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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 8:39am | IP Logged
i think i am the first one to comment on this chapSmile.well it was very nicely written.you chngd j's name to sangeeta.thank you very much bcoz i was fed up with the name jaynandini

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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 8:41am | IP Logged
Absolutely brilliant gargi. Really loved the concept. Very different and unique. First part was amazing.. Mentioning nuances of each and every character soo well. Can you add pics for them.. Although I always picture shritama as young sister, aruna irani as daadi saab and komal aunty as manyata's mom. If u have anyone else in your mind, can u add sketch and pics as you update.

LOving the precap. And how u hv maintained an aura of suspense and thrill. I really love reincarnation concept and eagerly waiting to see manveer in that.

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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 8:42am | IP Logged
lovely awesome and wonderful 
beautifully written form the descriptions of characters to their images to the dialogues to the precap everything was so perfect i really liked it i should say loved it

thanks for such a nice update and pm 
i am really looking forward to this story as it very different  and the suspense is wonderful 
i really am curious to see how u reveal the suspense 
please update soon 
and longer updates


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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 8:50am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Shals9

Absolutely brilliant gargi. Really loved the concept. Very different and unique. First part was amazing.. Mentioning nuances of each and every character soo well. Can you add pics for them.. Although I always picture shritama as young sister, aruna irani as daadi saab and komal aunty as manyata's mom. If u have anyone else in your mind, can u add sketch and pics as you update.

LOving the precap. And how u hv maintained an aura of suspense and thrill. I really love reincarnation concept and eagerly waiting to see manveer in that.


Actually I did change their names but the people are the same..Shri, Aruna, and our dear aunty Komal(don't know her real name)..I was fed up of the same names so wanted to give them different names...

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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 8:50am | IP Logged
Lovely gargi you wrote it so well
The precap is so amazing it's
A very different concept and I love it
Updt soon

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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 8:51am | IP Logged
Originally posted by machinegun

i think i am the first one to comment on this chapSmile.well it was very nicely written.you chngd j's name to sangeeta.thank you very much bcoz i was fed up with the name jaynandini


Even I was fed up so changed their names...but the people are same..Wink
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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 9:08am | IP Logged
OMG...gargi its awsomeee...magdheera is one of my fvrt tollywood movie...u know mene isse hindi me nahi dekha hai iss liye kuch dailougs samj nahi aye the par but i like it very much...this FF is gone rock.plzzz...update soon.

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Posted: 12 September 2012 at 9:23am | IP Logged
Great update! It's really interesting and a new kind of FF, and I'm loving it!!! Update soon!!! Clap Big smile

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