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~"Dil Hai Tumhara~"(Rajeev n Amna) (Page 6)

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Posted: 01 July 2006 at 10:54am | IP Logged
Clap plz jaldise cont karo na plz coz i am really waitin to read what happens next
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Pheww ..!! just read ur whole story it s just fantastic Clap Continuee Sooooooon..!!
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Posted: 01 July 2006 at 12:11pm | IP Logged
nice part mehreen Clap
cont soon
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Mehreen jsut tooo good..i don't hav wordz...to tell..
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Nice Mehreen! Continue soon..!
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nice part mehrenn....i wonder wut da surprize is...plz write soon...u r killin me wid all ths suspense...
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ok now here da next part........

Amna:paata nahi kia smjhta hai apne aapko....... Angry Angry .....mai bhi jaoo gi party mai ......smjhta kia hai wo.........

just then gunn comes there.....

Gunn:kia baat hai amna......kis ka fone tha

Amna:wo os Rajeev Goenka ka......keh raha tha kaal unkay ghar party hai...hame invite kia hai......keh raha tha sub ko ana hai waha surprise hai..... Angry

Gunn:tum jao gi.... Smile

Amna:mai nahi sub jaye gay aur zaror jaye gay...
(she goes)

Gunn(2 herself):ajeeb larki hai ye......kabhi kuch kehte hai kabhi kuch.....


                  At Oberoi house.....

Rajeev apnay room mai hota hai.....aur hans raha hota hai...tabhi kripa aate hai......

Kripa:hi bhai........ Smile

Rajeev:hey hi sis... Wink ......howz ur day in college? Smile

Kripa:yaakkkkkk Dead .....bro........bohot bura......itnay buray boyz thay waha k.....

Rajeev:oh to ye hua... Tongue

Kripa:haan per waha bhumika ne mera bohot saath dia..... Smile

Rajeev:bhumika.....kon??
Shocked

Kripa:mere new frnd hai.....aur us ka czn arjun.....

Rajeev:oh...acha ji... Big smile ...acha kaal ghar mai party hai.....

Kripa:kis baat ki bro.....

Rajeev:hame Mr.Sharma ka 100 crore ka contract mil gaya hai

Kripa:wow that gr888.. Smile .....congratulations bro..... Wink

Rajeev:acha chalo...fresh ho jaoo.....

Kripa:ok......chalo...

Kripa apnay room mai chale jaate hai......

        now see wat happen in oberois house.....

Bhumika aur Arjun ghar phochte hain...

Bhumika:hi di.....hello bhabhi......di dekho kon aya hai..... Smile

Amna:aray Arjun......kayse ho aur kub aye...aur KT kaha hai...

Arjun:baas di kuch din phelay aya hoon......wo abhi london mai hai kaal aye gi.....mai aap k haan roko ga..


Amna:oh acha.....acha bhumi kaal aik party hai........tum tiyar ho jaana...

Bhumika:kis ki party Question ....aur kaha Question

Amna:hain koi.....baas tum chalna.....arjun tum bhi chalna.....tub tuk kt a jaye gi na......

Arjun:ji di.....zaror......

Gunn:bhumi........arjun ko room dikha do....

Bhumi:haan aoo arjun....... Smile

       
akhir party ka din a gaya.....sub tiyaran ho chuke hote hain......sub mehmaan a chukay hotay hain sirf Oberois nahi hotay.....rajeev unka intezar ker raha hota hai........suraj os k pass aata hai...

Suraj:rajeev kia baat hai yahan q kharay ho...sub to a gaye hain.....

Rajeev:nahi bhia sub nahi aye abhi to kuch khas loog ana baki hain..... Evil Smile ......

Suraj:konse khas loog hai tumhare... Question

Rajeev:hain koi...

Suraj:uff.....tm hi jaano...mai chalta hoon......

Rajeev:ok.....

jayse hi suraj jaata hai oberois aate hain

Rajeev:wellcome........wellcome ......aye na kub se aap ka intezar ho raaha hai,,,,,plz come.....

wo loog ander atay hain......wo ander jakay prerna,anurag,suraj manasvi se miltey hain.....
bhumika kripa ko dekhte hai

Bhumi:kripa.....tum ... Question

Kripa:bhumika......oh......ye mera ghar hai............aur rajeev meray bhai hain.....

Bhumi:oh.....wow gr88 Cool

Amna akayle khare hote hai......rajeev uskay pass aata hai.....

Rajeev:oh hi miss Amna... Wink

Amna:tum.....

Rajeev:to aap a gaye..... Embarrassed

Amna:sedhay sedhay kahe kia baat hai..... Angry

Rajeev:aap yahan surprise k liye aye haina.....

Amna:apni falto bakwas baand karo......aur bataooo q bulaya tha mujhe..... Angry Question

Rajeev:oh itne bechayne..... Cool

Amna:just shut up u.........smjhay aur bolo gay aab... Angry

Rajeev:itna ghusa acha nahi hota...... Embarrassed chalo tumhara ghusa khatam karne k liye tumhey wo surprise bata doon.........wo dekho..... Smile dekho dekho gate pe kon hai........

Amna pichay murte n shocked Shocked

ok here da parts end...hope u like it.....plz do comments......
luv
Mehreen..... Wink
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Clap awsome part just cant wait to read what the surprise is plz cont soon

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