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~"Dil Hai Tumhara~"(Rajeev n Amna) (Page 4)

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Posted: 29 June 2006 at 3:38am | IP Logged

Originally posted by sweet priya

wowwwwww mehreen Clap

its really nice Wink
write soon

      HIBA

 

thanx dear czn HIBA 4 ur comments.....LOL

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Posted: 29 June 2006 at 3:39am | IP Logged

Originally posted by jyothi_cool

Clap u r a fab writer. plz cont soon

thanx yaar 4 calling me fab riter.....

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Posted: 29 June 2006 at 3:41am | IP Logged

Originally posted by sidroobaba25

good work Clap

thanx......Tongue

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Posted: 29 June 2006 at 4:05am | IP Logged
thanx all 4 wonderfull comments.....here da next part....

           At Oberoi's house.........
aik larki bohot bechayne se hall mai idhar udhar tehel rahe hote hai.....tabhi stiars se aik aur larki utarte hai aue kehte hai

Girl:Amna di kia hua........aap itne tension mai q hain

Amna:aa......aa.........bhumika......nahi kuch nahi ayse hi........

Bhumika:kuch to hua hai bataye ki baat hai........

Amna:actually wo aaj Mr.Sharma ka jo 100crore ka contract hai os ka aaj result hai to.....

Bhumika:to.........kia hua........har saal ki tarhan aap ko hi mile ga........

Amna:nahi bhumi.....nahi........es baar hamare saath hamare opposite Goenka's hain.........n u know wat Mr.Rajeev Goenka aur Mr.Suraj Goenka......bohot achay business man hain..........

Bhumika:diii kuch nahi hoga........contract aap ko hi mile ga......wase kitne bajay hai meeting......

Amna:8:00 bajay.....(after seeing her watch)......abhi 7:30 huey hain mai nikalte hoon......tum college chale jaana......ok......

Bhumika:ok di bye

Amna:bye.....

                Now at meeting......Amna enters at meeting room.......

Manager:Hello Ma'm

Amna:hi.....meeting start nahi hue......

Manager:actually ma'm abhi tuk Goenka's nahi aye......

Amna:oh acha.....(then thinks in mind):ayse keh rahe hain jayse contract unay he mile ga........ Angry

        After 5 MIN
Manager:lijiye Mr.Rjeev n Suraj Goenka a gaye.........

        They enter in the room n sit infront of Ammna
Manager:Humne aap sub ki files dekhe .........aur humne ye decide kia hai k es baar ye contract hum Mr.Suraj aur Rajeev Goenka ko day rahe hain........Congratulation.....

Rajeev n Suraj:thanx......

then everyone conngrats them n leave.....only Amna left......Amna un k paas jaate hain Phelay Suraj se haath milate hai......phir Rajeev se milate hai.....n then leaves........

Rajeev:Bhaia ye kon thi???

Suraj:ye Amna Oberoi......har saal ye contract in ki company ko milta hai......es baar hame mil gaya........

Rajeev:wah......kia baat hai......lagta hai kafi ghusay mai thi.....

Suraj:haan........acha pheley ghar phone ker k bata do.........werna mama aur papa kahe gay......

Rajeev:haan.....kerta hoon........
He calls home.....n told everyone about this......

Ok guyz here 2 part end.....plzz do comments

Precap:Party at Goenka's house......entery of Arjun n........ahem ahem Embarrassed ........abhi bata dun gi to agay kia maza LOL LOL ..........do comments.........

luv
Mehreen.....
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Posted: 29 June 2006 at 5:15am | IP Logged
awww....lovely parts... Clap

i read all the parts...i really liked the part when amna was kinda angry over the contract thing... Wink Tongue Big smile

continue soon....dear Tongue Big smile
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Posted: 29 June 2006 at 7:49am | IP Logged
its great Clap
mere saath reh k bohat kuch seekh gayi ho... LOL .
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Posted: 29 June 2006 at 7:51am | IP Logged
write soon Big smile
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Posted: 29 June 2006 at 9:26am | IP Logged

Originally posted by Shirley

awww....lovely parts... Clap

i read all the parts...i really liked the part when amna was kinda angry over the contract thing... Wink Tongue Big smile

continue soon....dear Tongue Big smile

thanx shirley........i also like that part......LOL

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