Dekha Ek Khwaab

   

Dark Love Story Chapter 21(Pg142) last chapter (Page 32)

Post Reply New Post

Page 32 of 151

vampire12345678

IF-Rockerz

vampire12345678

Joined: 08 April 2012

Posts: 5758

Posted: 18 October 2012 at 8:15am | IP Logged
hey gargi
please please update soon
please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please 

please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please

please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please
please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please
please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

sweet_gargi

Dear Guest, Being an unregistered member you are missing out on participating in the lively discussions happening on the topic "Dark Love Story Chapter 21(Pg142) last chapter (Page 32)" in Dekha Ek Khwaab forum. In addition you lose out on the fun interactions with fellow members and other member exclusive features that India-Forums has to offer. Join India's most popular discussion portal on Indian Entertainment. It's FREE and registration is effortless so JOIN NOW!

sweet_gargi

IF-Dazzler

sweet_gargi

Joined: 20 March 2012

Posts: 4047

Posted: 18 October 2012 at 8:28am | IP Logged
Originally posted by vampire12345678

hey gargi
please please update soon
please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please 

please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please

please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please
please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please
please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please


LOLLOL...vampy bhai!...have already wrote two pages but making a cover page for my FF...

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

vampire12345678

vampire12345678

IF-Rockerz

vampire12345678

Joined: 08 April 2012

Posts: 5758

Posted: 18 October 2012 at 8:48am | IP Logged
Originally posted by sweet_gargi

Originally posted by vampire12345678

hey gargi
please please update soon
please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please 

please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please

please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please
please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please
please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please please


LOLLOL...vampy bhai!...have already wrote two pages but making a cover page for my FF...

please update those at least
please 

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

sweet_gargi

sweet_gargi

IF-Dazzler

sweet_gargi

Joined: 20 March 2012

Posts: 4047

Posted: 18 October 2012 at 11:58am | IP Logged

 Chapter 7

Hey everyone...This is the Cover Page for my FF...do comment how it isSmile...Special thanks goes to ChitraHug for helping me to select this picture from 3pics and also gave a proper feedback about the editing...took a lot of hard work in making this pic..D'oh






Kurwaki and all the other girls came running to the river bank..Kurwaki had to literally

shake her to bring her to reality...Everyone realized that the princess was back when Chandralekha shivered and looked all sides'..She hugged Kurwaki tightly and began to cry'.Her sobs were just not controllable for her friends at that moment and someone among them decided to call her father and tell everything that happened there'.Chandralekha suddenly stopped crying hearing this as she remembered what Shaurya told her'

"Ye waqt sahi nahi unhe kuch bhi pata chalne dena..Kafi log bhi hai saath mei'Humei mahal jaake unse baat karni hogi'"'''''She stops her friend and tells them that they should all go back as her father and everyone would be worried'.Everyone was shocked to hear this but Kurwaki understood her fears...

Chandralekha and all the girls apologized their elders for returning so late, and lied that, they had forgotten while enjoying in the river after the hot and tiring day'They got a nice scolding from the king and all the subjects but kept quiet, as that was the decision of the princess'She didn't want anyone to comment on her character or on her family's reputation'

But her father noticed that his daughter was silent than usual..She didn't speak to anyone. Not even Kurwaki, who tried to make conversation with her..She was in some deep thoughts. Something disturbed her, which was clearly visible from her twisted eyebrows..As soon as she reached Naugard mahal, she came down from the horse, and took permission to leave..Before her mother could ask her about the trip, she had already left for her room.

"Kuch to hai jo Rajkumari humse chupa rahi hai..Humei shigra(soon) hi pata karna parega.."'thought her father


            **********************************

 

Chandralekha wept bitterly in her room after locking the door behind her..She didn't know how to tackle the problem that she was in'Was all this true?..Is he really harmful? will he actually come for her?...take her along with him?...There were several questions running in her mind, but no answer'How will she face her father, her mother?..If Maharnai comes to know that Chandralekha had actually taken a bath in a public place and that too completely without any clothes in her body, and a young man who claimed to be a king, had not only seen her but tried to be romantic to her, she will never forgive Chandralekha!...

"Hey Bhagwan ab hum kya karein!'Humei koi rasta dikhaye Bal Gopal'(Lord Krishna)"..she was so deeply lost in her thoughts, that she didn't realize when she fell asleep.

Chandralekha was in deep sleep, when suddenly she felt like two hands pulling up her ghagra and tracing her legs, than knees, thighs..She tried to wake up and stop it but something stopped her..She tried to move her legs and shout in protest but found it difficult..Infact it was just impossible to speak..She felt like her tongue was zipped and hands and legs tied up..She started crying and suddenly woke up breathing heavily.

She was completely wet with sweat and tears, but more with fright'She heaved in relief to find that she could move her legs and hands, and that her ghagra was in its proper place. Just when she laid down to sleep Chandralekha screamed her lungs out at the sight that she saw'There were some words written in bold red'which felt like someone had written with blood'

"Tum kewal humaari ho Rajkumari!...kewal Maharaj Shaurya Pratap Singh ki.."


Some female servants came running to the room to check what had happened'Rajkumari asked in a shaky tone, while her body still fixed on her bed and eyes wet with tears'.

            "Kisne kiya ye dursahas?" (Who dared to do this?)..Pointing towards the window panes'

Two servants ran towards the direction where she pointed and saw the words written in blood'"Humei nahi pata Rajkumari sa'hum abhi dekhte hai kisne ki hai ye saahas(courage)"'and the servants run outside to call the guards, and order them to find out, who had dared to enter the Rajkumari's room..It was already day break and the entire Naugard mahal was in havoc(disturbance)'Someone had entered the Rajkumari's room, which had always been so secured.Security was never an issue in Naugard. No one dared to enter the palace without the security's permission..The people loved their king and queen and their only daughter, the sole heir of the throne, Chandralekha!...King Rajendra Singh could not believe who had done this and what was the purpose behind this!...But Rajendra Singh was confident about one thing'It had to be someone powerful and someone who was outside his state'!!

 

            His eyes were just fixed on those words written with blood and also on what was actually written and what it meant'He turned to Chandralekha and looked suspiciously at her expecting some answer'.Some real answers!...

On the other side, Chunargar mahal was sleeping quietly with all the people in it and the guards peacefully doing their job of protecting the place from intruders(thieves and robbers)'The Maharani was sleeping peacefully in her room with the female daasi's(servants) keeping a watch on her door for any service needed incase at night, while Shaurya's room which always signified royalty and the warrior in him to the full, was at complete silence and peace acknowledging the sleeping king's slumber(time passing by resting, in sleep)'When his eyes suddenly shot open and lips smiled in complete expectation of what must have happened'

 

            *******************************************

 

Nikolsan High, the college which always used to be full of loud noises of students, playing in the ground or chatting in the classroom, the students in this institute were always difficult to handle'They would just not be quiet and in discipline'Everyone made fun of the Professor's great and elaborate lectures on discipline and orders..But the professor who passed by Shaurya AKA Udayveer's class found it hard to digest, that this class was unusually peaceful and everyone was so quietly listening to the professor'He felt a bit jealous and thought'

"Do looks really matter so much that even the guys are glued to this Man'urghhh!!"

And he leaves immediately. .." So class, how did you like the story?...was it boring?..." He looked at everyone with a smile and lastly smiled endlessly at Manyata, as if the question was actually for her'Manyata was totally fixed with all her senses---eyes, ears, mind and heart'She strangely felt like having a connection with this story..It was just not like a story but something which must have happened, something which she felt like had happened to her near one, but didn't know how!...and that river scene was so clear in front of her eyes!!..She had even been mysteriously to a jungle some days back'How is this possible?...How can it happen with her?...

"But why do I feel like I know him, and that this whole thing was not for the others but an indication to me'"'She looked at him with a lot of doubts and also with a hope that may be he would answer those queries she had'"Its only him, who can answer..Or may be that girl, but she only shows me up in dreams..Damn it!..Is she real?...Is this man real?..Or all is magic!."..She was still looking at the hot man standing near the table, with twisted eyebrows' and Shaurya could feel her doubts clearly'

            The period bell rang and with that Manyata came back to reality and back from her deep disturbing thoughts'Shaurya ended the class with a sweet smile and promised everyone to join them for the Mayong trip'

"It would indeed be my pleasure to join you all and I am sure we will see many new and old things!..." he smiled again and looked at Manyata and moved out of the classroom'

 

            **************************************

 

The cafeteria of Nikolsan High was a big and exquisite one, and one could have anything from junks to a heavy meal with complete delight and satisfaction'Natasha as usual had bought her chicken cheese burger with French fries while Manyata was always conscious to have mostly fruits and a simple diet which made a complete meal with rice, vegetables and chappatis and occasionally non-veg. But the problem which disturbed Natasha was not food'It was her hot and charming professor who had taken away all her hunger, and her dear best friend Manyata, who like other days were not lecturing on her unhealthy food habits. Natasha looked at Manyata sternly and shaked her'

"I really need to know now?...where the hell are you?...Do you even exist in this world or not?..."..That last sentence of Natasha bought Manyata back with a jerk and she screams'"What do you mean by that!...Me exists or not'Ofcourse I do! Do I look like a ghost to you?..Am I like following you in your dreams?..or smiling with you in a creepy, meaningless way?...Stop disturbing me with those sentences and with talking about that boring professor's  nonsense charm..He is not charming..He is a mysterious devil!...giving meaningless smirks to God knows whom and why!...So just shut up your damn mouth!!!..." and she leaves the place leaving a shocked and stunned Natasha!...

            Far from the duo, Shaurya aka Udayveer sat in one of the tables, with some of the Professors, having his lunch peacefully and with a smile on his face...

           

            ***********************************


Kurwaki was very tensed thinking about what was the possibilities of Shaurya and Chandralekha's meet'The pros and cons of their actions'whether Manyata would actually ever regain her memory about her previous birth, what would be her reaction and actions?...Would she forgive Shaurya for his deeds in the past, for the deeds which she knew he could never makeup'..

 

            She was still in her deep thoughts when a hand was placed in her shoulder'"Fikar mat karo Kurwaki'I have planned everything carefully'Sab kuch thik hoga isbaar'" and he gave a comforting smile looking at those magical and powerful eyes, which only someone like Kurwaki could possess'Yes those eyes, the eyes of a witch which controlled many minds with just her one sight'Which could make any ordinary or extra-ordinary man to do anything for her or for her riyasat!...

 

            Kurwaki gave a faint smile and replied'"You did a clever job a stopping the story where it was actually required to stop'"


and Shaurya's expression changes...becoming more serious, while his mind deep in thoughts, his heart which had gone 5 centuries back and eyes travelling to the aquarium kept in the corner of his royal, regal room, where a small fish was busy chased by a big, fat golden fish!


Alright friends...So plzzz comment how was this Chapter..I know I promised to update soon this week but was very busy..So took time...Plz give your valuable comments...Tongue




Edited by sweet_gargi - 21 October 2012 at 3:14am

The following 29 member(s) liked the above post:

ridz_27Manyata5...Ruhi77...pmpm1Moonlight_AnshFantasyangelarna753anushruthiLivroop_BieberShahi01puggyysaakhi01Shazzie-The_Tomboy-Asyaloverhuma12.sweetshabvampire12345678chitra_raopanchaaliandy.asanghita0000--Zinay--MsLuscious-RK_Ki_Biwi-Jarin04...navina...adventure_gurlDhinchakGundi

puggyy

Goldie

puggyy

Joined: 13 August 2012

Posts: 1948

Posted: 18 October 2012 at 12:15pm | IP Logged


We re is chapter 7 ? 

I dint findSleepy


   I found , nice ...update soon Smile

So he came and went off Wink


Edited by puggyy - 18 October 2012 at 12:15pm

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

sweet_gargi

...navina...

IF-Sizzlerz

...navina...

Joined: 17 December 2011

Posts: 18221

Posted: 18 October 2012 at 12:20pm | IP Logged

Amazing Gargi!

So our princess is spooked at the moment  and Shaurya is haunting her
thoughts ...   LOVELY!!!!
 
Last part was eerie and HOTEmbarrassed at the same time.
 
Loved it - Update soon.
 
Thanx for the PMSmile.
 
 
  ... almost forgot ,  
your cover is SPECTACULAR!!!

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

sweet_gargi

sweet_gargi

IF-Dazzler

sweet_gargi

Joined: 20 March 2012

Posts: 4047

Posted: 18 October 2012 at 12:26pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by ...navina...

Amazing Gargi!

So our princess is spooked at the moment  and Shaurya is haunting her
thoughts ...   LOVELY!!!!
 
Last part was eerie and HOTEmbarrassed at the same time.
 
Loved it - Update soon.
 
Thanx for the PMSmile.
 
 
  ... almost forgot ,  
your cover is SPECTACULAR!!!


Thanks Navina...Embarrassed...mat pucho kitne mehnat lage hai is cover poage pe...

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

...navina...

Shahi01

Goldie

Shahi01

Joined: 30 July 2012

Posts: 1720

Posted: 18 October 2012 at 12:28pm | IP Logged
Ur cover page is beautiful, love it.  and ur story is so amazing, just want 2 read and never stop.  cant wait for the story to progress and for their love to bloom. great work gargi.

The following 1 member(s) liked the above post:

...navina...

Post Reply New Post

Go to top

Related Topics

  Topics Topic Starter Replies Views Last Post
UV's name in 16th century for my FF Dark Love Stor

2 3 4

sweet_gargi 25 815 19 September 2012 at 4:13am
By sweet_gargi
last hope, last try

2

Being-Human 14 714 19 July 2012 at 4:37pm
By Add123
Os:Song Story Teri Meri Love Story Manveer + Akash KSG_luv 2 1331 04 July 2012 at 1:43am
By vampire12345678
UV's divine love and Akash's fake love

2 3 4 5 6 7 ... 14 15

alissa345 116 3755 15 June 2012 at 12:35pm
By alissa345
LOVE LOVE LOVE LVE DEK mistyi 0 418 18 January 2012 at 4:30pm
By mistyi

Forum Quick Jump

Forum Category

Active Forums

Dekha Ek Khwaab Topic Index

Limit search to this Forum only.

 

Disclaimer: All Logos and Pictures of various Channels, Shows, Artistes, Media Houses, Companies, Brands etc. belong to their respective owners, and are used to merely visually identify the Channels, Shows, Companies, Brands, etc. to the viewer. Incase of any issue please contact the webmaster.