuj karta hn mai, par kia kron??     manvi:kuj b, acha btao agr sb normal hota aj toh tm kia krtay aj meray lye, humaray lye (manvi winked at virat, nd virat smiled sheepishly) virat:kafi kuj karta :p     manvi:toh karo na, mai full time ready hn..:p..      virat:uskay lye tmay bahar jana hoga...    manvi:bahar? Par bahar ku? Aur agr bahr gai aur kici ny dekh lia toh??    virat:point! Toh phr mai surprise kaisay du ga? Jo mainay socha hai wo kaisay kron ga? (both started thnkng putng dre fingers on dre mindz , wen virat shouted)   virat:ideaaa    manvi:pagal ho? Kamlay hogye ho? Idea hai ya dhamaka, dara dita mainu, khair kia idea hai...          virat:washroom...    manvi:washroom virat:haan tm washroom mai jao tb tk mai sb ready krta hn...    manvi:pr mai washroom mai kia kro gi??     virat:dnt wri sweet heart, mai bathroom mai suhagrat mananay ka ni keh raha:p jzt w8 dre (wid dz virat pushed manvi into da washroom nd handed her a chips packet nd locked da door 4rm outside) chal beta chep lagja kaam par...                           (here virika were standng outside dre room wen viren lukd at jeevika nd saw dt her eyes were filled wid tears so he put hz hand on her shoulder nd jeevika hugged him) jeevika:aj agr meri mannu ko kuj hojata toh?viren ji mai mar jati, ucko dekh ky meri jan mai jan ai hai warna (viren wiped her tears)     viren:jeevika relax eb sb tek hai , eb kuj ni hoga, na mai eb meri baby sali ko kuj honay du ga, meri baby is fine, plz sb bhool jao nd welcum karo new life ko, khud kelye , meray lye nd mannu kelye.. (jeevika noded) jeevika:par pata ni viren ji mannu so b paye gi ky ni, bht dari v hogi na aur virat b toh pareshan hoga na.. (viren started to laugh madly nd jeevika got confused) jeevika:ap aisay paglo ki taran has ku rahay hn viren ji... Viren: hahahahahahahahaha ha hahahaha fm ji haso ni toh kia kron? Ap kaisi maa hn? Apni beti ko zara bhi ni janti? Meri mannu yeh jo b howa kb ka bhula chuki hogi, is wakt wo apni suhagraat enjoy kr rai hogi most probably meray bhai virat ny usay aram ka kaha hoga, par mannu being mannu aek aisi khushi hai jiskay agay saray ghum chotay hn, wo dono koi so vo ni rahy hongay, balkay mannu ky kehnay pay virat ku spcl plan kr raha hoga, i am a lawyer nd em dead sure hahahaha... (jeevika smiled) jeevika:ap meri mannu ko kitni achi taran jantay hn viren ji...    viren:firstly tmari ni humari mannu, nd 2cndly zindagi say b koi kbi anjan reh sakta ha, seriously mannu ni chahay gi ky koi ucki wja sy tensn mai aye so meri fm ji apko aj ki buri yado ko erase krna hoga ok (jeevika noded) viren:eb chalein andar (wid dt both steped towardz da door wen viren stoped jeevika) viren:aek mint aek mint, ruko zara yaha pay nd jb tk mai na kaho dnt move..(dn viren went to hz dresng table nd took powder nd came infront ov jeevika nd started to put da powder on da floor nd make a way , a path ov powder till dre bed, jeevika wz jzt confused) viren:wo kia hai na aj hum dono ka as mr nd mrs official vadera bnkay humari ic khubsurat dunia mai pehla kdam hai toh thora spcl toh hona hi chai na.. (jeevika just lukd at viren wid luv, wid dz viren stood wid jeevika nd held her hand in hz own hand ) viren:chalein... (nd dz started to walk leavng dre foot prints on da powder nd dn stood near da bed, viren took a picture ov dre foot prints nd dn went to close da door nd wen he wz cumng back, he slipped from da powder nd grabbed jeevika to while falling on bed, nw jeevika wz on top ov viren nd her hands were on hz heard) BG MALE: yeh dil seenay mai tha prrr, ky dharka hi ni thaaa, yeh teri ahetein isay day gay dharkan... (he kissed jeevikaz forehead whch made jeevika close her eyes nd break da eye contact nd started to get up but again fell on viren) BG FEMALE:ky murti hai yahi py, ku yeh ankho mai hai karwat, hoi mehsus pehli bar yeh uljahan... (viren finaly managed to get up nd dn he held hz hand whch jeevika took nd also stoop up) VIRIKA:tu hi tu hai, tu hi tu hai jeenay ki adaaa, tu hi tu hai tu hi tu hai sanso ki wjaaa...      viren:socha tha ky aek normal suhag raat hogi, u will be sittng wid da ghungat nd all dn mai aon ga ghungat uthao ga aus phr shuruh karo ga jo krna (suddenly he stopped realizng what he wz abt to say nd luk in opposite directn embaraced) mera matlb hai shuruh karo ga baatein krna... (jeevika wz red by nw, but she smiled dn said in a low voice) jeevika:eb b dair ni hoi viren ji, ap jo chahtay hn wo ho sakta hai... (viren got shocke 'lagta hai meri beti ka kuj zada asar hogya hai jeevika par,concentrate viren tu lawyer hai chor ni dar mat, take a deep breath ufff') (jeevika sat on bed wid ghungat nd viren smiled lukng at her dn he sat beside her ) viren:may i?? (viren tried to take off jeevika earings but cudnt , he tried atleast 10 times nd jeevika shooked her head smilngly) jeevika:viren ji ap lawyer hn jewelles ni:p ap rehnay dijay apsay ni hoga (jeevika wen to da dresng table nd took off her earng nd was abt to take ov her bangles when...)           (here manvi wz eatng chips nd movng here nd dree) manvi:virat tm aek numbr ky chep ho, koi suhag raat py itna w8 krata hai apni biwi ko wo b itni khubsurat biwi ko...    virat:manvi for da 50th tym chup hojao, sherni ki taran dharna band karo dn only i cn concentrate...     manvi:aisa kia kr rahay ho tm jo tmay itni concentratn ki zarorat hai:p       virat:zip up meri shernii... (after 15 mintz)   manvi:virat bs b karo, mai pak chuki hn yahan washroom mai, eb toh mujy sink ma tmari shakal dikh ri hai dho du tmay...        virat:meri jan darwaza khula hai ajao... (manvi opened da door nd shocked) the end guyz do cmnt plz nd next part soon kia pata aj raat ko hi) precap:more romance ahead..:p yush updatng..<3 Smile

The following 21 member(s) liked the above post:

kimm_8DOLLY_SHARMAchhanchanmaheermary9053..Lavi..Sameeha.Tackerxoxsusanxoxnishyrelansmileysmisweetdollashitaaasma1surbhi1994..ManoBilli..jia123sagar-GayathriK-LV88Syed695kulsum_virmanKanwal_chohanlove_never_dies

Niaksharma

IF-Sizzlerz

Niaksharma

Joined: 04 August 2012

Posts: 11066

Posted: 15 November 2012 at 1:38am | IP Logged
Beautiful...
Pls continue...

shonaten

Senior Member

shonaten

Joined: 19 October 2012

Posts: 628

Posted: 15 November 2012 at 3:45am | IP Logged
Continue soon

nishyrelan

Goldie

nishyrelan

Joined: 13 July 2012

Posts: 1941

Posted: 15 November 2012 at 6:19am | IP Logged
lovely update pls continue soon

LV88

IF-Rockerz

LV88

Joined: 08 October 2012

Posts: 7073

Posted: 15 November 2012 at 8:58am | IP Logged
awsome 

Post Reply New Post

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Topic Starter Replies Views Last Post
Virika FF:Married @ 18 #2 Ch.37 on Pg.83 New*10/7

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 87 88

shobrakapooor 698 41975 08 September 2014 at 8:27am
By Protego_Maxima
Virika Ke Pyaar Da Dhabba Virika OS

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 35 36

03Kamya 283 29767 21 May 2014 at 12:16am
By MyKryan
virman virika new ff excel college New Promo pg 31

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 32 33

NiShal4Life 256 26486 11 January 2014 at 5:25pm
By sumayyah1
FF | Life for Every Life CS upd pg14 21/6/13

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 21 22

CrazyBoy-.Hd.- 173 9552 09 August 2013 at 8:57am
By dprover
IPK:FF|Reel Life VS. Real Life|

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 20 21

-RKV- 161 7973 09 June 2013 at 2:27pm
By -RKV-

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category

Active Forums

Fan Fictions Topic Index

Limit search to this Forum only.

 

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.