Dark Love Story Chapter 21(Pg142) last chapter - Page 14

Jarin04

@Jarin04

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Posted: 11 years ago

Just finished reading part 2. Gargi it was just awesome yaar u r a full on surprise package. OMG your writing skill is fab. U r progressing the story brillianty. A big thumbs up to u. Muaah. Part 3 nd 4 more to go

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Malangan

@TeriMalang

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Posted: 11 years ago

fabulous update gargi!!

Loved it
Okay m confused now was it a dream or reality
Looking forward to the interesting story from hottie shaurya

Cont soon :)

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chitra_rao

@chitra_rao

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey gargi, ooosome update, loved it, and of all I love UV's pic that you have used.😉 Waiting for this next update.Waiting for shaurya's story 😳 Please update soon and thanks for the PM gargi 🤗

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Rubaa Rana

@adorable_rana

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

Happy ending hai ya nahi iske liye to tumhe age intezaar karna parega dear...But Ill try to make the story more fascinating and interesting in the coming chapters...But thanks for the comments..It means a lot to me...😊

Oh that no need to say I am already hooked to your FF😉

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Jarin04

@Jarin04

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Posted: 11 years ago

Gargi keya batau yaar u stole my sleep yesterday night. Uff what an update! I just luved the passion in shaurya. So much mystrey in your ff. Now i'm damn qurious to know everything. After reading the update i fell in luv with Uday all over again. Hayee shy. Gargi for u i had to spend sleepless night so i deserve a penalty update from u! Nd i want it soon.

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Moonlight_Ansh

@Moonlight_Ansh

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Posted: 11 years ago

Hey

Just read your update, am i must say your FF is getting better and better with each update. Finally uday made his entry, cant wait for wat will happen next. i did have question the whole UV/M kiss scene, did it happen for real???😕 for rest of it awesome job , waiting for ur next update

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Gargi

@sweet_gargi

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: Jarin04
Gargi keya batau yaar u stole my sleep yesterday night. Uff what an update! I just luved the passion in shaurya. So much mystrey in your ff. Now i'm damn qurious to know everything. After reading the update i fell in luv with Uday all over again. Hayee shy. Gargi for u i had to spend sleepless night so i deserve a penalty update from u! Nd i want it soon.

awww...sleepless night?..kyu shock laga UV ka ya mere FF ke mystery ka?😆..ok will update soon..Have not started writing...will have to think about it...maybe by next week or on this weekend will update

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Sonam

@-RK_Ki_Biwi-

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Posted: 11 years ago

Fantastic, superb, awesome update Gargi.👏 👏 👏

Manyata-Natasha scene when Natasha saw UV first time.😆 n was praising their new hottie history teacher that was nice.

UV I mean Shaurya's entry in Manyata's college as a history teacher that was amazing.☺️

N Than Manyata once again saw that flashes of her life when she was Chandralekha that scene was awesome.😛

Great update Gargi.👏 👏

Wow they all're going on a trip n UV started to tell story to all students.😉

Thanks for the beautiful update n PM Gargi.😳

Do continue ASAP.😊

Good job.👍🏼

🤗 🤗

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Jarin04

@Jarin04

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Posted: 11 years ago

Originally posted by: sweet_gargi

awww...sleepless night?..kyu shock laga UV ka ya mere FF ke mystery ka?😆..ok will update soon..Have not started writing...will have to think about it...maybe by next week or on this weekend will update

hayee uday ka nd mystrey dono ka shock laga

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hmmmm dude i forgot

@.maleficent.

IF-Sizzlerz

Posted: 11 years ago

sorry for late comment

really it was supereb chapter 👍🏼

i loved it

plzzz update soon

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