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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 9:12am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Sonia17

That was really good! I liked how you incorporated a bolly song in the story which has so much meaning! Embarrassed Aww pankhu is dreaming about Adi! Embarrassed This was really cute and beautiful! Clap Keep going with your OS's you are an amazing writer! Star
yeah i thot to make it NEW so i indulged a song in it...yeah lastly that was her dream...thanks u i will read ur works too,,,,,,Embarrassed

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 9:14am | IP Logged
Originally posted by angelfreak96

really nice..
thabks neha awwwBig smile

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 9:23am | IP Logged
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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 9:36am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sukhi...

edited...
waiting for ur cmment egarely

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 9:40am | IP Logged
Argg... I'm on pg 2...OuchOuch
I should hv reserved...ConfusedConfused
Anywayz leave it...

Dev.. How did u know...?? 
Pani Da is one of my most fav song... I jus love it...!!!!!!!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed

And about the OS... you made my heart stop for a min...!!! Gosh..!!
I was like..!!ShockedShocked

Glad that u ended in a good way...Embarrassed
Loved it.. Keep writing more..Smile

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 9:42am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sukhi...

<font size="2">res. wl read later.</font>
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<font size="2">finaly i read it...</font>
<font size="2">Awesome OS Clapi just love the tille...</font>
<font size="2">PAYA on ride... n she is in jeans kurti wow m dieng to see her in dis attire...Tongue</font>
<font size="2">OMG!!! dev even i ws shocked reading it wen suddenly adi introduced Latka jhatka as his wifeShockedShockedeven my heart was broken reading itCry... thank god its was a dream or else i cudn't sleep today...LOL</font>
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<font size="2">Thanks Dev for such a beautiful OSHug</font>
Yeah sukhi, coz i wana c her modern hence i jus imagind haha. Hehe yup latka jhatka is d twist here! Realy u likd it? Thnx u yar! Thnx u should i cntinue?

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 9:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by pepples_joy

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#003366">Argg... I'm on pg 2...OuchOuch</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#003366">I should hv reserved...ConfusedConfused</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#003366">Anywayz leave it...</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#003366">Dev.. How did u know...??</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#003366">Pani Da is one of my most fav song... I jus love it...!!!!!!!!EmbarrassedEmbarrassed</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#003366">And about the OS... you made my heart stop for a min...!!! Gosh..!!</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#003366">I was like..!!ShockedShocked</font>

<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#003366">Glad that u ended in a good way...Embarrassed</font>
<font face="Verdana, Arial, Helvetica, sans-serif" color="#003366">Loved it.. Keep writing more..Smile</font>
yup,thnx u so much preity its also my fab. Song its so touching! I knw coz dosti me kuch ni chupta! How similar v r!
Hehe i knw it wil b Twist hence i made dat way! What if it goes Sad Ending?

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 9:49am | IP Logged
Dev, it was amazingg ! 

ooo pankhuri in London <3, I like, i like ! would love to see her wearing jeans and kurti in the actual show ! 

OMG! i'm telling you, you gave me a heart attack when that latka jhatka came as adi's wife !?! WHAT THE.. ! i was like Shocked no ways! i planned your murder too! 
I felt so bad for pankhuri.. 
but then i read it was a dream ! thank god !! its PaYa forever ! 
Seriously, loved it ! :) 
do moree sooon !

thanks for this OS! 



Edited by Poojaa_P - 16 September 2012 at 9:48am

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