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Hello Guys,
This is ValleryRose!
Here's my FF. I've taken one idea from the forum, but I promise you the rest of it is gonna be surprising and exciting! I hope you enjoy my work!

Chapter updated!

Chapter 2: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3198907&TPN=5

Chapter 3: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3198907&TPN=7

Chapter 4: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3198907&TPN=12

Chapter 5: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3198907&TPN=17

Chapter 6-1: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3198907&TPN=21

Chapter 6-2: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3198907&TPN=23

Chapter 7-1: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3198907&TPN=26

Chapter 7-2: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3198907&TPN=28

Chapter 8: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3198907&TPN=34

Chapter 9: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3198907&TPN=38

Chapter 10-1: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3198907&TPN=43

Chapter 10-2: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3198907&TPN=47

Chapter 11: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3198907&TPN=51

Chapter 12: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3198907&TPN=57

Chapter 13: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3198907&TPN=61

Chapter 14-1: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3198907&TPN=66

Chapter 14-2: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3198907&TPN=69

Chapter 15: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3198907&TPN=74

Chapter 16: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3198907&TPN=79

Chapter 17-1: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3198907&TPN=84

Chapter 17-2: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3198907&TPN=89

Chapter 18: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3198907&TPN=94

Chapter 19: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3198907&TPN=99

Chapter 20-1: www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3198907&TPN=103

Chapter 20-2: www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3198907&TPN=109

Chapter 21: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3198907&TPN=116





Chapter 25-B: 
Chapter 26-A:
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CHAPTER 1




"Taayi! Taayi! Mujhe nahin jaana hain Taayi' Please. Aayi aap bat karo na Chachi se.. Mamma nahin hain to kya hua? Aap hain na. Baba hain, Bhaiyya hain, Taayi hain' Mein aap sab ke bina nahin reh sakti'" A sixteen year old girl was crying and begging her only family not to let her father's family take her. The woman who the girl called Aayi, went to her daughter and said, "Kuch kaho na usse' bechari ro rahi hain.."
"Main kya karun Aayi?" she burst out. "Vo meri choti behen jaisi hain, mein bhi uske bina nahin rehpaungi. Lekin uske Kaka aur Kaki ke paas legal notices hain. Uske aayi aur Baba ke maut ke baad uspe unhi ka hak hain!" the twenty year old girl, ran to young girl and hugged her, "Chutki, ab rona bandh karo! Tujhe jaana hoga, ham kuch nahin kar sakte. Par ek baat yaad rakhna. Zindagi mein kabhi bhi tumhe meri zaroorat pade, tho main vaada karti hoon ki mein hamesha tumhare saat rahoongi'!" Saying so she ran into the house crying, leaving the young girl screaming,
"Taayi! Taayi!!!"


ETF office
3:30 PM

"Taayi!" Riya woke up with a scream. She had dozed off on the conference table, after solving a tricky case with the team.
Shree and Arjun, the only people who were present in the room, were shocked upon hearing her scream like that.
"Kya hua Ri? Tum theek ho? Aur ye Taayi kaun hain?" Shree tried asking her.
"Woh' woh' kuch nahin. Just a bad dream." Riya tried to shove the matter away. She then looked at Arjun, "Sorry sir." Arjun gave her a "you're unbelievable" look and left.
She then rolled her eyes at him. They've been working together for over nine months now. Yes, he wasn't rude to her anymore, but he wasn't nice to her either. Always giving her his "mujhse door raho" signals, as frequently as possible. Yet, they were close, they could understand each other. Still, very far from each other.
"Kitni der se so rahin thi?" she asked Shree.
"Ek ghante se," Shree said typing something in his laptop. "Ek ghanta! Mujhe uthaya kyun nahin???"
"Ri, tumhe fever hain'" "Mild fever'" Riya interrupted him.
"Whatever, agar thodi der rest karleti tho kya hota? Vaise Arjun sir ne bhi yahin kaha tha'" saying so Shree grinned. Riya raised an eyebrow at him.
"Bol rahi hun Shree, tum aur Chotu, dono pitenge'"
"Acha?" Chotu entered the room.
Riya sighed and left the conference hall to get herself some water.
"Ye Riya bhi na, kabhi kabhi had kar deti hain. Aur Arjun sir ke bare mein to kehneki zaroorat bhi nahin hain," Chotu said taking his seat.
"Pata nahin ye cold war kitne dino tak chalega!" Shree said looking at Chotu.
Just then Rathore entered the conference room with Arjun and Riya, followed by a person wearing a suit.

ACP Sameer Rathore took his seat. The man sat in the chair opposite to Rathore. Arjun took his place on the desk. Riya and Chotu stood behind the man, while Shree sat down with his laptop to note down the conversation.

The first one to speak was:
Name: Anoop Saxena
Age: 37
Occupation: Manager, Woodlands resort.
Other information: A Woodlands resort is famous for its exotic feel. It is a popular as an amazing honeymoon destination. It is built on vast terrain, giving the feel of an exotic island and creating separate world of its own.

"Rathore saab aap jante honge ki hamare mehmaan desh videsh se aate hain. Agar unhe ye pata chalega ki multiple kidnappings huye hain aur lashe bhi mili hain, tho ham kahin ke nahin rahenge'"
"Lekin aap ab tak ye baat dabake kaise rakh paye hain?" Arjun asked.
"Hamare bhi kuch tarike hote hain crisis handling ke' Humne unke families ko assure kiya hain unke gunegar pakde jayenge. Isliye ham apke paas aye hain." the manager explained.
"Definitely Mr. Saxena, ham vahaa ayenge aur un criminals ko zaroor dhoond ke nikalenge." Rathore assured Mr. Saxena.
"Lekin ek problem hain," Saxena said.
"Kya?" Arjun asked.
"Business tycoon Mr. Trivedi ki beti ki shaadi hone wali hain. Hamare resort me hi uske sari rasme rivaaz nibhaye jaane wale hain."
"Kya matlab hain aapka? Uska in cases ka kya lena dena hain?" Rathore inquired.
"Darasal unke Daamad ek American hain. Woh hamare reeti rivaazon ke hisaab se bhi shaadi karna chaahte the, isiliye hamare resort mein ye shaadi ho rahaan hain taki ladke waale bhi enjoy karenge. Unhe kal shaam ko dhamki mila ki agle target unke beti aur damaad honge. Ye bhi kaha ki agar woh police ke paas jayenge ya uss resort se nikalne ki koshish karenge tho unke beti ko jaan se maar dalenge."
"Un dhamki dene waalon ke demands kya the?" Rathore asked.
"Abhi kuch kahaan nahin hain sir."
Arjun was listening to all this carefully.
"Ye dhamki waali baat unhone aapko kab baataya tha?"Arjun asked Saxena.
"Kal jab unhone mujhe apne Asst. manager se baat karte huye suna tha. Tab mein aur mera asst. garden mein the. Woh bhi tehelne aaye the. Hum ETF ko bulane ki baat kar rahe the. Unhone suna aur hamein iss bare mein bataya. Woh chahte hain ki aap log unki bhi madat kare lekin kisiko bina pata chale."
"Target jyada tar kaun hain?" Rathore asked.
"Couples, Rathore saab. Mujhe yahin baat ajeeb lagti hain."
"Aap jyada iske bare mein sochiye mat.." Arjun said, "Hum hain uske liye."
Rathore shot him a glare.
Arjun didn't care.


"Then it's decided' tum aur Riya undercover jayenge newly married couple banke."
Riya choked on the water she was drinking and started coughing.
"Sir, mein aur Riya?" Shree was shocked. He knew there was going to be a undercover mission of this sort, but he and Riya? He expected that would be Arjun sir with Riya. Poor Riya, he thought.
Riya was still coughing, trying to recover from the shock. Chotu was giggling all this time.
"Koyi problem Riya?" Arjun asked with a voice filled with sarcasm.
Riya triya tried her best not to glare at him, fortunately succeded. "No sir. I'm fine." She then turned towards Rathore and said, "Hamein kya karna hoga sir?"
Rathore then explained to them that Shree and Riya will be a newly married couple who have come to that resort for their honeymoon. Arjun will be the one who will be invited to the wedding as a guest. Rathore and Chotu will remain hidden in the resort and help them whenever required.


The team was getting down the steps when the unexpected happened. Riya was talking to Chotu on her way down about the case. Shree was walking in front of the both of them wondering why Riya didn't protest. He was about to turn back when he slipped. Chotu tried to stop him by catching his bag, but ended up catching only his bag!

An hour later in the hospital.
Riya was sitting beside the bed Shree was resting on. She had expression that conveyed pity.
"Shayad kisi ne bahut powerful 'dua' mangi thi mere liye," Shree said looking at Riya.
Riya's eyes widened and then she glared at him. Then Chotu said, "Isne ya shayad kisi aur ne'" The trio knew who the other person being referred to was.
Arjun and Rathore entered the room. "Hairline fracture hain. Chal nahin paaoge'" Rathore said to Shree slamming the reports on the table.
"Tho ab kya karein sir?" Riya asked Rathore very innocently. Rathore turned towards Arjun. Arjun glared at Rathore. Shree and Chotu were laughing inside but maintained a calm face outside.
"Tho kya mein aur Riya chale jaayen?" Rathore said with an irritated voice to Arjun. This was clearly meant as a sarcasm. Riya would have choked on her water again if she was drinking any. Her expression was that of pure shock and she blurted out, "KYA!!!?"
Chotu and Shree now burst out laughing, looking at Riya.
Even Arjun tried his best to suppress a chuckle, but couldn't. Rathore stood there a little miffed.
"Itna hasne ki zaroorat nahin hain. Riya, tum aur Arjun jaaoge. Shree, tum Chotu ke saath resort mein hidden rahoge aur hamein technical support doge. Mein guest banke party mein jaaonga. Mujhe aur koyi arguments nahin chahiye! Is it clear?" he said particularly to Arjun. Arjun just walked towards the door. But before he exited the room he said, "Jaise aap kahein, Sir."

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Will be updated soon! Hope you guys are liking it... Do leave comments and tell me whether I should continue or not!


Chapter 2: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3198907&TPN=5


Edited by ValleryWorks - 20 December 2012 at 7:11am

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Don't forget to comment! I'll be needing the feedback, to decide whether to continue or not! Smile

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wow different concept  beautiful start resort...married couples...honeymmon n arjun riya perfect combination
 pls continue soon n pm me also i will be waiting

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Great start..
Continue soon!!

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Originally posted by kgmu86

wow different concept  beautiful start resort...married couples...honeymmon n arjun riya perfect combination
 pls continue soon n pm me also i will be waiting


Thanks! Will continue... it will be updated very soon... Smile

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Originally posted by ValleryWorks

Don't forget to comment! I'll be needing the feedback, to decide whether to continue or not! Smile

pls do continue its very beautiful imagination

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loved it...great beginning...waiting for the next update...cont soon

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hmmm thats really nice..Smile
shree n chotu are awesome n their expressions..LOL
plz continue soon n do PM me plzzz..

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