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new FF--Radev ke nai prem kahni part 28 on p- 54

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 12:14pm | IP Logged
will change the topic later .This is just how cb2 could have gone .Have been thinking about this for some time now.
Just want u guys input should i continue or forget it .


heres the precap


the story of Radev saga ---starts after barkha has maybe killed Radhika and Dev starts looking for Radhika

About 2-3 days since Radhika has been gone from the prohit house Dev is searching for Radhika he is really getting worried.One day he is looking for radhika in the village and a young boy starts tugging at devs pants ---trying to get devs attention

dev bends down and says aapko mere se kuch kahana hai--do you want to say something to me ?

little boy -- main aap ko kahni le jaana chahto hoon--i want take you some where

dev--ok lets go

after walkingfor a little while theboy points out to a big building wich has a big sign Kahna Ashram

the little boy takes dev behind the building to a small cottage there a woman is tending to a girl lying on a cot ---the girls body is bruised all over and has bruises around her neck .

Dev sees her and says Radhika !!!!!!!

ok guys if i get a decent amount of likes and responses will continue     


this is my first attemt at wrting a story --never done anything like this before ---hope you all will like

it .


thanks


Edited by seema12345 - 11 May 2013 at 10:12am

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 1:51pm | IP Logged
Sounds interesting pls continue

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Posted: 18 September 2012 at 8:18am | IP Logged
Yes pls keep writing--diff cb could have been

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Posted: 18 September 2012 at 12:12pm | IP Logged
Very interesting.Please continue.

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Posted: 18 September 2012 at 2:42pm | IP Logged
yup do continue

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Posted: 18 September 2012 at 5:52pm | IP Logged
Yes please continue I always wanted this to happen in CB2

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Posted: 18 September 2012 at 6:43pm | IP Logged
nice update more

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thanks guys will update soon

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