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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 10:41am | IP Logged
Originally posted by EkSapnoKiPari

Originally posted by DevvivekAshNI

Originally posted by EkSapnoKiPari

<font color="#ff3366">In starting itself you have made two mistakes and as i went on reading their were lots more!</font>

<font color="#ff3366">what i saw was completely unexpectable</font>

<font color="#ff3366">if you were a national writer you could have illustrated way better pankhu's reaction</font>


<font color="#ff3366">I'm now living alone here in london as doing job as Architect</font>

<font color="#ff3366">english is incorrect here!</font>

<font color="#ff3366">Take no offence please. Its just making me wonder are you really a national writer.</font>

<font color="#ff3366"><font size="2">You said we are allowed tocriticizeso I'm</font>criticizing</font>

sups,i wil tc of it nw. Yes,supriya,if u dnt believe then go to market n buy Heights magazine,u wil find me there! It depends on u dat u trust me or not!.i already said dat i m writing it casually w/o going in Details but i included songs! To elaborate feelings!

Yes m a National writer but also m a Human n humans make mistakes so pls spare me for mistakes haha.even after reading i thot i made mistake! Thnx 4 dis i wil improve it! Dev


<font color="#ff3366">You said to critize so i'm critizing Dev.</font>
<font color="#ff3366">Yes we all humans but we have some expectations from people!</font><font color="#ff3366">Don't you watch Jhalak on Colors? Dancers make mistakes but scores milte hai! If you hadnt said tocriticisei wouldnt hve</font>

<font color="#ff3366">You wrote simple and dint elaborate thats fine but your english was incorrect in lots of places and I feel its not related to elaboration.</font>

<font color="#ff3366">I'm only stating my views so next time you can improve as we expect more from our Dev. Hope you understand Dev please dont take me negative. We are a happy family here Dev and family members tell each other their mistakes and are truthful so am i hereEmbarrassedEmbarrassed</font>
i appreciate ur critisism sups. No,nw a days no i dnt watch it as I live in Medical Collage's Hostel but when m at home i watch it! It was written in hurry so sorry.yes i m Not takin u Negative yar. Yes we r family here! Thnx u.

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 10:43am | IP Logged
^^ coool...I'm eagerly w8ng for your next OS Dev! Meet our expectation this time! dont let us down!!! Want you to be the best writer in PKDH!Embarrassed

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 10:46am | IP Logged
Originally posted by EkSapnoKiPari

Originally posted by DevvivekAshNI

Originally posted by SAIBALROUTH

Please do not take my word to heart Dev but it seems you have written this quite hurriedly and in the process made some mistakes, would love to see a bigger and better OS from you. Take time and expose your talent.
yes sai it was written in hurry coz suddenly i hv got other works n i promisd u all to give OS today hence i jaldi jaldi gadbad ho gya! Pls Spare me for mistakes!


its okay Dev we understand
next time surprise us allBig smile
repliying to both Payal and Sups,

Payal yes i wil next tym dedicate a OS to supriya n i wil show her my talent.

Sups thnx u for undrstanding me! I realy lub when we talk! U knw i got sad hearing it n cried haha but then its human nature n i cntrolld haha! Thnx u.

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 10:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by EkSapnoKiPari

<font color="#ff3366">^^ coool...I'm eagerly w8ng for your next OS Dev! Meet our expectation this time! dont let us down!!! Want you to be the best writer in PKDH!Embarrassed</font>
i hope so too. Pls Reply my PM sups which I sent u days ago! Haha

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 10:57am | IP Logged
Originally posted by EkSapnoKiPari

hahahahaha latika waiter
i cant stop laughing OMG
hahahaha
latika waiter ahhahahahhaha


dev i cant stop cracking up!
5/5 for this latika thing!

ROFL
sups when Latika was waiter? Lol

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 10:59am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Poojaa_P

ohh me haven't listen to this song.. maybe i will now.. but probably won't understand the lyrics.. hope YT has english sub for it..



i wil cnvert it 4 u if u want! Pls listen it its fab!

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 11:00am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pepples_joy

Originally posted by DevvivekAshNI

Originally posted by pepples_joy

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#003366">Argg... I'm on pg 2...OuchOuch</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#003366">I should hv reserved...ConfusedConfused</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#003366">Anywayz leave it...</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#003366">Dev.. How did u know...??</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#003366">Pani Da is one of my most fav song... I jus love it...!!!!!!!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#003366">And about the OS... you made my heart stop for a min...!!! Gosh..!!</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#003366">I was like..!!ShockedShocked</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#003366">Glad that u ended in a good way...Embarrassed</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#003366">Loved it.. Keep writing more..Smile</font>
yup,thnx u so much preity its also my fab. Song its so touching! I knw coz dosti me kuch ni chupta! How similar v r!
Hehe i knw it wil b Twist hence i made dat way! What if it goes Sad Ending?


<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#003366">Sad ending??</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#003366">Don't dare to think of giving such a ending..!!!!!!!</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#003366">You are in middle of a bunch of girls.. Remember?????????Evil Smile</font>

yep i forgot,u all will kill me 4 sure! Haha?

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 11:01am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Poojaa_P

Agreed with sup,
Dev, just be careful with English next time, thanks.

okie darling

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