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~"Dil Hai Tumhara~"(Rajeev n Amna) - Page 5

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Posted: 17 years ago
ok now here da next part........

Amna:paata nahi kia smjhta hai apne aapko....... 😡 😡 .....mai bhi jaoo gi party mai ......smjhta kia hai wo.........

just then gunn comes there.....

Gunn:kia baat hai amna......kis ka fone tha

Amna:wo os Rajeev Goenka ka......keh raha tha kaal unkay ghar party hai...hame invite kia hai......keh raha tha sub ko ana hai waha surprise hai..... 😡

Gunn:tum jao gi.... 😊

Amna:mai nahi sub jaye gay aur zaror jaye gay...
(she goes)

Gunn(2 herself):ajeeb larki hai ye......kabhi kuch kehte hai kabhi kuch.....


                  At Oberoi house.....

Rajeev apnay room mai hota hai.....aur hans raha hota hai...tabhi kripa aate hai......

Kripa:hi bhai........ 😊

Rajeev:hey hi sis... 😉 ......howz ur day in college? 😊

Kripa:yaakkkkkk 🤢 .....bro........bohot bura......itnay buray boyz thay waha k.....

Rajeev:oh to ye hua... 😛

Kripa:haan per waha bhumika ne mera bohot saath dia..... 😊

Rajeev:bhumika.....kon??
😲

Kripa:mere new frnd hai.....aur us ka czn arjun.....

Rajeev:oh...acha ji... 😃 ...acha kaal ghar mai party hai.....

Kripa:kis baat ki bro.....

Rajeev:hame Mr.Sharma ka 100 crore ka contract mil gaya hai

Kripa:wow that gr888.. 😊 .....congratulations bro..... 😉

Rajeev:acha chalo...fresh ho jaoo.....

Kripa:ok......chalo...

Kripa apnay room mai chale jaate hai......

        now see wat happen in oberois house.....

Bhumika aur Arjun ghar phochte hain...

Bhumika:hi di.....hello bhabhi......di dekho kon aya hai..... 😊

Amna:aray Arjun......kayse ho aur kub aye...aur KT kaha hai...

Arjun:baas di kuch din phelay aya hoon......wo abhi london mai hai kaal aye gi.....mai aap k haan roko ga..


Amna:oh acha.....acha bhumi kaal aik party hai........tum tiyar ho jaana...

Bhumika:kis ki party ❓ ....aur kaha ❓

Amna:hain koi.....baas tum chalna.....arjun tum bhi chalna.....tub tuk kt a jaye gi na......

Arjun:ji di.....zaror......

Gunn:bhumi........arjun ko room dikha do....

Bhumi:haan aoo arjun....... 😊

       
akhir party ka din a gaya.....sub tiyaran ho chuke hote hain......sub mehmaan a chukay hotay hain sirf Oberois nahi hotay.....rajeev unka intezar ker raha hota hai........suraj os k pass aata hai...

Suraj:rajeev kia baat hai yahan q kharay ho...sub to a gaye hain.....

Rajeev:nahi bhia sub nahi aye abhi to kuch khas loog ana baki hain..... 😈 ......

Suraj:konse khas loog hai tumhare... ❓

Rajeev:hain koi...

Suraj:uff.....tm hi jaano...mai chalta hoon......

Rajeev:ok.....

jayse hi suraj jaata hai oberois aate hain

Rajeev:wellcome........wellcome ......aye na kub se aap ka intezar ho raaha hai,,,,,plz come.....

wo loog ander atay hain......wo ander jakay prerna,anurag,suraj manasvi se miltey hain.....
bhumika kripa ko dekhte hai

Bhumi:kripa.....tum ... ❓

Kripa:bhumika......oh......ye mera ghar hai............aur rajeev meray bhai hain.....

Bhumi:oh.....wow gr88 😎

Amna akayle khare hote hai......rajeev uskay pass aata hai.....

Rajeev:oh hi miss Amna... 😉

Amna:tum.....

Rajeev:to aap a gaye..... 😳

Amna:sedhay sedhay kahe kia baat hai..... 😡

Rajeev:aap yahan surprise k liye aye haina.....

Amna:apni falto bakwas baand karo......aur bataooo q bulaya tha mujhe..... 😡 ❓

Rajeev:oh itne bechayne..... 😎

Amna:just shut up u.........smjhay aur bolo gay aab... 😡

Rajeev:itna ghusa acha nahi hota...... 😳 chalo tumhara ghusa khatam karne k liye tumhey wo surprise bata doon.........wo dekho..... 😊 dekho dekho gate pe kon hai........

Amna pichay murte n shocked 😲

ok here da parts end...hope u like it.....plz do comments......
luv
Mehreen..... 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏 awsome part just cant wait to read what the surprise is plz cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanx everyone......adi,hiba,iman,saara,jyohti,and group_1223.....
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Posted: 17 years ago
hmmmmmmmmmmmmm mehreen 👏
lovely part 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
Great!!! Mehreen post the next part soon yaaaar!! Pata nahi kaunsa surprise hai?!!?!
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Posted: 17 years ago
👏 ..wonderful..read the last two parts....great work.....kya surprize hai??.... 😉 ..continue soon 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: sara_16

Great!!! Mehreen post the next part soon yaaaar!! Pata nahi kaunsa surprise hai?!!?!

 

thanx sara......hmmmmmm surpriseee........

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: rajeev1

👏 ..wonderful..read the last two parts....great work.....kya surprize hai??.... 😉 ..continue soon 😉

thanksssss farah............kia baat hai ji sub surprise k pichay hain.........😆.....maza a raha hai......intezar karooo bacha intezar............sabar ka phal metha hota hai........😉

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Posted: 17 years ago
heyi great story 👏
.. continu soon..
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Posted: 17 years ago
thankuuuuu everyone..............
here da next part.....(i know sun surprise k liye bechain hain........)

Rajeev:Amna itna ghusa acha nahi......wo dekho gate pe........dekho dekho......... 😊

Amna pichay murte hai n shocked.......

Amna:aysa kayse ho sakta hai........ye ye..... ❓

Rajeev:aysa hi hai.............. 😳

Amna waha jaate hai......wahan do loog kharay hotay hain suraj manasvi k saath.....Amna says......

Amna:mama papa.......aap.....aap yahan kayse..... 😲

Ronit:beta.....tum nahi jaante...per hum aur Goenka's kafi achay dost hain........ye baat humne sirf tumse chupaye......per es ki khas waja thi..... 😊

Amna:per...aap ne mujhse.....ye sub....

Simirti:ufffff amna ........bata day gay ye sub bhi......wase humay to asal mai rajeev ne bulaya hai q rajeev...

Rajeev comes there.....

Rajeev:haan anty.....aap se milnay ka kafi dil tha......es liye bula liya.....wasay aapki beti to......ufff.....her time ghusa nak pe rehta hai.....q Amna ji... 😳 😳

Amna(wid angry tone):smjhte kia ho tum apnay aapko... 😡 😡 ...jubse milay ho dimagh kharab ker dia hai mera...

Ronit:beta......kia baat hai.....q us pe ghusa ho rahi hoo... 😕

Amna:mai yahan nahi raho gi kise toor nahi......mai abhi ese time ja rahi hoon..... 😡

Manasvi:Amna.....plzzz ruk jaoo na 😊

Suraj:haan amna plzzzzz 😛

Amna:theek hai.....

Manasvi:that's gud.....chaliye anty udhar chaltay hain......

wo sub udhar chalay jaatay hain.....sirf Rajeev Amna reh jatay hain........
Rajeev:kaysa laga surprise.......Miss Amna 😳 😳

Amna reamins silent........

Rajeev:aray gongi hain kia......ya zaban pe tala laga hua hai........wase to her time ghusa kerte rehte hain......jub baat na kerne ho to kerte hain aur aab poch raha hoon to......ajeeb ho.......chalo shukar hai chup to hue..... 😆

Amna:u just shut up.....

Rajeev:es k ilawa koi word aata hai lagata hai.........

Amna:uu..... 😡

Rajeev:not again amna.....chalo dance kete hain..

Amna:mai aur tumhare saath.......tum hotay kon ho.....

Rajeev:hota to nahi per ho jaooooo ga......bohot jald......don't worry 😳 😳 😳

Amna:wat????? 😡

Rajeev:hmmmmmmm... 😳
aur rajeev waha se chala jaata hai gatey hue
"tum dil ki dharkan mai rehte ho........rehte ho........." 😆 😆 😆

Amna:idiot......paata nahi kia smjhta hai....... 😡 😡 ..
bhumi comes there.....

Bhumi:kia baat hai di.....kia howa......

Amna:kuch nahi wo rajeev..... 😡

Bhumi:uff di...rajeev je.....i mean rajeev bhia itnay achay hain.....aur aap hain k........

Amna:wat........wo tumhare kubse bhaia huay...

Bhumi:diii aap bhi na kitnay sawal kerte ho......mai ja rahi hoon......(jatay huay)...aur haan aik baat kahon

Amna:kahaiye...

Bhumi sings:raja ki aye gi barat rangele hogi raat........ 😆 😆 (n she goes)

Amna:ajeeb loog hain.....paata nahi kia ho gaya sub ko.....aur wo rajeev.....wase mai rajeev k baray mai q soch rahi hoon itna...... 😕

ok guyz here da part ends......wid lot of surprise...... 😆 😆 😆 .....

Coming up:aik aur surprise...party mai ye sub q hua.....rajeev ne song q gaya.....bhumi ne ye song q gaya...... 😆 😆 😆
byeeeee....sochtay rahay...aur answer day........

tc
luv
Mehreen...... 🤗