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Sooraj was confused.
Confused and flustered. Since morning,
his mind has been twirling around the same thing than the jalebis he made... He
looked across the panes nearer to the worship place. Is she there around...???? No,
his eyes couldn't find his Sita nearer to Shri Ram's idol.
More clearly, from yesterday night, Sandhya was behaving a little different.
She was just angry... Though she was not showing it, he sensed it from her
gestures.
Making jalebis, Sooraj kept thinking - Sandhya ji aise achanak naaraz kyun hai mujhse? Main ne aisa kya galti ki...? Ya phir koi aur wajah se pareshan hai..? Ab dukaan mein itna bheed hai..., kaise jaa sakta hoon? Thodi der ke baad jaakar pooch leta hoon...! (Why Sandhya is angry? What mistake I did? Or is there anything else that disturbs her? The shop is full with customers that I can't go now. I should go after sometime & try to know what happened.)
It was about to be noon.
His sweet shop was near to empty. Handing over duties to Bapuda, Sooraj moved towards home... His eyes, moreover his heart, searched for his dove all over... He felt more disappointed as he couldn't find her anywhere. He moved inside kitchen, but she was not there too... While stepping out, he saw her coming towards kitchen with a vessel in her hand..
Crossing one hand towards
door, he stopped her.
He softly enquired- kya baat hai yeh Sandhya ji?. (what is the matter Sandhya
ji?)
Sandhya- kya hai Sooraj ji?
Sooraj- aap yeh jo kar rahi hai? (that you're doing)
Sandhya- main? Main kya kar rahi hoon Sooraj ji? Aap raaste se hat jaayiye, mujhe rasoi mein bahut kaam hai! (I..what am I doing? Now you kindly move from my way. I've lot of stuffs to deal with in kitchen)
Sooraj moved his other hand also and she stepped backwards... She got circled in
his arms against the wall... He moved more closer to her with a naughty smile... With a glitter in eyes that kept saying a thousand wo ayi nees, he whispered- kya baat hai Sandhya ji? Batayiye
na! (what is the matter, won't you tell me?)
She pulled her hands upward and pushed him back with the vessel.
Walking inside, she said- Sooraj ji, mujhe kaam karne do. (let me do this work)
He also moved inside. ..She was busy cooking...
Sooraj(turing towards the stove)- kya baat hai Sandhya ji? Aap mujhse naaraz kyon hai? Kya galti kiya hai main ne? (what happened? Why are you angry with me? What mistake did I do?)
Meanwhile Sandhya stepped behind him to get something & he continued- batayiye na Sandhya ji. Main ne jaan boochkar kuch nahin kiya. Agar anjaane mein koi galti ho gayi toh maafi maang raha hoon. Abhi toh batayiye na. (tell me Sandhya ji. I deliberately didn't do anything. And I'm asking forgiveness for unknown mistake. At least now tell me.)
No answer.
Sooraj- batayiye na Sandhya ji. Kya baat hai?
Again no answer.
Sooraj (turning back)- batt..tt... He bemused seeing Bhabho standing at door, glaring him.
Sooraj (floundering)- woh...woh...Bhabho..main.. paa..
Bhabho- haan...haan..chora, manne pata hain tujhe paani chahiye. Aaj kal tanne toh inna pyaaz lagi hai ki poore Pushkar ke liye rakha hua paani ek hi baar pi lega... (son, I know you need water. These days you're so thirsty that you may even drink water for the whole city at a time)
Sooraj- Bhabho...wo..woh...
Bhabho- ab ke wo wo kar raha hai? Jaa, apne dukaan ja. Paani abhi rakh ke ayi hoon. Tu toh idhar aise bhatak raha hai jiase thari beendni tujhe pilane paani muh mein lekar ghoom rahi hai...haye mhara raam ji, sirf mhara karam hi kyun foota hai...? (now what wo wo you're doing. Go your shop. I've kept water there. And you're roaming here like your wife is walking everywhere with her mouth filled with water for you)
Sooraj desperately walked towards his shop.
After sometime, Sandhya came there to give his lunch. She was frowned and
looked as if she has been hurted deeply...
She just kept the lunch box on table saying- Sooraj ji, aap ka khana. (your
food)
Sooraj reached near table, grumbling like an innocent boy- ab toh batayiye na Sandhya ji. Kya hua hai aap ko? Aisi kaun si baat hai jo aap ko itna zyaada pareshan kar rahi hai? (now you tell me. What happened to you? What is the matter that troubles you this much?)
She didn't say a word, she was gazing somewhere in busy street...
Softening his voice, with all love and care he has for her, he spoke- aap mujhe...mujhe batayiye na. (you tell me)
Sandhya (frowned and hesitated)- Mujhe bahut zyada kaam hai Sooraj ji. Main jaa rahi hoon. (I've a lot of stuffs to do. I'm going) and she walked back...
With a heavy heart, Sooraj sat on chair- Sandhya ji subhah se bahut kaam kar rahi hai... Ghar mein sirf Bhabho hi hai unhe madat karne ke liye... Aur shayad isi wajah se unhe mujhse baat karne ke liye waqt nahin mil raha hoga... Par Sandhya ji itni der tak mujhse naaraz kaise rah sakti hai? (Sandhya is doing a lot of work these days. And only Bhabho is there to help her.So she might not be able to find enough time to talk with me. But how can she stay this long angry with me)...
Like a dove gathering grains fallen down from panicles, Sooraj slowly gleaned all his memories twined with her...He blushed at times... He opened lunch box remembering she has never been like this... He was only knowing she is deeply hurt... .. .. And that hurted him more than her not talking to him... His heart twirled in pang and panic... Remembering her gloaming eyes, he slowly closed his lunch box, not having even a single morsel... He was not hopeless, but he knew he will be restless until she steps out of her restlessness...
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I just flow with emotions while going through each line n able to put myself in place Sooraj n how he's feeling at present..


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I am equally keen like others to know what will happen next, and I am really confused as to why Sandhya is annoyed with Suraj
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poor suraj..so wanted to know why sandhya is angry
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