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Ff ehmmbh : life as we knw it      first ov all a little bit intro abt me nd ma story... I just thought it nd em rytng it.. Em a big tym fan of virman dy r superb.. Ma story surly revolve around virman nd virika as virika will be supportng charcters... It will will be a family story jzt lyk da show will have similarties as well as differences... Sm scenes may b alike da show.. Ill used mixed languages nd 1 thng em a slow poster so if u wanted da parts soon cmnt guys inbox me make me remind as i visit forums daily... Oky so abt me its yush u all cn call me yush... Criticism too will be accepted but a little... Characters are da same if new added will be told later in da story... Nd dre z no cancer track in ma story till nw agay jakay i dnt knw...oky so its abt it all till nw em giving a chapter 1... So read it lyk ma work nd comment it too plz only dn i wud ryt more...:) Star                  CHAPTER 1               its wz da morng da sun wz on its peek , da birds were chirping every where dre wz freshness it wz da soothng place rhshikesh... Dre wz a house shown wid name plate chaudarys... A big black car stopped infront of da chaudarys gate nd da mirror went down showng a classy women sitting on da back seat wid a middle aged man wid sm documents in da hand .. Da women looked towards da house (serious music was playnd in background) the man: swamini jee hum phnch chukay hn yehi hai chaudaryz ka ghar... ( yes it waz no 1 else but swamini singh vadera) swamini: hum dekh saktay hn sharma jee, waisay hum apko bta daein yeh log bilkul b humaray standardz ky hisab ky ni hn as u knw vaderaz judgo aur vakeelo ka khandan ha humara but jb baat humaray bhanjo ki ati hai it shud be da best spcly jb baat humaray bhanjay viren ki ati hai...                        sharma: jee jee swamini jee hum jantay hn apka rutba apki izat sb but ap yakeen maniye viren betay kelye jeevika beti say achi larki (he wz cut by swamini again) swamini: woi toh jeevika wo pehli larki hai jo humein apnay viren kelye pehli nazar ma pasand agai halankay viren ny abi tk jeevika ko deka ni hai phr b usnay sb humpay chora hai agr humay larki pasand agai toh yeh rishta paka samjhiye aur tbi humnay inkay financial status pay dehan ni dia.. Sharma : jee bilkul jaisay ky apko is parivar ky baray ma sb pata hai par jeevika beti ky baray ma aek baat jeevika beti ki jaan basti ha unki choti behn manvi baby ma... Swamini: hum yeh baat pichlay 6 ghantay sy suntay arahay hn waisay achi baat ha sagi behnein ha pyar toh hoga hi na... Khair ab andar chaltay hn... (scene moved inside da house where every1 wz movng here nd dre dng work sm1 wz arangng thngz sm1 wz callng sm1 wz gng to da kitchen it wz hustle bustle around until da door bell ring) a boy in teen stopped nd lookd towards da old lady... Boy: beeji lagta hai wo abhi gaye.. Beeji: haye rabba itni jaldi ja dabbu darwaza khol aur pinky (she shouted) sb kuj tyar rakhna ai smjh... Aur madan tu b jakay swagat kar.. Madan:jee beeji... (dn an much older laday to beeji who wz sitting on da sofa said) b.beeji: tyarian toh deko jaisay pata ni kaun araha ha.. Beeji: badi beeji chup ab ap shant rai... (until nw dabbu nd madan came to da living room wid swamini nd sharma) beeji greeted swamini wid a smile nd made dm sit nd dn pinky came wid eatable nd dre wz mehman nawazi gng on until swamini spoke...                                  swamini: beeji apki mehman nawazi ka bht bht shukriya par hum seedha muday pay atay hn.. (beeji lukd at swamini confused) ap toh janti hn na humaray khandan ky baray ma phr b hum yahan apki poti jeevika ka hath mangnay aye hn humaray bhanjay viren kelye...                                           b4 beeji cud say anythng pinky jumped in ... Pinky: hayee swamini jee apnay toh pehli ball pay bold kardia all wicked down (swamini faked a smile nd beeji lukd at pinki angry whch made her quite) beeji: jee swamini jee hum jantay hn aur yakeen maniye hum bht khush hn bin maa baap ki bachi ha hum apki hasiyat ky mutabik b ni phr b apnay humari beeti ka hath manga bht khushi ki baat hai aur humein koi aitraz b ni hai... Swamini: aur jeevika ko... Beeji: jo humara faisla woi uska faisla hai... Swamini : dtz gud waisay hum aek bar jeevika sy personally milna chahtay hn wo ha kahan.. Aek bar hum mil laein phr thoray din tk viren ko b laein gay takay wo dono b mil laein... Pinki: jeevika wo toh ghat pay ha manvi kay sth.. (beeji stared at pinki) swamini: phr humay ghat pay jana chai (she stood up)beeji: par jeevika ko toh pata b ni ha (b4 she cud complete swamini said) swamini: tbi it will be gud hum b toh dekhein jiski itni tareef suni hai wo aam tor pay karti kia ha lets go (swamini walked out wid sharma nd madan wid dabbu , beeji turned towards pinki) beeji: tu pagal hogai ha kia zarorat ti yeh btanay ki ky wo ghat pay ha tu janti ha na manvi b ha wahan par pata ni kia udham machaya hoga waha pay manvi ny eb swamini jee ko kuj bura lag gaya toh? Hai rabba madad eb chal ... (dy went too) b.beeji: eb maza aye ga churail pata ni kia dhamakay kar rai hogi..)        AT GANGA GHAT                     jeevika wz takng round ov tulsi pauda nd prayng wen swamini wid everybody came.. Swamini lukd at jeevika beauty nd smiled thnkng dt her choice is awsom 4 viren nd beeji wz happy nd nervous to happy dt jeevika wz nt playng or foolng around wid manvi but nervous dt where wz manvi .. Beeji to herself : hai rabba aj manvi koi garbar na karay... Jeevika opened her eyes nd saw every1 nd came to dm... Jeevika: beeji, chachi chachu dabbu ap sb yahan? Beeji: jeevika insay milo yeh hain swamini jee jinkay baray ma raat ko btaya tha.. (jeevika lukd down nd bowd down nd took blessings) swamini: god bless you beta (swamini wz very happy as jeevika wz ideal patner 4 viren) pinki: hayee meri bachi jeevika manvi kaha hai.. (beeji glared again as to y pinki took da tufan name) Par jb destiny ny kuj dhamakay dar plan kia ho toh sb kuj line pay chalta ha... (jeevika lukd here nd dre) jeevika: chachi wo mannu abi yahan ti pata ni aray wo rai (she signaled towards da ghat in water sm gal wz prayng lukng at sky nd as she turned swamini stared at her as thinking smthng a smile crept her face nd she signaled sharma to come to the corner every1 wz bz thnkng wt swamini tawkng nd manvi wz still in water swamini came) sharma: swamini jee ko rishta manzor hai jeevika beti aur viren betay ka..(evry1 smiled nd jeevika lukd down) par (every1 lukd at sharma jee to wat next he want to say) (but swamini continued) swamini: par beeji baat yeh hai ky viren ka b aek chota bhai hai virat wo b lawyer hi hai beeji humein apkay sanskaar cho gaye apki potian bht pyari aur sanskari hn isilye hum chahtay hn ky jeevika aur viren ky sath sath ap apni poti manvi ka b hath humaray chotay bhanjay virat kelye daein daein... (every1 shockd) pinki: hayeee aek ball pay 2 cheekay... Beeji: par swamini jee manvi toh nadan hai... Swamini: shadi kay bad sb ladkian smjhdar hojati hn... Aur jistaran jeevika viren kelye sai hai i knw manvi b virat kelye tek hogi... (beeji to herself: shadi toh manvi ki b karni ha ku na isi khandan ma aur phr jeevika b toh hogi dono behnein aek sath par manvi uff ni jeevika smjhdar ha wo sambhal lay gi) beeji: mujy koi aitraz ni hai (swamini became to happy) swamini: toh phr tek hai dono shdian aek sath hongi hum apko phone karkay bta daein gay ky hum viren virat ko kb la rahay hn eb hum chaltay hn.. Nd ya beeji ap humari honay wali bahu ko kahiye ky bahar nikal aye warna sardi lag jaye gi.. (swamini left while smilng) beeji: aj hum bht khush hn teri aur manvi ki shadi... Uff chal madan .. Jeevika: khush toh ma b hn par mannu... ( every1 lukd to mannu ) the end... pRECAP: manvi acceptng da marriage after alot behas nd virika virman first meetng... Leave lykz nd cmntz dn ill continue


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very nice...
continue soon n plzz pm me...try to put more of virika...

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good start dear

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thank yew guys... 4 ur comments .. Dont laugh but i dnt knw hw to pm.. Nd dz story contains virman nd virika full ov behna luv nd couple luv.. Keep commentng it motivates me to ryt.. 2 comments 4 ma first ff.. Thankx em so happy nd 4 dt at nyt ill post da 2nd part...thankyew all<3 nd keep suggestng.. Yushna here Tongue Smile Star


so index..
itni bezati kayyy badd ...
index credit goes to neha<3

Chapter 1 - Page 1

Chapter 2 - Page 1

Chapter 3 - Page 2

Chapter 4 - Page 3

Chapter 5 - Page 3

Chapter 6 - Page 4

Chapter 7 - Page 5

Chapter 8 - Page 6

Chapter 9 - Page 7

Chapter 10 - Page 8

Chapter 11 - Page 9

Chapter 12 - Page 9

Chapter 13 - Page 10

Chapter 14 - Page 11

Chapter 15 - Page 12

Chapter 16 - Page 13

Chapter 17 - Page 14

Chapter 18 - Page 15

Chapter 19 - Page 16

Chapter 20 - Page 17

Chapter 21 - Page 18

Chapter 22 - Page 19

Chapter 23 - Page 20

Chapter 24 - Page 21

Chapter 25 - Page 22

Chapter 26 - Page 23

Chapter 27 - Page 24

Chapter 28 - Page 25

Chapter 29 - Page 26

Chapter 30 - Page 27

Chapter 31 - Page 28

Chapter 32 - Page 29

Chapter 33 - Page 30

Chapter 34 - Page 31

Chapter 35 - Page 32

Chapter 36 - Page 34

Chapter 37 - Page 35

Chapter 38 - Page 36

Chapter 39 - Page 38

Chapter 40 - Page 41

Chapter 41 - Page 42

Chapter 42 - Page 43

Chapter 43 - Page 45

Chapter 44 - Page 47

Chapter 45 - Page 48

Chapter 46 - Page 50

Chapter 47 - Page 51

Chapter 48 - Page 53
ch 49 - pg 54
ch50- pg 57
ch 51- 59
ch 52- pg60
ch 53- pg 64
ch 54- pg 66
ch 55- pg67
ch 56_ pg 69
ch 57- pg71
ch 58- 73
ch 59- 74
ch 60 -pg 76
ch 61- pg 79
ch 62- 81
ch 63- 82
ch 64- 87
ch 65-89

Ch 66 -pg 95
Ch 67 - pg 97
Ch 68 - pg 100
Ch 69-102
Ch 70-105

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Nice start. Swamini bua was impressed by manvi! Great miracle. Waiting for virman's eeting. Continue soon an pm me when u update.

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Smile Tongue thankyew thankyew thankyew... 1stly i dnt knw hw to pm.. I dnt promise but ill try to post daily smtymz may be 2 tymz a day... Depend on ur cmntz da responce to ma first ff z gr8 luv ya all 4 dt.. Nd here it goes part 2 as a thankx givng to u all.. Keep lykng nd cmntng...<3           ff ehmmbh: virman virika "lyf as we knw it"    CHAPTER 2                          recap: swamini choose manvi nd jeevika sisters 4 virat nd viren brother rishta pakka by swamini nd beeji...                                                    In chandigarh : the vadera family includng dadaji, swamini bua, vanshika ma, inder chachu , kadambar chachi nd dre son shlok wid afcource viren nd virat standing in da main big lavishing hall all shocked...                                             swamini: baujee jo humnay kia wo aek dum tek kia hum bata ni saktay ky jeevika jaisay viren kelye humay perfect lagi uci taran manvi ucki choti behn humay virat keliye aek dum sai match lagi... (nw it wz enough 4 da mid 20s man he turned around face swamini nd it wz non other dn virat singh vadera da handsom hunk) virat: i knw bua ky apko dosro ki life ko handle karnay ka bht shok hai par i am sorry mainay apko abi tk itna hak ni dia...    (swamini just lukd at virat disgusted wid hz behaviour but b4 she cud say nythng virat being da self less man spoke again) virat: em sorry par ma yeh shadi ni karon ga dtz it...   vanshika: virat beta relax yeh koi tareeka ni hai baro say baat karnay ka nd swamini didi nay jo b kia hai tmaray bhalay kelye hi kia hoga i knw manvi aek achi larki hogi... Virat: ma baat us larki ki ni hai bs i dnt wana marry .. Inhay agr shadian karanay ka itna shok hai toh bhai ki karvaein meri lyf ma ku interfere kar rai hn... (it wz enough 4 swamini to take virat non sense..) swamini: rehnay dijiye bhabhi isay tameez mat sikhaye... Aur virat tm aek baat sun lo agay hi tm vadera khandan ki izat almost barbad kar hi chukay thy agr viren na hota toh pata ni kia hojata nd tmari lyf ky dcizn lainay ka tmay chance dia gaya tha par tmara past nd tmari harkatein hum sb jantay hn par eb bs tm jaisay laparva insan ko kia pata izat kia hoti hai tm apni lyf belagam ghoray ki taran jeetay ho... U r nt worth takng ny decisnz abt urcelf or dz family so tmari shadi manvi sy hi hogi..( it wz enough but b4 virat cud say nythng more da odr vadera took control nd guess hu it z yup viren da cool calm minded personality bcz he knew buaz words hurtd hz little bro hu he has treated as a son , he put hz hand on virat shoulder) viren: badi ma plz ap relax karein virat ki taraf sy ma maafi mangta hn..( virat had it all so he went upstairz) swamini: samjhao is laparva insan ko viren ku ky humara faisla tek hai yeh shadi hi isko zimadari ka ehsas dilaye gi... (4 da first tym dada ji turned around nd sed) dada ji: humay tmpay aur tmaray faislay pay bharosa ha swamini aur hum khush hn ky humaray dono poto ki shadi tay hogai par virat humay usay koi umeed ni.. vanshika: bauji ap chinta mat kijay ma virat ko samjhati hn... (nd wid dz vanshika followed by viren went to virat room)   in rishikesh:       manvi: kiaaa? Beeji ap, di ap b ? Chachi chachau dabbay badi beeji ap sb? Meri shadi wo b di ky sth unkay devar say? Yeh vadera khandan lawyaro ka hai ya paglo ka ?       beeji: manviii (she shouted nd went to her hold her shoulder) tjhay tameez ni hai wo tera aur jeevika ka honay wala sasural hai... Manvi: honay wala sasural ? Beeji ap yeh kia apko pata ha do behnein aek ghar ma kitna panga ha nd ma toh di sy larnay ka soch b ni sakti.. Ma toh di ki shadi ky khilaf ti ky chandigardh aur ap mujy b?     beeji: toh ismay galat kia hai itna uncha khandan hai viren virat dono achay hn kami kia hai? Jeevika tu samja... Jeevika: mannu meri baat sun soch hum dono aek ghar ma hmesha sath .. Manvi: di aek ghar do behnein kbi ni di ma ny filmo ma deka hai... Jeevika: mannu yeh hakikat ha film ni nd aisa kuj ni hoga balkay hum bht khush hongay.. Manvi: ni mujy yeh shadi ni karni..(beeji cudnt take ny more she hz to do smthng) beeji: haan tu ku manay gi ma hn hi kaun aek teri maa meray betay ko kha gai phr b ma ny tm dono ko pala aj yeh sila mil raha hai manvi idhar dekh kbi toh shadi karay gi na? Manvi? Manvi?    in chandigardh..: virat : par bhai ap mera past jantay hn ma ap b janti hn main kaisay kici larki ki zindagi barbad kardo... Vanshika: virat past past tha usay anay wala kal mat bnao.. Viren: haan meray bhai humari khushi keliye? Meray lye? Ma kelye... Vanshika: kbi toh meray lye agay bharo gay na apni maa kelye... Virat: hmmm ok... ( viren vanshika wz too happy viren came nd hug virat) viren:sach bhai tu tyar hai wah em so happy .. Vanshika: vada karo mujhsy tm dono ky tm dono apni zimadarian nibhao gay puri taran meri honay wali bahon ka khyal rakho gay aur khush rakho gay vada karo (she 4rwad her hand) virat nd viren: hum vada kartay hn... (nd 3 ov dm hugged) ( just dn swamini came in room) swamini: gud virat gud decizn em happy 4 u .. Acha ma ny rishikesh phone kia nd kal tm viren jeevika say aur tm virat manvi sy milo gay hum kal suba jaein gay wahan agay ki baatein karnay tyar rehna.. (nd she left) in rishikesh: (manvi had enough ov emotional atyachar she thought yeh dadi ha ya barbadi) manvi: tek ha beeji ab meri maa pay baat na laye ma tyar hn (jeevika wz too happy she hugged mannu) jeevika: sach mannu eb hum hmesha sath rahein gay .. Beeji: aray wah yeh hoi na meri potiyo wali baat chal manvi vada kar kha kasam apni di ki ky tu apna sb kuj is shadi ko day gi sachay dil say... Manvi: yeh kia ha guarantee agreement? Beeji: kha kasam di ki chal... Manvi: tek hai bai di ki kasam ma ic shadi ko eemandari c nibhaon gi... Beeji: shabash acha kal tyar rehna dono swamini jee aur viren aur virat kal aein gay tmsay milnay nd agay ki baat karnay.. Chal madan pinki bht tyarian hn... (beeji left wid madan nd pinki) b.beeji: aai chudail ab tu b chali jaye gi.. Manvi :apko toh khushi hogi na aur eb yeh kangan milay ga na mujy? ... B.beeji: meray marnay ky bad... Manvi: toh kb ka ticket katvaoon.? Jeevika: mannu tu b na ... B.beeji: teray aur jeevika ky bacho ki shadi ky bad... Manvi: hayee raam khair wo toh bad ki baat ha usay pehlay kal honay walay jiju aur honay walay pati dev sy mil tu lu... Jeevika: manvi tu khush toh ha na? Manvi: di ap khush ho?    jeevika: bht zada ab hum sath rahay gay hmesha martay dum tk... Manvi: toh mannu ki di khush toh mannu b khush shadi hi toh hai kbi toh karni hai toh eb ku ni.. Jeevika: hmmm kal arahay hn teray wo kia naam hai?? Manvi: virat vadera aur apkay wo kaun? Jeevika: viren vadera... B.beeji: tm dono naam mat rato jao jakay so jao... Jeevika nd manvi: jee b.beeji... (in room while layng on bed jeevika nd manvi thnkng same thng) manvi nd jeevika: nai zindagi wid vaderaz nd mannu / di... (in chandigardh) viren:kia soch raha ha bhai? Virat: bhai ma yeh shadi nibha toh paon ga na? Viren: bilkul dnt underestimate urcelf... Virat: apko tensn ni horai? Viren: horai hai par chal bs soja warna kal mulakat ka kia hoga behno ki sath.. Hmmm (viren nd virat smiled) in livng room... Dada ji: haan swamini pandit jee ny kia kaha? Swamini: 4 din bad roka nd pandit jee keh rahay thy ky yeh larkian ghar ma khushian laein gi .. Dadaji: acha ha kal jakay behnji sy masuri ma rokay ki baat karlena parso sb yahan ajaein phr yaha sy masouri 4 bacho ka roka.. Swamini: jee bauji... The end... Precap: first meeting virman nd virika. ... Do comment..<3

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nice update
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