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Vampire story on both couples (LKNB) (Page 29)

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 11:13am | IP Logged
Feel really sad for virman!!..
Lovely update...
Thanks for the pm..

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Radharaday

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Posted: 03 December 2012 at 1:23pm | IP Logged
omg your update is  so complicated
viren manvi virat relationship was so complicated  now jeevi-manan
loved how you described everyone's emotions their pain their destiny yes destiny is the most important thing in your story
my poor virman suffering a lot can you patched them up little sooner plz

once again heart-touching update

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Radharaday

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 7:40am | IP Logged
fantastic update radha! really very gripping! virman virman...how much pain are they gonna take Disapprove woo! i love seeing Dr.Manan have been missing him from the show for so long. but woah he is a badass here...viren to rescue! saved maanvi that too in such a gruesome way! brilliantly written dear! cant wait to see how Jeevs is gonna take revenge on Viren now

continue soon Hug

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 7:55am | IP Logged
Plz cont soon...

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Radharaday

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 11:37am | IP Logged
Fantastic part ...!!!! ClapYou brought out Manvi's helplessness because of being a Vampire really well... The way Viren reacted I just wonder what Jeevika's going to do now... You brought Virat's pain also really well... Please do continue soon and thanks a lot for the pm...Smile

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Radharaday

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 9:02pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Syed695

OMG!!!! Amazing updaete..! loved Virman sadness and virens trying hard to keep maanvi in control..n the towards the end love jeevika...she coming for revenge...continue soon@!

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Glad that u are liking the concept Big smile
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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 9:05pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ashishi

omg radha super duper update
i really liked ur upd...hey dr manans entery...hmmmn nyc
rads u explained evrything very beautifully especially virman sadnessBroken Heart
 my poor virmanCry,,,,,, radha plzzz yar dont do this with my virman...jaldi jaldi patchup krwado dono kaTongue
i vl wait for ur updDay Dreamingplzzz update soon
rads claps fo ur awesum updClapClap
thanks for the pmHug

Sacchi ?? Thank u meri sweeti mirchi Big smile
Main kaisay patch up karwado?? I m not the cupid LOL
Thank u again darling ... tera comment meray liyae bahut mainay lagtha hai Embarrassed


Edited by Radharaday - 04 December 2012 at 9:05pm

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Posted: 04 December 2012 at 9:08pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by shilpa09

that was damn beautifully written dear:) EmbarrassedSmile
 
i looved every bit of it:)WinkSmile
 
the most awesome part was viren's love for her, the way he saved her.Day Dreaming..it was fantastic:)SmileClap
 
please let virat know her truth soon...its really heart breaking to see them seperated...Cry
 
once again...u did fab job:)Clap
 
thnx 4 pm dear:):):) Hug

Thank you so much dear Big smile

Really?? was that the best part? I though that wasnt that gud ...anyways thx Embarrassed
U r welcome 

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