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i loved ur work .iam a new member over here .could u pm me plzSmile

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Originally posted by andy.a

i loved ur work .iam a new member over here .could u pm me plzSmile


Thanks for appreciating and Welcome to DEK forum...sure but first send me a buddy request so that I can PM you dear..because otherwise Ill not remember your profile name..

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I'm really very-very sorry for the late comment.Embarrassed
Fantastic, superb update Gargi, it's awesome yaar. Clap Clap Clap
A very fresh n different concept, I liked it.Thumbs Up Thumbs Up
It's based on Recarnation, wow.Tongue
Great,great start, It's amazing.Smile
Precap sounds very interesting yaar. But who's that girl?Shocked Manyata in jungle.Tongue I'm so excited to read the next chapter.Wink
Thank you so much for the beautiful update n  thanx for the PM also.Smile
Loved it.Smile
Do coninue ASAP.Smile
HUGS.Hug Hug
Sorry once again for the late comment.Embarrassed Hug


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Originally posted by sonam2801

I'm really very-very sorry for the late comment.Embarrassed
Fantastic, superb update Gargi, it's awesome yaar. Clap Clap Clap
A very fresh n different concept, I liked it.Thumbs Up Thumbs Up
It's based on Recarnation, wow.Tongue
Great,great start, It's amazing.Smile
Precap sounds very interesting yaar. But who's that girl?Shocked Manyata in jungle.Tongue I'm so excited to read the next chapter.Wink
Thank you so much for the beautiful update n  thanx for the PM also.Smile
Loved it.Smile
Do coninue ASAP.Smile
HUGS.Hug Hug
Sorry once again for the late comment.Embarrassed Hug


Thank You so much dear..Hug...Ya trying to make a different concept..I always wanted to see them in a different era because when do you remember the coronation Offscreen pic of theirs as a couple..from that time i have always felt that they belong to a different era..They are not for this modern time..

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Hey friends I am back with next part of my FF..Enjoy and tell me how it was..and ya the cast is same as DEK only the names are different..WinkWink


The Dark Love Story..A Reincarnation..

Part 2 Updated...


 Manyata and Sangeeta both were ready for their college and rushed to their cars'They both were in the same college but still preferred to take their own cars as none wanted to enter in any kinds of heated argument which was quite possible if they went together, before college and spoil the entire day'Everyone in the college knew that the royal sisters were not in good terms and their always used to be some or the other gossip about them.

                The literature class was Manyata's favourite as she always had a thing for the plays of Shakespeare, poetry of Spencer and also appreciated the modern age writers. But today for some reasons  it was really getting hard to concentrate in the lectures..Exams were approaching and she really didn't want to miss anything and specially her position as a topper in Literature. There was a small girl who was looking at her from outside the classroom, from the corridor, and as Manyata was sitting just next to the door, the girl's constant gaze was making it difficult for her to focus on Shakespeare's Othello(A play by Shakespeare) although Othello has always been her favourite hero of all times'

DESDEMONA:Kill me tomorrow: let me live to-night!

OTHELLO :Nay, if you strive'

 

DESDEMONA:But half an hour!

 

OTHELLO :Being done, there is no pause

.

DESDEMONA :But while I say one prayer!

 

OTHELLO :It is too late.

 

Note: (Desdemona and Othello are the main characters of Shakespearean Tragedy named Othello)

 

The entire atmosphere was growing heated and tensed in the classroom with that 'DEATH SCENE' video of the play and the girl constantly gazing at Manyata with her eyes completed fixed at her from last 1hour made Manyata impatient and intolerable. Without saying a word she went out of the classroom to find out what the hell did the girl want and who was she. She went near her and asked "who are you? Do you know me?...want to say something?..please speak"..The girl silently just turned her back and went out quietly..Manyata found this very strange and decided to follow her'The girl was really getting on her nerves now. She kept on calling her and asking that what did she want but failed to get an answer from that little girl, who knew Manyata was following her'Manyata went out of the corridor, crossed the pantry which was unusually silent today, then went towards the exit door.The girl turned back at last, and then without replying opened the door and went out'Manyata was dumbstruck and she was by now confident that this mysterious girl wanted to show her something..But what she knew not..She opened the door as well and as soon as she was about to step outdoors she suddenly got the shock of her life!!...It was not the place which she always have seen..No, it wasn't her college playground, but something different!..It was all a different place, a jungle with big trees lined beyond human sight could ever linger..The entire place was so dark now and alas!..The girl suddenly smiles and disappears!..At this Manyata now was so shocked and scared that she could not say anything'She was left all alone in the place which she had never seen..She calls out loud.."Where did you go girl?..who are you..please don't leave me here.please someone help.."But there was no one to respond to her pleas now..She repented at the very thought of following the girl but still she could not understand why and how was she in this mysterious place..The place was so beautiful but still it was so dull and seemed so lifeless.It seemed as if everyone around her was crying and wanted to tell her something.She felt like she knew this place..It was all so known to her..She was sitting near a tree when she had gradually stood up hearing a scream...Manyata followed the scream thinking that maybe there was at least one human there who could help her go home..She got up and kept on calling if someone was there and soon was near a river'But she was disheartened at the thought that there was no one there..She was really upset now and completely broke off and sat near the river side feeling helpless and began to cry..Oh God Why am I here?..What is going to happen to me? And she  started weeping softly but after a while she heard some voices..She saw some girls talking constantly while taking bath in the river..All were beautiful but suddenly what she saw really shocked her and she felt as if she was dreaming now..She was in the middle of all the five girls and the girl was really enjoying playing in water and splashing water to what seemed were her friends..The girl was none other than herself!!...She was in some strange expensive clothes which really looked very ancient and her hair was all open and yet but had some beautiful roses at the side of her ears..One among the girls in the river was the girl whom she had followed and landed in this great unknown place.."Oh My God!..Am I dreaming or something..How can this be true when I am still standing here..How can I be in both the places?"..All were busy splashing water except one..who was constantly looking at her and smiling..the girl who was staring at her in the classroom..Everything was so horrifying and Manyata was totally lost and confused when someone called her from behind.."Chandralekha, yaha kya kar rahi ho? Aj nadi mei nahi khelna?..tumhe pani bohot pasand hai na?"..It was the same girl and Manyata now just could not take it anymore..She had gone numb by seeing everything around her and just wanted to cry and scream but then'."Manya Manya!..Are you Ok?..Are you even listening?"..Manyata suddenly woke up and realised that it was her dream..Mrs Malhotra, got really impatient with Manyata as she did not reply to her questions and gave her a warning to concentrate in the class or go out..Manyata quickly nodded and returned to the video of Othello and told herself.."It was just a dream..A bad dream.."..She was glad to return from her dream and decided to watch less horror and vampire shows as she thought they have really got on her brain now but she was actually mistaken'The girl was looking at her from the back of the classroom now with a faint smile on her face as if the mission for which she had visited Chandralekha was accomplished'

 

            It was evening now and Manyata was chatting with her friend Shams over phone.."Hi Shams,..no yaar hume nahi jana..tum jao, humei Dadisahab ki permission leni paregi..tumhe to pata hi hai na who kitni strict hai..nahi allow karenge yar.." "Kiska phone hai Manyata?" Her Mom asked, "Shams hum tumse bad mei bat karte hai..Kuch nahi bas aise hi hum sampada se bat kar rahe the..aap yaha?..kuch kam tha kya?..." Nahi beta bas aise hi apni rani bitiya se bat karne ka man kiya to hum a gaye..Kaisi hai ap beta? Kuch pareshani to nahi hai na?" Maharani Gayatri was really worried for her daughter and wanted her to speak up if she had any problems, specially about those bad dreams..She wanted to know what did she actually see but did not want to ask her directly thinking that her daughter might get worried and scared and would take those dreams more seriously'

"Kuch nahi ma hum bilkul thik hai humei kya hua..ap to aise hi itni fikar karte hai humari?..hum thora fresh ho jate hai..bohot tired ho gaye college ke bad.." and she left for the wash room..Gayatri realised her daughter didn't want to open up about the dreams so thought maybe she was thinking too much..May be it was just some bad dreams and her fantasies as Manyata's was the age of dreaming and dreaming about fantasies'

 

That night all had dinner heartily and went to sleep..After two more days was weekend and Sangeeta was really excited for it..Planning was going on in college for a trip to a place where excavation was going on..It was a torn and tattered place and many sculptures and art had been found by archaeologist in passing years in this place'The college had taken a special permission from the government for this outing as they wanted to show the students and later student would have to do a research about the place and the work..This place was supposed to be rich with art and culture and people once upon a time, but some great unknown causes had destroyed its very existence..Today it was nothing but a worn piece of land..Sangeeta was determined to go there whether her D.S would give her permission or not..

  Manyata was fast asleep in her soft bed and warm quilt when she felt like a hand on her face caressing her'She suddenly opened her eyes and'."Oh no..I am back to this jungle?.

.What the hell?..This is dream..I will get up soon and she pinches herself hard till the time she screams and finds out that she didn't get up..far again she sees the same mysterious girl looking at her from behing a tree.." "What?..you came back to haunt me?..Are you a ghost?..why don't you say what you need?...I swear if I could get you killed I would have done so..Manyata screamed in annoyance..".."What you want to kill me?..First save yourself?.." and she runs and challenges Manyata to catch her if she can..Manyata in great anger runs behind her, fully determined to catch her.."Ha abhi pakarke batati hu tujhe churail kahi ki.."and she runs till she pants heavily and as the girl had disappeared somewhere, decides to rest for a while'She wakes up with a sound of some people launging and talking.."Priye(love)..aap jab bhi humarei itne pas hote ho hum apne ap ko duniya ke sabse sobhagyashali Raja mante hai.."The man with a handsome and mesmerising face said.."Aap bhi na swami'(she blushes) kya aap humei humesha humei isi tarha prem karte rahenge?"She looks innocently at the man who maybe was her husband and to Manyata surprise she was the same girl who was taking bath in the river..The same girl who exactly looked like Manyata..and the Man said.."Kewal is janam mei nahi..ane wale har janam mei.." and he kisses her and embraces his queen and they both rest in the swing which must have enjoyed the sweet couple's innocent love which was soon going to perish'

well there is a korean song which I would like evryone to listen as it is sobeautiful and painful and it talks about Eternal love which never dies...this is the link..

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OQMBc3OEYa0&feature=related


guys this pic of priyash is the inspiration of this FF..when I fitrst saw this pic I felt that they are not a couple of this age..But from a different era..Smile











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this is the one..



friens I don't know why it is not showing in the post..none of my pics show..maybe this a prob..If you all know then plese help me...I posted many pics in the FF but none of them showed..Confused


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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 9:43am | IP Logged
Gargi di that was awesome u know I was getting magadheera glimpses and also I could see it infront of my eyes!!!
That was beautiful!!
Loved it!! thanks for the pm!!
Thanks for the update!!
Giv us the link we will see it!!

Yay first to comment!!


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woww,reincarnation,goingg lovelyy...do cntinue soon!!!!!

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