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wow loved both da updates, ur doing great, can't wait for virman and vrika first meeting, Plzzz pm me wn u update

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Both virman and virika accepted the marriage proposal. Eagerly waiting for virman and virika's first meeting.

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very nice...
continue soon.

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very nice plz continue

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Smile Tongue em too happy wid ur commentz guyz really luvng dm... Keep commenting.. Nd as i sed i dnt knw hw to pm... But i update daily aek suba aek raat ya shaam u just check da forumz... Oky so nt to keep u awaitng here i go...                               ff ehmmbh : virika virman "life as we knw it "        CHAPTER 3 Smile                      recap: virman aggreed to marriage after alot ov bisti emotional attack nd behas...                                           in rishikesh outside chaudaryz house black big car parked nd virat got out ov car wid swamini nd viren.. (u all can imagine da first scene of vv brothers wen came to rishikesh nd imp thng wenevr dre will b virika or virman scene unko tunes keep in mind zindagi ma aj lamhay nd hua kia hua :) :p )    swamini: atlast we reached yeh hai (pointng towardz da house) tm dono ka sasural.. Nd b4 gng ahead ma bta du ky viren jeevika bilkul tm jaisi hai shaant sorted types nd virat 4 u manvi thori alag hai huma y sharma je ny kaha so keep dt in mind best ov luck to both 4 da first meetng... (viren nd virat lukd at each other gave a little smile nd walked behind swamini)    IN JEEMAN ROOM:    jeevika: jaldi kal manu wo log atay hi hongay ab change karkay abi ja tyar b hona hai.. (manvi came out 4rm da bathroom) manvi: apko bht jaldi hai di apnay unsay milnay ki thora to sharm karo (jeevika turned nd gave a lyt slap on mannu head) jeevika: mannu tu b na nd yeh kia pehna hai tunay itna pheeka colour , mannu aj tujhay pehli dafa swamini bua ji aur virat ji dekhein gay thora toh saj dhaj kuj makeup wagaira... Manvi: mujhsy ni hota yeh sb dhakosla ma jaisi hn waisi hn aur waisay b ap jaisi beauty ky samnay mujh jaisi beast ko kaun dekhay ga... Jeevika: haan haan bs drama shuruh mat kar (jeevika went to cupboard nd took out a pink salwar suit nd handed to mannu) (nd b4 mannu cud argue ) bs kehdia na tjhay meri kasam (manvi stormed into da bath wid bak bak nd jeevika smiled) AFTER 5 MINUTES BOTH JEEVIKA ND MANVI WERE READY... jeevika: aray wah ab lag ri ha na meri guria guria jaisay ... Manvi: aur ap miss di world lag rai ho (nd dy both hugged dn pinki came) pinki: hayye meri bachiya ready hn hayee jeevika hayee manvi nazar na lagay aj toh itna kaam karkay meri kamar par kuj ni apnay betiyo ky honay walay patiyo kelye kamar dard bardasht hai... (manvi in lower tone speak) manvi: shuruh hogya chachi ka kamar dard nautanki drama... Pinki: kuj kaha tunay manvi?... Manvi: ni ni ma kia keh sakti hn apko meri world ki chachi ap pareshan na ho jeevika di raat ko apki kamar dabba daein gi... Jeevika: ji ji zaror chachi... Pinki: hayyee meri bachian ma kia karo gi tm dono ky begair... Oh ma toh bhool hi gai larkay walay agaye hn neechay ma dabbu ko bhejo gi tm dono ajana... Tek hai... (jeeman nodded)        in hall every 1 wz seated after viren nd virat took blessings 4rm beeji b.beeji chachu chachi... Beeji:swamini ji ap chaliye ma apko ghar dikhati hn .. Swamini: jee tb tk viren virat jeevika manvi say mil laein... (beeji first hesitated dn sed ok bcz no optn wz left dy were larkay walay) beeji: ji zaror dabbu chat pay milnay ka intezam karlo swamini ji ap ayee.. (beeji wid swamini chachu chachi left) b.beeji: oye tm dono ma say chudail ka honay wala pati kaun hai? (viren virat lukd at each odr confused) viren nd virat: chudail kaun?... B.beeji: ai dabbu upar chat pay beech ma bari wali khirkian rakh daina takay mahol bn sakay... (viren virat controlled dre smile) dabbu: g bari beeji ap chinta mat kro beeji ny pehlay hi smjha dia tha... B.beeji: aur haan jo chudail ka honay wala pati hai uckay sath meri duaein ab mujy koi khanay day ga tm dono jao...(viren virat were confused) virat: acha idhar ao (pointed to dabbu) kia naam hai tmara ... Dabbu: dabandar singh chaudary... Viren: itna bara naam koi short ni hai... Dabbu: hai na jiju logo ap dono mujy dabbu keh saktay ho... Virat: acha toh dabbu yeh chudail kaun hai? Nd b.beeji uckay honay wali pati ko duaein ko day ri ti?... Dabbu: wo chudail toh manvi di hn aur unko sambhalnay wala koi bari cheez hi hona chai warna manvi di toh ucka bura haal kardein gi ma late aya mujy b ni pata ap ma sy manvi di kisay shadi karein gay virat jiju kaun hn...? (virat thought: yeh manvi toh kuj alag hi creature hai beta virat bua ny tera acha band bajaya ha lagta hai...) virat : yeh ha virat (virat pointed to viren , nd viren got shocked) viren: ma .. Ma wo... Dabbu: oh ap ho chotay jiju aek baat kaho himat hai apki ap toh gaye ... Eb chaliye chat pay chaliye (they started to climb stairs nd viren in a low tone sed) viren: virat yeh tunay kia kiya ku kaha ky ma virat hn... Virat: mazak tha bhai tang kar raha tha.. Viren: mazak khatam eb beta dabbu sun ma viren aur yeh virat hai (dy lukd at dabbu but he went to da chat nd didnt listen to dm viren virat went to chat) virat: beta dabbu ma vir... Dabbu: ap (pointed to viren) khirki ky us taraf rai nd ap (pointed to virat ) khirki ky uc taraf raye ma ab jeevika di aur manvi di ko bula ky lata hn (nd wid dt he went running) viren: chal bhai best of luck wid new begging .. Virat: same to u bhai (they both hug nd went to their sides) AT CHAT DOOR... dabbu: ghabraiyay mat ai manvi di nd jeebvika di .. Manvi: ghabraye meri juti ... Jeevika: mannu plz kuj galat mat karna .. Manvi: tensn na lo di ap enjoy karo apki kasam khai hai ma toh shadi ma ghus chuki hn eb par abay dabbay yeh toh 2 hn inmay say honay walay pati dev kaun hn aur honay walay jiju dev kaun hn... Dabbu: ap tensn ku laiti ho wo (pointed towards viren) wo hn virat jiju nd wo (pointed towards virat) wo hn viren jiju... Eb ma chalta hn (nd he left) manvi: best ov luck di... (nd wid dt manvi went to viren thnkng he z virat nd jeevika went to virat thnkng its virenji) viren-manvi side... (manvi went to viren hu wz standing facing da odr side) manvi:oh hello vadera ji larki kbssay khari hai aur apka dehan hi nai.. (viren turned around nd saw manvi thnkng its jeevika.. Thnkng cute ha pyari ha par thori imature luk ni khair) viren :oh sorry i wz just .. (but b4 he cud complete manvi cut him ) manvi: oh mr angraiz vadera zada impressn jharnay ki zarorat ni aek baat btao kia apkay khandan ma kaun sa rivaj ha ky larki ko begair dekhay haan kar daina? (viren wz literally speechless nd wz about to say but manvi being manvi) manvi: agr ma moti nikalti i mean khudko deko dekhnay ma tek tak ho (she wz roundng around viren checking him out nd viren wz shockd to bitz he thought: bari ma ny toh kaha tha ky jeevika shaanth nature ki hai par yeh toh kuj alag hi hai) manvi: kaha kho gye eb bolo b ky chup ku ho haan? (viren haz to speak up..) viren: dikhye jeevika ap... Manvi: jeevika?di? Kia? Viren: ji ap jeevika hi hn na?           manvi: jeevika di ma jeevika di ni hn virat ji ... Viren: virat? Ma virat ni viren hn (manvi nd viren shocked) manvi nd viren: kia? (nw it made sense she z manvi nt jeevika viren smiled wah bari ma virat kelye sai barabar ka jor dhndha ha man gaye) viren: toh ap jeevika ki behn hn manvi? Ryt?... Manvi: aur ap honay walay jiju dev hn pati dev ni viren ji? Viren: ji... Manvi: par dabbay ny toh... Viren: wo ucko galt fehmi hogai hogi... Manvi: toh ab galt fehmi ko dur karein di toh wahan oh teri agr yahan confusn hai toh waha b toh confusn hoga... (scene shift to virat jeevika side) (virat wz pissed off nw 4rm 15 mintz he wz tryng to tawk to dz manvi but she wz keep lukng down nd blushing i guess but y nd speaking so low bua sed manvi wz hatkay nd dabbu nd beeji warned him wid dz gal oh god she z bhai type nt ma type... ) virat: dikhye madam ap thora unchi boliye ap bol b rai hn ky ni manvi ji luk mujy apki itni c awaz b ni arai... Jeevika: manvi? Ma manvi ni hn.. (she spoke in low voice) virat: wat ap manvi ni hn toh ap kaun hn? (b4 jeevika cud ansr da voice came 4rm da back it wz no one but manvi) manvi: yeh hain jeevika di nd ma hn manvi (virat lukd beyond jeevika tilted hz head to luk at da figure standing infront of her nd wz lukng 4rm up to down nd cn say wz lost ) hua kia hua kia hua hmmm ...(jeevika turned around at da same tym nd saw manvi wid sm guyz.. Viren lukd at jeevika nd wz straight away lost in her beauty nd thought so simple yet beautiful nd mature) zindagi ma aj lamhay aaa... manvi came towardz her di nd sed... Manvi: di rong numbr lag gaya tha wo dabba pagal kahin ka yeh (pointed to viren) yeh hain apkay viren ji nd yeh (move towardz virat ) aur yeh hn honay walay wo virat ji bap ray bap confusn tha bht (viren nd virat smiled listng to da chatterbox ) jeevika: mannu bs... Manvi: di kia bs ab isay pehlay tym khatam ho aur principal ka bulava aye thori gapay henk lo honay walay jiju dev ky sath nd mujy b disscusn karnay do jao... (she pulled jeevika to viren nd while gng back viren lukd at virat nd gave best of luck lukz nd thought he needed it) nw viren jeevika gone... Manvi turned around faced virat nd while making faces wz movng here nd dre... Virat: so nw manvi ryt? Wt r u dng?           Manvi: apko kia lagta hai virat ji... Virat: check kar ri ho mujy?        manvi:ji virat ji akhir ma b toh dekhon beeji ny jisko begair dekhay meray lye pasand kia wo vadera hai kia cheez (virat being impressed by her bluntness) virat: go ahead manvi ji koi kumi ni dekhay gi apko...(manvi laughed while thnkng kitna chepo ha yeh vadera virat) manvi: over smartness pehli kum aur imp kami hai boss shadi ky bad isko khatam karna ku ky mujy over smart log pasand ni oky honay walay pati ji... (virat smirkd nd thought wah bua ny sachma piece dhndha ha 4 me gud maza aye ga) virat: matlb apko apna ap pasand ni hai (manvi impressed wah beeji kia tagra jor hai gud maza aye ga) scene shift to viren nd jeevika... Viren: toh ap apnay baray ma kuj btaye na jeevika ma jana chahta hn akhir apkay sath shadi honay wali hai... (jeevika blushed) ap khush toh hai na jeevika? .. Jeevika: ji... Viren: toh phr kuj btaye na i mean manvi toh bht bolti hai dtz gud virat nd ucki compatibility achi jaye gi...   jeevika: apsay aek sawal pocho... Viren: ji zaror pochiye na... Jeevika: par jawab apko aek bhai ki taran ni aek jiju ki taran daina paray ga... Viren: (confused) pocho na... Jeevika: kia virat ji meri mannu kelye tek jeevan sathi hain?... Viren: (he smiled thnkng hw pure she z nd hw simply she askd da questn) jeevika ap fikar mat kijay virat meri pyari sali ko bht khush rakhay ga... Akhir wo ha hi itni pyari... (jeevika smiled) ap bharosa rakhiyee ... Jeevika: bharosa hai beeji ki pasand pay aur ab ap pay bhi... Viren: waisay bari ma ny btaya tha ky manvi apki bht close ha aj apkay sawal sy jaan b liya... Jeevika: close bht chota word ha viren ji manvi meri jaan hai meray lye mera sb kuj hai meri zindagi meri saansein sbkuj mummy papa ky bad mainay manvi ko aek behn ky sath sath aek maa ka pyar b dia hai w6 meray lye meri bachi ha meri pehli beti ma usay bht pyar karti hn meri jaan basti hai usmay 1 saal ki ti wo aur ma 5 saal ki tbsay meray jeenay ka sahara hai ucki hasi dekh ky ma bari hoi hn usnay mujy maa honay ka ehsas dilaya aur isilye ma bht khush hn ky hum zindagi bhar aek sath rahein gay... (viren thought hw genuine hw beautiful she wz nd manvi wz also touched to hz heart as if she is hz daughter too he nevr felt nythng lyk dt..) viren: mujy bht khushi hoi apnay apni dil ki baat mujhsy share ki aur agr manvi apki pehli beti ha toh main b ucka dad howa aek sath itnay rishtay... Thankyew mujy yeh haq dainay kelye... (scene shift to virman) manvi: clever haan hmmm.. Virat: waisay aek baat ha tm sach ma kuj alag ho (they both lookd at eachodr little eyelock just dn virat realized it nd break it) sai ma chudail type ho dhamaka type... Manvi: (shocked) kia kaha apnay? .. Virat: aray mainay ni b.beeji nay kaha nd i thnk tek kaha... Manvi: b.beeji burhapa hai unki bato ko dil pay mat li jaga wo kia ha na apko dekh kay unho ny socha hoga ky langor ky mu ma angor... Virat: (lukd at her astonished yeh cheez kia hai? Jo b ha beta vira ab puri zindagi is afat ky sath hi guzarni hai afat nt really cute hai par taiz no doubt mujy b.beeji ki duaon ki zarorat hai nd smiled mrs wud b vadera) oh toh tm langor ho dnt wri dznt matter to me... Waisay honay wala pati hn koi chai wagaira hoti hai ky ni hoti thori saiva karo janabay alia... Manvi: oh toh honay walay pati ji chai piyein gay tek hai sugar kitni?... Virat: make it sugar free baby...(manvi wz abt to get up 4rm da chair dt her dupata wz stuck at da corner nd she wz abt to fell wen virat get hold of her they lukd at each odr virat handz were on her waist nd she wz holding hz hand ) hua kia hua kia hua yeh pyar humay b... (just dn dabbu came nd broke da magical moment of virika smilng eye contact nd virman holding each odr dy all get alert nd started lukng here nd dre...) dabbu: aray ap logo ki batein khatam hogai ky ni beeji neechay bula rai hn aray jeevika di ap virat jiju ky sath aur manvi di ap viren jiju ky sath... (manvi came to dabbu nd hit him on head jeevika came to nd stopped mannu) jeevika: mannu usay ku mar rai hai... Manvi:di is dabbe ny confuse kardia tha aray pagal yeh honay walay viren jiju nd yeh virat ji... Dabbu: par apnay toh.. Manvi: par var kuj ni tu dabbe ka dabbe rahay gai... Dabbu: acha choro waisay kaisi rai meetng.? (he askd nudging jeevika nd manvi) (all four couple smiled) manvi: achi ti waisay di honay walay jiju toh mast hai kia jodi hai wah... (viren came nd put hz hand on manviz head nd smiled) viren: waisay virat meri sali sahiba b bht achi haan kamal ... Virat: ji bhai aek dum taiz bandriya types... Manvi: honay walay wo ji ap b kici chep say kum ni... Jeevika: mannu chup kar... Virat: mannu bhabhi keh rai hn shhh pin drop silence... Manvi: kiski bhabi kaisi bhabi kaun c bhabi khair likho ... Virat:kia likho mannu ji... Manvi: mera number... Kia shadi say pehlay baat kareingay kay ni... (viren nd virat shockd again dz girl wz smthng) jeevika: mannu plz yeh kia ? .. Manvi: aray di bs b karjao shadi honay wali hai humari jana pehchana bnta ha na ku jiju? .. Viren: haan bilkul... Manvi: idhr do apna phone (she snatched virat cell) wah blackberry.. Shadi ky bad mujy b chai...samjhay (virat thought dt she wz to much) yeh lo yeh mera numbr misd bell mardaina... Nd jiju laye apna phne dijay (viren handed her da phne) yeh lijay di ka numbr... Ok... Virat nd vire smiled dt hw mannu wz full ov life viren thought she wud b realy keepng virat happy... Nd hw in few hours she attached to him... Dabbu: eb chalein... (all left nd went downstairz where beeji swamini nd all were swamini saw dm cumng down nd she stood nd went to jeeman first she hugged jeevika dn manvi) swamini: sach ma dono bht hi pyari hn... (virat sed under hz breath pyari nd meray wali khatarnak b) nd manvi humay khushi ha dt tm humaray virat ki honay wali jeevan sathi ho toh tmay virat kaisa laga... ( first manvi lukd at virat dn smirked) manvi: achay hn virat ji... Thoray teray hn par chalay ga ill handle... (swamini laughed nd virat just stared ) swamini: i told u virat she z compatible to u oky viren tm khush ho na... Viren: ji bari maa.. Swamini: oky toh phr beeji ap sb kal suba chandigarh ajai jaga waha sy sb masuri jaein gay rokay kelye akhir humaray bhanjo ka roka hai baki ki baad ma eb hum chaltay hn... Chalo viren nd virat... (wid dt swamini left) viren to jeevika : apka intezar rahay ga... (jeevika blushed) manvi: ohooo jiju noty haan... Viren to manvi: apka b sali sahiba ku virat... (Virat dznt want d to go bcz in few hourz he wz lykng he companx) virat: anxiously bhai bye mannu ..(mannu waved her hand nd phone karnay ka ishara kia to both jiju nd honay walay pati dy both laughed nd left) at nyt in jeeman room: jeevika: mannu sach bta virat ji kaisay lagay... Mannu: hmmm acha hain di eb tnh haan keh di ha no optn nd upar sy eb em thnkng beeji ny tek kia eb mannu hmesha apni di ky sath rahay gi aur apko jiju kaisay lagay... Jeevika blushed nd sed: achay hn kafi achay hn.. Manvi: wah wah... Par sb jaldi ni horaha i mean roka .. Jeevika: mannu yeh baro ka faisla hai toh unpay rehnay day oky.. Mannu: ok baba kaho toh kal pheray lay lu par jo b karein gay sath sath karein gay ku ka? .. Jeevika nd mannu: behn hn teri/apki khoon ka rishta ha humara... In chandigar v.v brothers... Viren: manvi kamal hai yar jb ma ny usay jedma tha toh ma dar gaya tha ky itna bolti hai nd all but 4 u she z really gud... Full ov life... Virat : nd jeevika bhabhi apkay lye perfect hn... Viren: tu khush ha na bhai? .. Virat: hmmm bhai manvi achi ha thori tedi hai bt achi ha saaf dil ki bs mera past ... Viren: bhool ja na apni nai zindagi nd life patner ka soch... Virat: u r ryt... Viren: wah abi sy itna change kia baat hai waisay meri saali sahiba ko hmesha khush rakhna .. Virat: ap b meri saali ko khush rakh (wid dt dy hugged) the end chapter 4 at nyt.. Precap: manvi lost in chandigardh... Thankyew all nd enjoy Tongue

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Wow nice part. Manvi is very smart. Virman convo is so sweet. Virika convo is also so cute. Continue soon.

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amazing...Clap

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amazing...Clap
virika were too cute n virman were too good..

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