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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 10:12am | IP Logged
dev i agree with pujee and supriyaaa
 rectify it if you can,as  soon as posible...
as meaning is changing complitely...

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 10:16am | IP Logged
@Dev: I was surprised Dev you always claim to be a national writer but your work here wasnt upto that standard at all!

Your thoughts were fab but you did not convey them like a National Writer to us!

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 10:16am | IP Logged
Originally posted by EkSapnoKiPari

In starting itself you have made two mistakes and as i went on reading their were lots more!

what i saw was completely unexpectable

if you were a national writer you could have illustrated way better pankhu's reaction


I'm now living alone here in london as doing job as Architect

english is incorrect here!

Take no offence please. Its just making me wonder are you really a national writer.

You said we are allowed to criticize so I'm criticizing


I fully agree with this, and I too had troubles fathoming everything.

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 10:17am | IP Logged
Originally posted by EkSapnoKiPari

In starting itself you have made two mistakes and as i went on reading their were lots more!

what i saw was completely unexpectable

if you were a national writer you could have illustrated way better pankhu's reaction


I'm now living alone here in london as doing job as Architect

english is incorrect here!

Take no offence please. Its just making me wonder are you really a national writer.

You said we are allowed to criticize so I'm criticizing

dev dont dissapoint me yaar
do one thing
write another OS...and this time i want you to dedicate it to surpiya and show her you are national writer and she has to accept it as you are...
dont take her words to heart..infact show her what you can do
i am waiting for your next OS
do write soon Big smile



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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 10:17am | IP Logged
Dev, your imagination is quite good but please make your OS more sweet and fine to the readers, would love if you rectify some of the mistakes. 

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 10:20am | IP Logged
Background tunes are good choices Dev

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 10:23am | IP Logged
Please do not take my word to heart Dev but it seems you have written this quite hurriedly and in the process made some mistakes, would love to see a bigger and better OS from you. Take time and expose your talent. 

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 10:23am | IP Logged
Originally posted by SAIBALROUTH

Dev, your imagination is quite good but please make your OS more sweet and fine to the readers, would love if you rectify some of the mistakes. 

agreed...his imagination is great. I'm just surprised our Dev is National writer! I had much higher expectations from him!

It's like how they criticize dancers in Jhalak on Colors!

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