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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 8:58am | IP Logged
Guys i just wrote A OS pls crotisize and comment on my work...thanks you for asking me to write!!!

regards dev enjoy reading!!!!Embarrassed

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 9:06am | IP Logged
wow, an amazing OS..keep it up Big smile

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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 9:07am | IP Logged
res. wl read later.

 
finaly i read it...
Awesome OS Clap i just love the tille...
PAYA on ride... n she is in jeans kurti wow m dieng to see her in dis attire...Tongue
OMG!!! dev even i ws shocked reading it wen suddenly adi introduced Latka jhatka as his wifeShockedShocked even my heart was broken reading it Cry... thank god its was a dream or else i cudn't sleep today...LOL

Thanks Dev for such a beautiful OS Hug


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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 9:08am | IP Logged
Originally posted by MaanGeet_GurTi

wow, an amazing OS..keep it up Big smile
AWW PLS READ IT ONCE...pls thankuEmbarrassed
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Posted: 16 September 2012 at 9:09am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sukhi...

res. wl read later.
waiting for ur comment sukhiEmbarrassed eagerlyEmbarrassed

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That was really good! I liked how you incorporated a bolly song in the story which has so much meaning! Embarrassed Aww pankhu is dreaming about Adi! Embarrassed This was really cute and beautiful! Clap Keep going with your OS's you are an amazing writer! Star

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