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~"Dil Hai Tumhara~"(Rajeev n Amna) (Page 5)

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Posted: 29 June 2006 at 9:28am | IP Logged

Originally posted by sweet priya

its great Clap
mere saath reh k bohat kuch seekh gayi ho... LOL .

thanx Hiba......hey hello miss........mana k mai aap ki czn hoon........per aap se sikhon aur wo bhi mai......LOL.....zarorat nahi mujhe.................wase aap mere saath reh ker bohot kuch sikh gaye hain.........

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Posted: 29 June 2006 at 5:06pm | IP Logged
nice story mehreen...porr aamna....lost da contract....but since raj got it...itz all gud....will b eagerly waitin 4 da nxt partz...
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Posted: 29 June 2006 at 8:47pm | IP Logged
Clap .it was a gr8 part. plz cont soon
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Posted: 30 June 2006 at 7:36am | IP Logged
thanx everyone........i"ll surely continue it 2morrow......
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Posted: 30 June 2006 at 10:44am | IP Logged
heyyyllooo mehreen...hehe.....just read your story ......its great all my fav characters......love ittt...jaldhi continue karna.......me waiting for arjun....
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Posted: 01 July 2006 at 8:37am | IP Logged
thanx everyone...ok now here da next part

Rajeev aur Suraj ghar phone ker k bata dayte hain...Amna ghusay mai ghar phochte hai......

Gunn:Amna kia baat hai itne ghusay mai q ho...... Confused

Amna:wo Rajeev aur Suraj apne aapko paata nahi kia smjhte hain.... Angry Angry

Gunn:per howa kia

Amna:bhabhi wo contract jo pochalay kaye salon se hame milta hai wo es baar unhey kayse mil gaya.. Angry Angry

Gunn:amna ye to business hai aur ays ahota reh ta hai.....

Amna:nahi bhabhi es project k liye maine aur bhai ne bohot hard work kia hai......phir ye ..... Angry Angry

Gunn:Amna calm down.....kuch nahi hota es baar nahi to agle baar mil jaye ga.....

Amna:nahi bhabhi.....nahi.........

Amna ghusay Angry se apnay room mai chale jaate hai......

Gunn:ye larki pagal hai pore........

      Now at college.....
Kripa bohot nervous hote hai.....tabhi uski nazar boyz per parhte hai jo waha ragging ker rahe hotay hain.....
tabhi use awaz aate hai.....

Girl:xucess me.....kia baat hai...

Kripa:wo.....

Girl:hi i m bhumika

Kripa:hi i m kripa.....n new in this college.....

Bhumika:i m also new......wase kia baat hai...

Kripa:wo waha.....

Bhumika:oh...ye baat hai.....
Tabhi bhumi ko koi pochay se awaz dayta hai
Boy:bhumika tum yahan

They turn
Bhumika:arjun......tum ...tum london se kub aye...

Arjun:baas kuch dino phelay...

Bhumi:aur KT kaha hai.....

Arjun:wo london mai hai kaal aye ge...

Bhumi:oh acha...well meet my new frnd Kripa

Arjun:hi kripa i m Arjun...bhumi's czn...

Kripa:hi..

Arjun:kia baat hai koi prob

Bhumi:yaar college ki wohi porani harkat

Arjun:ohh ragging.....chalo dosre side se chalte hain..

Bhumi:ok aoo kripa...

Kripa:hmm.....chalo

           At goenka house......
Sub ghar mai Suraj aur Rajeev ka intezar kar rahe hote hain........wo loog aate hain

Prerna:congratulations beta..... Smile

RnS:thanx mama... Tongue

Anurag:beta aaj tumne bohot acha kaam kia hai.....

Manasvi:congrats rajeev......dekha suraj.....rajeev ne kitne mehnat ki hai

Suraj:aray wah mere mehnat nahi hai kia......

Manasvi:bilkul......sare raat to sotay rehte thay.....aur rajeev sare raat jagta tha.....

Suraj:manasvi....

Rajeev:bhabhi...

Prerna:wase kuch bhi ho manasvi hamesha rajeev ki side layte hai q.....manasvi

Rajeev:bhai sedhi se baat hai bhabhi ka sub se acha dost dewar hota hai......q bhahi..... Wink

Manasvi:bikul LOL

Anurag:chalo q na es mokay ko celebrate karay.....

Manasvi:haan papa bilkul.....aur haan rajeev london se angad aur Lakshya ka fone aya tha......wo bhi kaal a rahay hain....

Rajeev:kia sachi Big smile .....wo dono a rahy hain.....phir to part kaal hi hogi...... Smile

Prerna:theek hai.....acha chalo aab tum loog fresh ho jao.....manasvi aoo beta khana laga day... Smile

Manasvi:ji mama chalay....

        AT Oberois house
Amna is in her room n in very angry mood...when krishna comes there...

Krishna:Amna itna ghusa acha nahi hai......

Amna:bhai.. Cry

Krishna:chalo anso Cry saaf karo.....n gave me a cute smile..... Smile

Amna: Smile .....( LOL LOL ...mujhe hansi a rahi hai)

Achanak hi fone ki bell hote hai......Amna fone uthate hai.....

Amna:Hello

Voice:Hello.....Miss Amna Oberoi

Amna:speaking

Voice:mai Rajeev bol raha hoon.....

Amna:wat .....tum......tumne yaha fone q kia.....

Rajeev:kaal hamare ghar chote se party hai contract milne ki khushi mai.....aap ko invite kerna tha

Amna:aapne soch bhi kayse lia hum aye gay Angry

Rajeev:socha nahi dil ne kaha aur maine fone ker dia Embarrassed

Amna:apni soch apnay pass rakhe ga Angry

Rajeev:aap aye to sahi aap k liye waha aik surprise hai..... Tongue

Amna:wat?? Ouch

Rajeev dissconnests the call.....

Amna:hey.....hello...hello.....

Amna(to herself):paata nahi kia smjhta hai apne aapko.....mai bh jao gi kaaal........

ok bye......



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Posted: 01 July 2006 at 8:48am | IP Logged

Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap....mehreen awesssommee storyy keep the good work up !!! u rock gal Clap Clap Clap....its juzzzz fantastic.....mindblastinggg......cont sooon Embarrassed

surbhi

 

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Posted: 01 July 2006 at 10:37am | IP Logged
Originally posted by lklk

Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap Clap....mehreen awesssommee storyy keep the good work up !!! u rock gal Clap Clap Clap....its juzzzz fantastic.....mindblastinggg......cont sooon Embarrassed

surbhi

 

thanx surbhi...bohot acha laga tumne comments kiye.kafi dino baad tumhey dekha..............Tongue

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