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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 12:16pm | IP Logged
Hi Friends, 

I am not sure if you'll like my new fan fiction of Arjun and Riya. Its different than what I've written before and I promise you that you'll enjoy the emotion displayed. 

Thank You... 

Tere Ishq Mein Dard Kyun... its tale of two people who are totally different from one another and yet they are together forever. 

Characters...

Main Leads... 

Arjun Suryakant Rawte: He is rebellious cop with attitude and his life is very hidden behind his anger; but solves mysterious investigation cases. His mind is sharp internal camera build inside his mind.

Riya Mukherjee: She's very smart in research department with superb percentage knowledge. She's bold in martial arts, but very weak in handling a gun. Always trying to prove herself in Emergency Task Force because of her hidden mysterious past that leave unwanted pain. 

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Index of the Parts 

Introduction on Page 1 
Part 1 on Page 1
Part 2 on Page 3
Part 3 on Page 5
Part 4 on Page 9

Part 5 on Page 10
Part 6 on Page 13
Part 7 on Page 15
Part 8 on Page 20
Part 9 on Page 21

Part 10-1 on Page 26
Part 10-2 on Page 31
Part 10-3 on Page 33

Part 11 on Page 35


Edited by MistiofMistz - 23 October 2012 at 3:56pm

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seems intersting waiting for it ahead
dont let me wait more plzzz ...
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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 1:14pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweetdoc

Waitin

Thank you.. so much. 
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Originally posted by sizzysehrish

seems intersting waiting for it ahead
dont let me wait more plzzz ...

I won't keep you waiting for long. I hope you'll enjoy it. 

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Are you excited for first part? I hope you'll like it. 

Tere Ishq Mein Dard Kyun...
Part 1

Monday, September 10 2012... 11:50pm

Pain is part of human emotions, but destiny is chosen before your birth...

Blood splattered everywhere on the floor... unknown body laid on the floor struggling in pain.

Night fades away in the darkness of blood...

Tuesday, September 11 2012... 9:31am

Three people entered inside their headquarter. They chatting away in excitement that they forgot about the arrival of their new chief who is taking over their previous chief.. ACP Verma.

Voice: What's going on? Why is there so much noise reflecting everywhere?

Three of them froze and stare at a person who's eyes filled with anger or more like of discipline.

Guy with glasses and spiked hair question the person standing in front of them "who are you and who gave you the permission to enter in here?"

Voice: I am the new chief of ETF. People call me Sameer Rathore

Girl: We are sorry sir. I am Riya Mukherjee the research specialist (than she point at the person standing to her right who spoke impulsively) he is Shreekant Sen our technical expert (than she point at the person on her left) and he is Chotu our commando. Welcome to Emergency Task Force.

Rathore: Thank you for the introduction and now if you are done can we proceed toward crime spot.

Riya: Yes Sir

Shree: Yes

Chotu just nod his head.

Tuesday, September 11 2012... 10:25am

Riya and Shree stood investigating the crime spot. Blood stain have dried up, leafs scattered round the place.

Chotu doing his own investigation.

Riya: I wonder how can people be so so so

Shree: the word is cruel, monster, sicko and what not.

Riya: Yeah. I feel sorry for the family connected with those people who have suffered unfaithful death against their wishes.

Shree agreed with her. Chotu joins them after gathering information of the murder token place.

Together they went toward Rathore sir and informed him of the information they gathered.

Tuesday, September 11 2012... 12:00pm
Headquarter

Riya doing her part of the research while Shree tracking down information about Sanaya Misrha and Chotu gone out gathering more information about Sanaya and her actives.

Rathore talking on the phone with commissioner and bang the phone in frustration.

Shree: Sir, is everything alright?

Rathore burst in anger: How can everything be fine?

Riya: What happen Da (Rathore stare at Riya) I mean Sir?

Rathore: Commissioner think I can't handle the situation on my own without having a assistant, but I'll stay in-charge of ETF. Its ridiculous!

Shree and Riya stay quiet in the matter.

Rathore: You won't believe you they are sending as my assistant.

Shree: Who?

Rathore: A man who is normal, abnormal. He's crazy after loosing his wife. I just hate him to the core and yet I am stuck with him.

Before Rathore can announce the name of his partner. Chotu came inside with few bags in his hand.

Rathore: Did I send you shopping or gather information on her actives?

Chotu: Sir, I've done what you have asked.

Rathore: I can see that

Shree controlling his laughs with Riya. Rathore stare at them.

Rathore: Team, within few minutes gather inside the conference room and we'll put information together for a lead.

Trio: Yes Sir

Tuesday, September 11 2012... 2:15pm

Rathore spilt team into two pairs. Riya and Shree are send to Sanaya's place to gather more information about Sanaya and break news to her parents about the dismiss. Chotu and him went to Club Master on the highway because last place Sanaya went before she was murder.

2:30pm
Sanaya's place

Shree rang the bell

After sometime door is open by, a lady "yes, how may I help you" she them. Riya analyze the person standing in-front of her.

Shree: ETF

Lady: ETF! Is everything alright? I guess you are here in search of Rahul than I assure you that Rahul isn't here. In fact we have broken off our ties with him five years ago.

Riya: Ma'am, we aren't here for Rahul, but its about Sanaya

Lady: What about Sanaya? Is she alright?

Shree: Ma'am, if its alright than can we come inside?

Lady: My bad. Please come inside.

Shree and Riya fallowed her and settle themselves on the sofa.

Lady: So what were you saying about Sanaya? Is she alright?

Shree with his eyes told Ria to convey the message about Sanaya's death. Riya nods her head.

Riya: Ma'am, what I am going to say might be shocking, but its fact.

Lady: Is everything alright?

Riya: Ma'am, I don't know how you'll react, but I am extremely sorry to announce that Sanaya was murdered last night.

Lady: What? How can that be possible? Sanaya came yesterday to meet us before heading home.

Shree: Sanaya came here? I am confuse? Isn't Sanaya your daughter?

Lady: Nahiin. Sanaya isn't my daughter, unfortunately my son Rahul's wife.

Riya: What?

Lady: Yes, officer she is my son's wife. I am Rahul's mother Ms. Lata Devi and Sanaya's mother-in-law. Sanaya is great person. Who would want to murder her?

Lata Devi break down in tear of her lost. Sanaya wasn't only her bahu, but her daughter. They shared emotionally bond after Rahul left them five years ago.

3:00pm

Everyone dancing in their tune. Rathore found the place disgusting while Chotu kept good eye on the waiter who got into fight with Sanaya yesterday.

Rathore: I don't understand these generation...

Chotu: Why Sir?

Rathore: Less tension in studies and more attention in partying, drinking and living free lifestyles.

Chotu suddenly had image of Rathore sir in his younger days doing the same partying, drinking and dancing crazy to music beats.

Chotu suppress a laughter...

Rathore shouts: Chotu, what do you finding funny that you are mocking me?

Chotu snap out his thoughts and divert Rathore's mind toward waiter again and this time they caught the waiter giving open shoots to teenagers against the law.

Rathore and Chotu gang up on waiter and make him confess his crime with one threat.

Rathore flamed up hearing about big brother's help. Big brother's in underworld language is bhai.

4:45pm

Shree and Riya return back to headquarters... found jeep outside their quarters... they wonder who's jeep it was because Rathore took black car while they had the white car.

Riya: According to my percentage, its not Rathore sir's car than who could it be?

Shree: I don't know. Let's go and see

Riya: Sure

Riya and Shree went inside and found a person sitting on Rathore sir's chair inside his cabin.

Riya: Who are you?

Shree: Why are you sitting in our sir's chair? Get up!

Shree march toward him, but his one stare pushed Shree behind Riya. Riya just stood numbly after meeting the gaze of the person standing in front of them.

Shree whisper in Riya's ear "I swear on you that he's more danger than our Rathore sir." Riya doesn't know how to react. She just stare at the person who stare at her with unknown emotions.



Edited by MistiofMistz - 24 September 2012 at 6:03pm

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 1:21pm | IP Logged
arjun's entry :):)
nd dear i saw ur vm on ariya rabba ve
wat to say
tooo goood
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heyy lovelyy beigigng just loved it
arjun entry was awesome
rabulous update
cont soon 
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