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~"Dil Hai Tumhara~"(Rajeev n Amna) - Page 4

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Posted: 17 years ago
heyyyllooo mehreen...hehe.....just read your story ......its great all my fav characters......love ittt...jaldhi continue karna.......me waiting for arjun....
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Posted: 17 years ago
thanx everyone...ok now here da next part

Rajeev aur Suraj ghar phone ker k bata dayte hain...Amna ghusay mai ghar phochte hai......

Gunn:Amna kia baat hai itne ghusay mai q ho...... 😕

Amna:wo Rajeev aur Suraj apne aapko paata nahi kia smjhte hain.... 😡 😡

Gunn:per howa kia

Amna:bhabhi wo contract jo pochalay kaye salon se hame milta hai wo es baar unhey kayse mil gaya.. 😡 😡

Gunn:amna ye to business hai aur ays ahota reh ta hai.....

Amna:nahi bhabhi es project k liye maine aur bhai ne bohot hard work kia hai......phir ye ..... 😡 😡

Gunn:Amna calm down.....kuch nahi hota es baar nahi to agle baar mil jaye ga.....

Amna:nahi bhabhi.....nahi.........

Amna ghusay 😡 se apnay room mai chale jaate hai......

Gunn:ye larki pagal hai pore........

      Now at college.....
Kripa bohot nervous hote hai.....tabhi uski nazar boyz per parhte hai jo waha ragging ker rahe hotay hain.....
tabhi use awaz aate hai.....

Girl:xucess me.....kia baat hai...

Kripa:wo.....

Girl:hi i m bhumika

Kripa:hi i m kripa.....n new in this college.....

Bhumika:i m also new......wase kia baat hai...

Kripa:wo waha.....

Bhumika:oh...ye baat hai.....
Tabhi bhumi ko koi pochay se awaz dayta hai
Boy:bhumika tum yahan

They turn
Bhumika:arjun......tum ...tum london se kub aye...

Arjun:baas kuch dino phelay...

Bhumi:aur KT kaha hai.....

Arjun:wo london mai hai kaal aye ge...

Bhumi:oh acha...well meet my new frnd Kripa

Arjun:hi kripa i m Arjun...bhumi's czn...

Kripa:hi..

Arjun:kia baat hai koi prob

Bhumi:yaar college ki wohi porani harkat

Arjun:ohh ragging.....chalo dosre side se chalte hain..

Bhumi:ok aoo kripa...

Kripa:hmm.....chalo

           At goenka house......
Sub ghar mai Suraj aur Rajeev ka intezar kar rahe hote hain........wo loog aate hain

Prerna:congratulations beta..... 😊

RnS:thanx mama... 😛

Anurag:beta aaj tumne bohot acha kaam kia hai.....

Manasvi:congrats rajeev......dekha suraj.....rajeev ne kitne mehnat ki hai

Suraj:aray wah mere mehnat nahi hai kia......

Manasvi:bilkul......sare raat to sotay rehte thay.....aur rajeev sare raat jagta tha.....

Suraj:manasvi....

Rajeev:bhabhi...

Prerna:wase kuch bhi ho manasvi hamesha rajeev ki side layte hai q.....manasvi

Rajeev:bhai sedhi se baat hai bhabhi ka sub se acha dost dewar hota hai......q bhahi..... 😉

Manasvi:bikul 😆

Anurag:chalo q na es mokay ko celebrate karay.....

Manasvi:haan papa bilkul.....aur haan rajeev london se angad aur Lakshya ka fone aya tha......wo bhi kaal a rahay hain....

Rajeev:kia sachi 😃 .....wo dono a rahy hain.....phir to part kaal hi hogi...... 😊

Prerna:theek hai.....acha chalo aab tum loog fresh ho jao.....manasvi aoo beta khana laga day... 😊

Manasvi:ji mama chalay....

        AT Oberois house
Amna is in her room n in very angry mood...when krishna comes there...

Krishna:Amna itna ghusa acha nahi hai......

Amna:bhai.. 😭

Krishna:chalo anso 😭 saaf karo.....n gave me a cute smile..... 😊

Amna: 😊 .....( 😆 😆 ...mujhe hansi a rahi hai)

Achanak hi fone ki bell hote hai......Amna fone uthate hai.....

Amna:Hello

Voice:Hello.....Miss Amna Oberoi

Amna:speaking

Voice:mai Rajeev bol raha hoon.....

Amna:wat .....tum......tumne yaha fone q kia.....

Rajeev:kaal hamare ghar chote se party hai contract milne ki khushi mai.....aap ko invite kerna tha

Amna:aapne soch bhi kayse lia hum aye gay 😡

Rajeev:socha nahi dil ne kaha aur maine fone ker dia 😳

Amna:apni soch apnay pass rakhe ga 😡

Rajeev:aap aye to sahi aap k liye waha aik surprise hai..... 😛

Amna:wat??

Rajeev dissconnests the call.....

Amna:hey.....hello...hello.....

Amna(to herself):paata nahi kia smjhta hai apne aapko.....mai bh jao gi kaaal........

ok bye......



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Posted: 17 years ago

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏....mehreen awesssommee storyy keep the good work up !!! u rock gal 👏 👏 👏....its juzzzz fantastic.....mindblastinggg......cont sooon 😳

surbhi

 

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Posted: 17 years ago
Originally posted by: lklk

👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏....mehreen awesssommee storyy keep the good work up !!! u rock gal 👏 👏 👏....its juzzzz fantastic.....mindblastinggg......cont sooon 😳

surbhi

 

thanx surbhi...bohot acha laga tumne comments kiye.kafi dino baad tumhey dekha..............😛

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Posted: 17 years ago
👏 plz jaldise cont karo na plz coz i am really waitin to read what happens next
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Posted: 17 years ago
Pheww ..!! just read ur whole story it s just fantastic 👏 Continuee Sooooooon..!!
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice part mehreen 👏
cont soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
Mehreen jsut tooo good..i don't hav wordz...to tell..
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Posted: 17 years ago
Nice Mehreen! Continue soon..!
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice part mehrenn....i wonder wut da surprize is...plz write soon...u r killin me wid all ths suspense...