Vampire story on both couples (LKNB) - Page 12

Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update loved it continue soon and do pm me
Posted: 11 years ago
Its really awsoum story i love it plzzz continue soon...
Posted: 11 years ago
ohh i actuallly loved it BUT i dont understand what viren means by he has waited for her since 100's of years, the bit when she had the flash back and the cute and senti momements between Virman aww 😳 i love them. And Viren trying to consummate or Rape Manvi 😑 who does he think he is MOFO... okay shes a vampire so sunlight will destroy her right...πŸ˜•
but Virat  you make me fall in love with him all over and over again ❀️ he is sooo cute, but our Viru boy knows that manvi will never betray him. okay now Viren wants to kill maya W*F 😲.
 
Thanks for the PM ⭐️
Update soon 😊
Names below πŸ€“
Edited by S.Khan - 11 years ago
Posted: 11 years ago
loooved it alot:) 😊
i really feel lyk crying 4 virman...they cant even meet each other😭
awesome story dear:)πŸ‘πŸΌ
thnx 4 pm:)
do continue soon:):):)πŸ€—
Posted: 11 years ago
Wow awesome update, I really enjoyed reading it! Thanks for the PM :)
Posted: 11 years ago
Wow!!! Superb update!!!
Loved it, can't wait 4 ur next update!!
Thanks 4 the pm!!
Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update.Poor virat. Felt so bad for him.And loved the flashback.Loved the update so much.Thanks for the pm yaar😊
Posted: 11 years ago
Thank you so much for the pm
The update was beautifully written. Their feelings were awesomely expressed!!!
Still trying to get used to Viren being in love with Manvi..still can't see to digest it. Feeling VirMan's pain to the core. Eagerly waiting to know how the story unfolds!!!!!!πŸ˜ƒ
Posted: 11 years ago
I'm loving ur style re...the way you're expressing emotions has real depth...and I'm loving it.
Looking forward to ur next update!
Posted: 11 years ago
Lovely update...
U depicted their pain very well..
I loved the flashback scene of virman romance..
I hope they meet soon..
Thanks 4 d update n pm...😊

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