virika virman" life as we knw it" pt 81 pg 133 - Page 33

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: nishyrelan

amazin update yushna as always ! just loved it... i read your stories again and again... haha thanks for the sweet update... i will wait for your next update... continue soon and thanks for the lovely comment!



u r so sweet nish thankyew 4 liking it, it feels gud dt i didnt disappoint u sweety.. Ill update soon so stay blessed nd stay tuned..
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Hello-hi-by-by

hahaha virat saree scene n manvi sleeping in kichen waoo yaar kainttt updts yushna..

lovdddx it
thnku n cont

~sonal~

sonal dear i myself was laughing while writing it..:) nd keep on commenting it feels nice reading ur comments nd alot more fun to come for now
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Posted: 11 years ago
ru gona put index on 1st page..
lemme do dis.. u jus cncntrt on updts..
lll prepare index foh u nd vil pm u ok
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Hello-hi-by-by

ru gona put index on 1st page..

lemme do dis.. u jus cncntrt on updts..
lll prepare index foh u nd vil pm u ok

oh u r such a sweet heart sonal baby thankyew. Ill update soon dnt wri its nt ready yet.. Waisay u put the index on first page thankyew so much darling..<3
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Posted: 11 years ago
icant put na.. i vil prepare it. den u hve to edit ur 1st post on 1st page..
vil pm u d index tom. pukka
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Posted: 11 years ago
im missing the ff, when u gonna update? xxx
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: yushna

asmaa mainay thora sa uc type ka likha hai jaisa u wanted dear, apko ab difficulty toh ni horai?



nah babe it fine know thank you xxx
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: aasma1



nah babe it fine know thank you xxx

dtz gud asmaa dear if any problem sweety u cn tell me, nd update will b today for sure..:)
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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Hello-hi-by-by

icant put na.. i vil prepare it. den u hve to edit ur 1st post on 1st page..

vil pm u d index tom. pukka

sonal baby dn dnt take tensn, ill update first nd dn ill make da index page myself, but thankyew so much 4 just thiking it , it really means alot to me luv u baby...:)
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Posted: 11 years ago
thankyew so much guyz 4 liking my work, nd keep on commenting, it alwayz feels gud to c ur comments nd it motivates me as well so do comment buddies..                                  ff ehmmbh:virman virika 'life as we knw it'   CHAPTER 48                                 RECAP: happiness in life...                    (scene starts from viren who was about to go out from the kitchen but turned around and saw manvi who was sleeping on the slab turned in her sleep and was about to fall viren ran and caught manvi in his arms before she fell down, and manvi opened her eyes, jeevika hurriedly went to viren who was holding manvi)                                                         jeevika: mannu, tu tek hai na Thank God viren g nay wakt pay pakr lia warna mannu tu gir jati tujhay chot ajati...                                                       (viren and manvi was smiling, manvi was still in her jijuz arms )                 viren nd manvi: bs karo fm ji kitna fikar karo gi...                                  (with tha viren manvi and jeevika laughed just than virat to entered the kitchen and saw manvi in virens arms nd started to laugh)                    virat:aray bhai apnay is atay ki bori ko ku uthaya va hai                                (manvi glared at virat and virika smiled upon manvi)                             viren:sai ja raha hai bhai, apki patni yaha slab pay so rai ti mai na pakrta toh zameen pay gir jati aur fm ji aisay react karti jaisay mannu asman say gir rai ti, eb tu agaya hai yeh lay sambhal apni atay ki bori ko      (jeevika and manviz mouth were open in shock, with this viren gave manvi to virat and now virat was holding manvi in his arms nd smiling) virat: mai ku sambhalo apki saali hai ap pakro...   (virat gave manvi back to viren, jeevika was just smiling luking at the trio)           viren:par biwi toh teri hai tu pakr      (and viren again gave manvi to virat)              virat:par beti kiski hai? Apki aur bhabi ki toh ap pakriye     (virat was abt to giv manvi back to viren nd nw both were holding her togeather wen jeevika spoke up)                                  jeevika: aray viren ji, devar ji kia meri bachi ko apnay pacing the parcel smjha va hai isay utariye aur wo beti aur biwi jiski b ho behn wo meri hi hai (viren and virat make manvi stand and manvi gave a slap on viratz arm nd went to jeevika)      manvi:chep dekhlo gi tmay huh...aur jiju ap b, mujy atay ki bori kaha, virat vadera mai toh atay ki bori hn par tm toh dharti pay bojh ho bojh huh        jeevika: aur eb ap dono jayee yahan say mai aur mannu kheer latay hn apki waja sy mai agay bht late ho chuki hn...               (viren and virat smiled seeng dre wifves smiling and went from the kitchen)        (jeevika thought ' mai janti hn viren ji ap aur virat kia karnay ki koshish kr rahay hn aur mai vada karti hn ky mai apkay sath hn, mai apni mannu ko un buri yadoo say dur lay jaon gi paka aur khud b kbi yad ni karo gi' jeevika lukd at manvi and hugged her, manvi hugged her back)      jeevika:chal kheer lay kay chaltay hn oky            (manvi nodded and dy went taking the kheer)      (here at dinning table all the vaderaz were seated , viren jeevika sitting togeather nd virman siting togeather right next to each other, the kheer was served nd now every one was waiting for dadaji ka farman)       dadaji: 8 baj chukay hn sb naishta shuruh kijay.. Aur sbsay pehlay humari bahuon ki bnai hoi kheer say shurvat kijay...          (every one started with the kheer and jeeman smiled looking at their new family ..)      dadaji:wah bhariya, jeevika beta , manvi beta kheer bht achi hai..                                          swaming: sach mai jeevika manvi kheer is really tasty...                        vanshika: hmmm bht zada hi achi hai jeevika beta and mannu .. Tm logo kay hatho mai toh jadoo hai...   (viren and virat smiled with jeevika to but manvi stood up)                           manvi: mai kuj kehna chahti , tareef milay toh achi baat hai par kisi ki tareef pay kabza nai karna chai, aur is tareef ki haqdaar sirf aur sirf meri dii hain yeh kheer srf unho nay bnai hai mainay toh chamach b nai hilaya (all lukd towardz dre baby and smiled) dadaji: humay bht khushi hoi jan kar kay mannu beta tmnay sach kaha par kheer tm bnao ya jeevika fark kia parta hai ho toh tm apni behn ki parchai na     (manvi smiled and sat down) virat:tbhi mai kaho kay kheer itni achi ku bangai (all smiled)    (while eating viren was holding jeevikaz right hand looking towardz her just dn manviz phone rang)           WHATZ MY NAME WHATS MY NAME, MY NAME IS SHEILA, SHEILA KI JAWANI , I AM TO SEXY FOR YOU MAI TERAY HATH NA ANI NO NO SHEILA SHEILA KI JAWANI        (viren left jeevikaz hand instantly, everybody looked towardz the source of the tune virat looked towardz manvi and put his hand on his mouth to cover his laughter which can come at ny moment, viren glared at virat , every1 was serious manvi quickly cut the call)     manvi:i am sorry dadaji wo..          dadaji:kuj ni hota chup chap khana khao    (every one again started eating nd viren again waz about to hold jeevikaz hand wen manviz phone rang again)               WHATS MY NAME, WHATS MY NAME ,MY NAME IS SHEILA , SHEILA KI JAWANI, I AM TOO SEXY FOR YOU (Manvi again cut da call nd looked down, virat again controlled his laughter manvi looked at virat gave him the look 'dekh lo gi tmay chep vadera' nd virat smiled evily) (yet again everybody start again eating wen viren again held jeevikaz hand, nd jeevika plead to him wid her eyes)WHATS MY NAME, WHATS MY NAME, MY NAME IS SHEILA , SHEILA KI JAWANI I AM TO SEXY FOR YOU MAIN TERAY HATH NA ANI NO NO NO SHEILA (viren left jeevikaz hand, virat looked at da other side nd every body else stared at manvi and dadaji, manvi quickly took da phone ) manvi: jb bar bar kat rai hn toh smj ja bzi hn bye (wid dt she ended the call and looked at dadaji who stood up, every one stood up wid him vanshika: plz bauji ucko dant mat di jaga..   virat: tm toh gai sherni...     viren:oh god plz dadaji gusa mat kari jaga       swamini:nw God cn save manvi...      jeevika:mujy pata tha yeh sheila ki jawani meri behn ko lay dubay gi..) (dadaji looked towardz every one seriously and dn)        dadaji:hahahahahahahahahahaha hahahahahahahahahahaha hahahahahahahahahahag   (dadaji started laughng loudly and everyone shocked, no1 cud beleive it , the man who never smiled fully is actually laughng loudly , open heartdly, madly) (viren lukd at every one who waz looking at manvi nd dadaji viren thought 'i dnt knw meri baby is ghar mai aur kitnay positive changes laye gi') dadaji:hahahahaha ap sbko kia hoa? Normal logo ko aisi situation pay hasi ati hai ku meri priety ... Manvi: hahahahaha dadaji oh sorry exactly meray sharukh khan...   (with this the dinning table changed in a comedy room where every one was laughng madly from dadaji to shlok) dadaji: is ghar mai itni khushian dekh ky acha laga , in dono bachiyo ka shukriya... Eb humara naishta toh hogya parohit ji shaam ko aein gay sb tyar rehna.. (with dis everybody left to dre room except virika and virman, manvi lukd at virat and threw nampkin at him) manvi:bari hasi arai ti chep tmay.. Haan?                  virat:koi itnay expensive cell pay aisa gana lagata hai sherni g...          viren:hahahahahahahaha still cant beleive it guyz wt wz it? Hmmm     virat: it was sheila sheila ki jawani i am to sexy for u bla bla                      jeevika:hahahaha mannu kitni bar kaha hai tjhay sheila ki jawani say peecha churaa lay par ni tu sunti kaha hai...          viren:hahahaha jo b ho just bcz ov my daughter sb itna hasay...                      virat:really bhai eb apki beti circus dikhaye gi toh sb hasay gay na... (wid dt virat ran laughng nd manvi ran after him nd virika just was admirng dm)       jeevika:yeh hmesha aisay hi khush rahay...             viren:iski gurantee mai deta hn jb tk meri baby hai sb srf hasein gay...   (wid dt viren hugged jeevika and kissed her forehead) the end guyz do comment... Plz    (precap: fun ahead wid awsom foresom) yush updating              ðŸ˜Š