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dat was a cute update, manvi is funny

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thankyew all again 4 da comments guyz em ovr da moon by all ov ur responces... Nd cravng 4 more luv u all.. U all r fab <3 so nw here it goes.. Enjoy... Ff ehmmbh: virika virman "life as we knw it" CHAPTER 4.. Recap: first meetng virika virman all seem happy...                                          in chandigardh: (viren nd vanshika sittng it wz mrng) viren: ma main apko bta ni sakta it wz hilarious apko mannu ko dekhna chai ta wo bht alag hai aek dum viratz perfect match manna paray ga bari maa choice too gud virat bht khush rahay ga ... Vanshika: dtz gud viren beta aur jeevika? Aur tm toh khush ho na? (viren blushed) viren: ma b khush hn ma jeevika sach ma bht simple nd beautiful hai nd da bond she share wid apki little daughter in law iz gr8 wo mannu ko apni beti manti hn nd main... Vanshika: aur tm? Tm b uckay sath attatch hogye so let me thnk agr wo tmari b beti hoi toh virat kia laga tmara? Son in law? (both laughed dz jeevika nd manvi really hav smthng spcl luk at ma both sun dy r smilng nd tawkng dre heart out vanshika thought) ab toh bai apni dono bahun sy milna hi paray ga... Viren: bs kuch hi ghanto main maa oh acha maa main abi aya (sayng so he straight went to viratz room who wz infront of da mirror getting ready) viren: aray wah bhai aek dum hero lag raha hai . Ku bhai mannu heroin ka w8ng sh8ng... Virat: (suddnly bend down on hz kneez infront of viren) bhai ji... Viren: ji virat ji... Virat: ma apkay pair parta hn mujy itna tease mat karo aur us bandriya mannu ky samnay toh bilkul ni nd waisay b jistaran bhai bhabi ka w8 kar rahay hn uci taran bhabi ka devar bhabi ki devrani ka kar rahax hn (wid dz both laughed loud) viren: chal uth dramay baaz abi aek din ka yeh asar hai wow toh puri zindagi ma kia hoga ? Mujy lagta hai ab asal ma drama king ko ucki drama queen mil gai... (b4 virat cud ansr da clock strike to 8 both v v brothers lukd at clock nd sed) viren nd virat: farmanay naishta lets go bro... (nd both left) in rishikesh... ( jeevika dabbu chachi nd chachu were sitting in bus nd beeji nd b.beeji were in car mannu came nd went to da bus) dabbu: aray manvi di apko itna tym ku lag gaya...(jeevika smiled nd manvi glared) manvi: tujhay kici ny bolnay keliye kaha dabbe apna mu ko band kar aur chabi mujy day... Jeevika: aray mannu usay ku dant ri hai kia galt bola usnay? Nd dabbu meray bhai mannu na tyar horai ti ku ky wo apnay unho sy jo milnay ja rai hn... Manvi: haan toh mera honay wala khasam hai ap b toh tyar hoi na mainay kuj kaha nd di ap yun mujy tang na karo warna ma safar kay doran yahan bus ma ni betho gi ok... Jeevika: aray haan dabbu ab toh gariyo ki adat dalni paray gi ( chachu chachi dabbu laughed wid jeevika nd manvi in anger) manvi: oky di aek toh ma jiju ko apki shikayat karo gi dosra ma beeji logo ky sath ja ri hn bye .. (nd wid dt she left nd sit in da car wid beeji nd b.beeji after 3 nd a half hour manvi wz bored listng to beejis talk nd thnkng ky kitna bolti hn just dn da driver stopped the car) manvi:kia howa gari ku rok di chandigardh agaya kia?.. B.beeji: chudail dain itna besabri mat ho yaha sy kuj kha pee lay sb aur chandigardh ky andar hn par abi tera sasural ni aya... (manvi had enough nd sed to herself "jisay deko meri band bja raha hai aj par ma b dekh lu gi sbko aek aek say chun chun kay badla lu gi par manvi janeman filhal yahan sy nikal warna yeh saas bahu beejian mera harmonium bja daein gi") manvi: beeji ma na bus ma ja rai hn ok... Beeji: chalo tek hai par manvi kici say larna mat tek hai?.. Manvi: acha meray baap ki ama... (b.beeji nd beeji smiled seeng manviz antic nd manvi went out 4rm da car ) manvi: chal di ky paas di ki behna... Usay pehlay washroom ho ati hn (nd she went to da washroom) (scene shift at vadera house chaudaryz arrived nd tarun opend da door vaderas welcumed da chaudaryz virat nd viren took blessings 4rm beeji b.beeji chachu chachi viren lukd at jeevika smiled nd jeevika blushed virat wz searching 4 manvi... Virat to himself: yeh bandriya kaha hai... Viren also thought where wz mannu... But b4 he cud ask swamini barged in to jeevika took her hand...) swamini: aur bauji yeh hai viren ki life patner jeevika... Jeevika went to dadaji nd went down to take his blessings wen dadaji stoped her saying... Dadaji: humaray haan betian paon ni choti (nd blessed jeevika putng hz hand on her head) swamini: nd jeevika (pointed to vanshika) yeh ha tmari saas viren ki maa... (jeevika went to vanshika nd vanshika hugged her) vanshika: bht pyari hai jeevika hmm viren... Aur haan beta main maa hn par didi viren ki bari maa hn yani tmari bari saas... (dn jeevika met chachi chachu slok ) chachi: hayee ni bari pyari ha viren ki dulhan wah manna paray ga didi ap choka marnay gai ti aur chika mar ai waisay virat ki voti khithay hai... (all were so busy dt no1 noticed da big absence) vanshika: haan beeji meri choti bahu kaha hn jiskay baray ma kal sy itna suna hai... (virat thought finally sm1 noticed nd viren smirked to virat) beeji: aray haan bhenji jeevika betay manvi kaha hai? (jeevika lukd here and dre scared nd confused) jeevika: beeji mannu toh... Mannu toh apkay sath ti na gari ma.? Beeji: humaray sath aray ni beta jb chandigardh ma anay ky bad hum rukay thy tb wo tm logo ky paas arai ti... (jeevika wid teary voice till nw all were serious specially virat nd viren) jeevika: ni beeji mannu humaray paas ni ti .. Chachu chachi boliye na wo toh gari ma ti... Beeji: wo utri ti haye rabba kaha gai manvi... Pinki: hayeee meri bachi kaha reh gai anjan shehr... (nw all were paniking nd jeevika wz literally cryng vanshika came and put her arms around jeevika) vanshika tense: chinta mat karo beta manvi tek hogi...jeevika: kaisay chinta na karo wo kbi chandigardh ni ai kbi akelay kahi ni gai wo kitni choti c hai wo kaha hogi usay toh yahan ghar ka address b ni pata mujy kuj samjh ni araha...swamini: relax jeevika .. Bauji ap police ko phone kijay... Bichara bachi pata ni kaha hogi... (Dadaji wz also tense) dadaji: ap fikar mat kijay bhenji ab wo apki ghar ki beeti hi ni vadera khandan ki honay wali baho b hai... Madan: beeji phone ni utha ri (deze wordz rang in 3 mindz jeevika virat viren virat wz hell panicked so wz viren thoughts were cumng manvi akeli oh God y she znt pickng da call it wz enough 4 virat dnt knw y but he wz scared manu wz sm hw hz responsibility) dadaji: sb itminan rakhein kuj ni hoga humari bahu ko.. Swamini: bauji humein tensn horai ha akeli bachi... (dt wz it 4 viren nd virat) virat:dadaji ma wo jaga jata hn dhndhta hn mannu kahi aas paas hi hogi... Viren: ji dadaji ma b jata hn ap tensn na lijay... Jeevika: ma b chalon gi mannu ko akelay honay sy bht dar lagta hai ma b jao gi (b4 beeji cud say vanshika sed) vanshika:tek ha jao viren virat jeevika ka khyal rakhna jaisay kuj pata lagay humein call kardaina... (jeevika wid viren virat left madan also left wid inder to search mannu rest all were restless) swamini: i hope manvi tek ho... Kadambari: ab kal kay rokay ka kia... Swamini: aek bar bachi tek ho aur khabar ajaye phr sochtay hn... (scene shift to manvi who wz sobbing alot she wz hell scared nd it wz also evng she wz sweatng hard nd walking the roads were empty..) manvi: sb kaha chalay gaye mujy toh apni sasural ka rasta b ni pata na meray paas phone hai dii ap kaha ho mujy bht dar lag raha hai dii jaldi ajao.. (wid dt she saw a pco went to it but hav no money so she hit da phone box nd alot of coins came out) (scene shift to viren virat jeevika car) (jeevika wz cryng alot alot viren just cudnt c it he wz drivng wid virat sitng to da passanger seat virat wz too much in tensn raat horai ti still manvi ka kuj pata ni) jeevika: viren ji meri mannu tek toh hogi na? Pata ni kaha hai kaisi hai usay chandigardh ka kuj ni pata nd usay akelay honay sy bht dar lagta hai pata ni ma ny ku say gari ma bethnay dia wo utri ti toh gai kaha... Virat: bhabi plz dnt panic mannu ko kuj ni hoga wo aek dum tek hogi just hav faith usay kuj ni hoga (wid dt he lukd through da window jeevika wz still cryng nd viren lukd at virat dz concern he nevr saw it mannu yar come back) (just dn jeevika phone rang it wz unknwn numbr but she picked...) jeevika: mannu tu kaha hai (viren nd virat lukd stopped da car nd ask jeevika to switch da phone to speaker dtz it mannu wz hell scared nd cryng alot..) mannu: di mujy yahan sy lay ky jao pat a ni main... Pata ni main kaha ho (nd she cried jeevika wz nt able to form words) virat: relax mannu relax tmay kuj ni hoga daro mat nd btao tm kaha pay ho hum arahay hn tmay lainay... Mannu: mujy ni pata yahan kuj ni hai koi ni hai virat mujy bajao dii yeh sunsan jaga hai mujy bht dar lag raha hai... Jeevika:mannu tu ghabra mat main hn.. (nd she cried) viren: mannu relax aas paas deko kia hai... Mannu: jungle hai aur aek pco hai bs.. Virat: manvi hum arahay hn tm wahan sy hilna mat oky just relax ...ma araha hn tmay lainay... (wid dt phone disconnected) jeevika: mannu mannu kuj bolna.. Viren: jeevika relax mujy pata hai shaid aisi jaga u relay plz nd virat u too... Virat nodded... The end comment guyz nd enjoy part 5 at nyt or evng may be... Precap: virman virika first huggie<3 nd masuri on its way Tongue Smile

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Posted: 20 September 2012 at 12:52am | IP Logged
superb update...loved virat's concern for manvi...continue soon..

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Posted: 20 September 2012 at 3:27am | IP Logged
beautiful update, loved how virat and vadhera's are concerned abt manvi

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Nice part. Feeling bad for manvi! Precap is amazing. Continue soon.

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Posted: 20 September 2012 at 3:49am | IP Logged

lovely update dear

loved virat concern for her & lovely precap...

update soonSmile

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Posted: 20 September 2012 at 8:43am | IP Logged
Nice OS...read all 3 together...pm me when u update!!

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thankyew guyz 4 da commentz u ppl r awsom thankx 4 lykng ma work luv ya all <3 so widout wastng tym.. Ff ehmmbh: "life as we knw it" recap: manvi lost vaderaz nd chaudarz in tensn jeevika viren nd virat to find manvi... CHAPTER 5...    (viren called dadaji nd told him abt manviz call , da vaderaz nd chaudary left 4 masuri viren sed dadaji dt dy will come wid manvi straight to masuri) viren: jeevika plz relax mannu mil jaye gi dn wri plz ro mat nd virat.? (but virat waznt listng he wz jzt thnkng abt manvi "ghosh plz wo tek ho plz") virat ? Virat (dn virat came back 4rm wud be vaderaz world) virat : ji bhai?... Viren: tensn mat lay mannu ko kuj ni hoga .. (virat nodded nd jeevika wz still cryng) (dn viren stopped da car all 3 ov dm get out of da car) virat : bhai yehi wo jaga hai jo mannu ny describe kia tha.. Bhai ap nd bhabi uc taraf dhndhiye nd ma uc taraf dhndhta hn (wid dt he went shoutng her name) manuuu (here manvi wz in da mid ov da jungle sittng nd cryng holdng her knees wen she heard hz voice yes it wz him virat wz here so she stood up) manvi: main... Main yahan hn virattt ... (nd she run) ( here jeevika nd viren wz also calling out da 1 name nd jeevika wz cryng viren cudnt c dz so he went to her put hz hand on her shoulder jeevika cryngly lukd up nd wid no tym she hugged him tight first viren wz taken aback but dn put hz arms around he assuringly) jeevika while cryng: viren ji meri mannu ko kahin say b laye wo meri jaan hai jaan usay kuj hoga toh ni na viren ji kuj kariyee... (here manvi wz running nd she went to da road but dre were 4, 5 man in drunken state smiling wickedly towardz manvi till dn manvi wz hell scared one ov dm came towardz manvi so mannu closed her eyes nd ran back shouting) manvi: diii jiju ..virattt koi toh aoo bachaaaoo... (virat heard her voice yes it wz mannuz voice he ran towardz da voice..."she z here) (manvi wz cryng hard nd runnig while lukng back to make sure da guy wznt following wen she bumped to sm1 she closed her eyes scaringly da guy hold her shoulders) manvi shoutng: ni plz ni chordo mujy diii jiju viraattt koi toh bachao... Virat: mannu chill kuj ni hoga luk at me main hn virat idhar deko (but she waznt openg he eyes cryng) virat: manvi ma hn virat relax (she opened her eyes nd saw virat nd wid no tym she hugged him still cryng nd virat to put hz arms around her "she z ok thank God" ) manvi: virat tm , tm agaye? Kahan thy tm? Mainay kitni awaz di tmay pata hai ma kitna dar gai ti wo admi.. Tm agaye mujy dhndh lia na tmnay... Virat: shhh mannu main hn tmay kuj ni sb tek ha tm tek ho.. (he separated 4rm da hug nd wiped her tears wid hz fingers) manvi: virat main ny dii aur jiju ki b awaz sunni ti wo kahan hn (so she z back to normal virat wanted to lit up da mood) virat: wo kia hai na mannu ji apki dii hn na jbsay ap lapata hoi hn na apki tensn ma ro rai hn nd ro ro kay bura haal b karlia nd bhai toh bht tens hn bhai hi ku sb bht tensn ma thy apki wja say.. Manvi: aray rona toh di ka favrt past time hai... Virat: wah yeh bheegi billi sherni kaisay bngai achanak... Manvi:wo kia hai na sherni toh bno gi na chep jo agaya hai.. Ab chalo isay pehlay dii ro rokay apna makeup begar laein aur jiju dar jaein... Virat: jaisay ma dar gaya ryt? (b4 she cud argue more he took hz phone nd dailed virenz numbr) (here virika were still huggng wen viren broke da embrace nd took da phone) viren: aek mint jeevika.. Haan virat bol? Kia mannu mil gai? Tek hai hum car kay paas ja rahay hn tm log ajao...(he cut da phone nd went to jeevika nd hugged her again happily) viren: atlast mannu mil gai jeevika... (jeevika blushed) jeevika: ji viren ji... Viren: chalo lets go nd eb no cryng.. (virika went to car nd virman also reached as soon as she reached she ran towardz her dii .. Jeeman hugged) manvi: dii kaha ti ap janti hn ma kitna dar gai ti kitna akeli ti ma.. Jeevika: aur tu janti hai ky ma kitna dar gai ti kia zarorat ti tjhay bina btaye kahi janay ki kuj hojata toh? (both viren nd virat were admirng da bond) manvi: dii plz abi ghar jakay hitler beeji ki b dant khani ha islye ap mat danto (nd mannu turned around showng fake anger) jeevika holdng her ears.. Jeevika: acha sori apni dii ko maaf ni karay gi?... Manvi: bs karo di nautanki toh ma hn ap ku dramay kar ri ho... (nd both ov dy hugged) jeevika: mannu tjhay kuj howa toh ni na... Manvi: oho fm ji bs b karo isay pehlay meray lawyer jiju aur lawyer honay walay wo sbko tensn dainay ky jurm main mujy saza sunaein bskarjao... (viren came nd giv manvi a side hug) viren: sali ji yeh fm ji kia hai?... Manvi: oh fm ji toh dii hain fikar minister dnt wri shadi ky baad apko pata lag jaye ga (wid dt she went to da car nd sat nd virat followed her.. Viren came close to jeevika nd whisper..) viren: fm ji?... (jeevika blushed) jeevika: ji viren ji?.. Viren: chalein?... Jeevika: ji... (dy went to car jeeman at back nd viren drivng nd virat on passanger seat) manvi: kahin toh roklo jiju , dii apko pata hai main ny suba sy beeji hitler kay lecture aur b.beeji ky tano kay ilawa kuj ni khaya.. Jeevika: mannu sabar karlay ghar jakay kha laina ebi humay dair horai hai... Virat: bhabi ic bhoki sherni ki bak bak ni suni jati kitna bolti hai... Manvi: chep tm zada chep na bano yahan tmari honay wali patni suba sy bhoki hai aur tm huh... Viren: (controlng to laugh) haan bhai zada chep na bn... Manvi: jiju kia zada chep na bn ap toh rehnay daein apki unho ny b kuj ni khaya aur ap (viren nd virat exchanged smilng lukz nd viren stopped da car at cliff dhaba) viren: yahan yehi milay ga ok... Manvi: oky (nd dy all went out nd placd da order eat but b4 gng to da car manvi went runng to the edge ov da cliff nd stood dre openg her arms wide jeevika viren virat also followed) manvi: ao na dii ap b is hawa ky mazay lo aisay bahein phila kay.. (jeevika didnt move so manvi dragged virika nd made dm stand dre like titanic pose close to eachodr) manvi: chep ji tmay invitatn daina paray ga (nd she dragged virat made him stand behind her wid open arms all were enjoyng dn virat sneeze bcz manviz hair were blowng nd touchng hz face nd broke da awsm moment) virat: aaachii .. Manvi: kia hai?? ... Virat: mujy kia ha ? Tmay kia hai kaunsa shampoo use karti ho?... Manvi: wohi jo tmay attract karsakay (virika smiled) virat: uff kaisi flirt sy pala para hai... Manvi: eb tm flirt kartay ni toh mujy hi karna paray ga (dn she blushed realizng wt she sed) manvi: di pose karo na jiju plz ... Plz ... Ma pic lu gi dnt wri masuri jakay bluetooth kardo gi phr dekhtay rai jaga fm ji ko (viren blushed again stood in titani pose bt jeevika didnt move so viren held her handz nd spread dm wide jeevika blushed nd lukd to viren dn manvi snatched nd click virika pic nd dn ask viren to click dre pic, viren smiled nd virat also smiled dn viren click dre pic nd dn dy all left to masori ...) the end.. Enjoy nd comment next chapter tomorow... Precap: mannu met vaderas virika virman roka nd jeevika dance to lo chali main.. <3

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