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Originally posted by puggyy

hey that very nice...amazing...its like some movie magadeera i guesss...its very nice...hope they get to know der past soon...



Don't know about Maghdheera dear..Have not watched it and is forum mei hi first time suna...Actually I always had such a concept in mind for them...

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oh this is jus rocking...luved it...Tongue
luved it loads dear...Big smile
plz pm me wen u update next...
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Originally posted by MAHI1198

oh this is jus rocking...luved it...Tongue
luved it loads dear...Big smile
plz pm me wen u update next...
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Thanks dear for loving it..will update soon...Maybe on Monday for Sairah's Bday!Wink

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Hey friends here is the next part of The Dark Love Story...Thanks To everyone for liking my previous part...and tell me how you felt about the song..It will give you the character skecth of our UV in this FF and this part clearly is dedicated to our dear Yuvraaj aka Maharaaj Shaurya Pratap SinghWink

Note:...All names taken in this FF about the places are fictious and imaginary...Any resemblance to the original places is just a coincidenceLOL(I know ye line ap sab often sunte hai daily show mei..isliye meine yaha pe change kar diya thora saWink)Winkand Ya this story is different from Maghdheera, about which I recently read about in wikipedia after learning from some of the members that its similar to my FF..So don't worry guys...this story will be a bit different and will try to put as more fantasies and magic in it


FF----The Dark Love Story, A Reincarnation Part 3


The girl who was looking at her all this time suddenly comes in front of her which makes Manyata scream'aaahhh'and this makes the girl laugh..

"Kya hua Manyata..apne apko kisi dusre rup mei dekhke chauk gayi ya apne Maharj ko dekh kar?"..Aisa bohot kuch hai jo abhi tumhe dekhna aur janna baki hai aur tum humei mar dena chahti ho?...bohot galat bat hai..haahahahaha"..she laughs and Manyata didn't know what to say..She was too much in shock to speak anything'after sometime she finally picks up the courage but only to speak 3 words

"Hum.. are Maharaj?"..and faints'

Maharni Gayatri with some servants run to Manyata's room thinking that may be some robbers have attacked her sleeping daughter'''"Nahi ye nahi'nahi ho sakta..nahi hum hum nahi mante"'.Manyata was  blabbering in her sleep and Gayatri getting worried about her condition wakes her up and shakes her'.."Beta ap kya bol rahi hai? Ap thik to hai na?..kya nahi ho sakta Manyata?..."    Manyata was still in shock to reply to a worried mother'.She was totally numb and this made Gayatri more worried for her daughter'''."Beta ap kuch bolti kyun nahi? Humei bohot dar lag raha hai..fir se koi bura sapna dekha kya apne?"'''Finally Manyata spoke '''"Hum thik hai Mom..Aap jaiye yaha se"'and closed her eyes'but she really was scared to sleep anymore now'Every time in her dreams she would see either some strange worn land destroyed, some battles, damaged palaces and forts but never any person in particular and so clear'This time was the height..She had actually seen some unknown King embracing his love in his arms and to her shock and horror she looked exactly like her..and that girl claimed this lady to be none other than Manyata herself'This was really getting on her nerves now..She didn't know whom to talk about..Her mom would be more worried after hearing all this as she was a bit superstitious and her friends would call her crazy'.She really felt helpess and completely broke into tears'.."Why  me  God'What have I done wrong that you are giving me such punishments'..I just want to live a normal life before people start calling me crazy'" and she weeped and cried throughout the night''''..Someone just could not see her in such great pain and torture and decided to finish all this problem''''"Hum apko is trha nahi dekh sakte Chand'Damn" Uday bangs his hand on the tree bark in frustration.'kash hum abhi apke pas ake apko apne baho mei bharke pyar kar sakte aur bata sakte ki ap is duniya ki   sabse  khushnasib  Rajkumari ho jise uska premi  pichle  janam se pyar karte a raha hai aur age bhi karta rahega'Please is tarha mat royiye'Hum apko itni taklif mei nahi dekh sakte'"  and tears fall down Maharaj Shaurya  Singh's eyes who for the whole world today was Yuvraaj Udayveer Singh but still for his Chand(Maharani Chandralekha) he was still the same old Shaurya  her "pagal premi"'Seeing him weep Kurwaki could not control herself and she now felt guilty and bad''

"Maharaj  rukiye apne apko ap kyu saza de rahe hai, ye  sab  humne kiya  ye sochke ki  use sabkuch  yad ajayega..Hum  apko is tarha nahi dekh sakte..humne  ye sab  apni sakhi(friend) Chandralekha  aur apko milwane ke liye kiya'Agar ap nahi chahte to hum use dubara is tarha ke sapne nahi dikhayenge'Use kabhi  pareshaan nahi karenge aur ap kahe to  use  sabkuch  bhula  denge "'.saying this she stopped Udayveer from hurting his hand who to punish himself for hurting his 'Chand' had already injured his hands with his sword which he always used to carry whenever he used to visit secretly to this mahal which he had known for so many years or can be said centuries now'"Ap pichle itne varsh(years) se tarap rahe hai in Devgardh walo ke vaje se..Inhone apki Chand apse cheena..ap is tarha kaise har man sakte hai'Hum jante hai ye sab utna asaan nahi hai par ye apke liye ye pehla  aur  akhri mauka hai'Is janam mei agar Chandralekha apse juda ho gayi to ap use humesha humesha ke liye kho denge'Kya aap Daaima  ki baat  bhul gaye  ki unhone  apse  kya kaha  tha?...Abhi tak uski zindagi mei koi nahi aya hai'.agar der ho gayi aur koi dusra a gaya to'.."before Kurwaki could finish her sentence Udayveer held her tight and said'..

"Nahi hum aisa kabhi nahi hone denge'CHAND SIRF AUR SIRF HUMARI HAI'.IS BAAR HUM NAHI HARENGE'USE HUMARA HONA HI PAREGA CHAHE HUME ISKE LIYE KUCH BHI KARNA PARE AUR KISI BHI HAD TAK JANA PARE"'

Kurwaki was glad to see the tiger Shaurya  back in Udayveer'For Kurwaki  Shaurya  was always her hero and she had a liking for him but she knew how much Shaurya  loved his Queen and no matter how many births he had taken to get his queen back but even if he failed in his previous births he never longed for any other woman in his life and lovingly called him his queen 'CHAND' as he was mad for her beauty'She was no doubt the most beautiful princess of her times and Shaurya even after taking another  birth could not find any other princess as beautiful as his lady'He slowly creeped into her room and sat by her bedside and touched her beautiful cheeks as now Manyata had finally managed to go to sleep..'..

"Hum tumse wada karte hai Chand, hum humare beech kabhi  kisi dusre ko nahi ane denge'Tumhe apne saare sawalo ke jawab jald hi mil jayega aur hum bohot  jald hakeekat (reality) mei tumse milenge"''saying this he kisses her fair glowing cheeks and quietly goes away and Manyata unconsciously moans and responds with a smile on her lips''

 

Kurwaki said with a smile on her face'." Maharaj apki yahi bat humei sabse zada pasand hai'.Apne kabhi bhi us  Shoor Veer Shaurya ko khatam nahi hone diya'Naam badal gaya, ye prithvi  badal gayi par ap abhi bhi wahi hai usi hriday(dil) ke sath'"  "Ha Kurwaki, hum aaj bhi wahi hai kyuki humne sirf ek hi maksad se janam liya hai..Apni Maharani ko wapas pane aur apni riyasat ko wapas se uske sunhere dino mei wapas le jane ke liye.. Aur tum sirf Chand ki hi sakhi(friend) nahi ho balki humari bhi sakhi ho kyuki tumne humari bohot sahayta ki hai itne varsh mei, tum humei Shaurya bula sakti ho"'''''''.and they went out of the mahal  garden and then  through  the gates without the royal guards noticing as Kurwaki had made all of them faint with her magical powers'..But there was one person who had seen everything from a distance''''.Rajmata Rajlakshmi, Manyata's grandmother'She was in deep thought now..she could have stopped the duo and made them caught by the security but for some reason she kept silent'She was too clam and composed at this action of Shaurya but thought'''.

"Hum jante hai humari poti ko pareshaan karne wale ap hi hai Shaurya par aap apni maksad mei kabhi kamyab nahi honge'Humesha ki trha is bar bhi apko harna parega'pichle  janam  mei to ap apni maharani ko nahi pa sake..Is  janam mei kya kar lenge!.."''and she gave a wicked smile,'a smile which said she always knew that he was so close to her granddaughter but was always confident about his moves'''''.."Hume  humari  riyasat  ki  raksha  karna  ata  hai  Maharaj Shaurya Pratap Singh'.BIlkul usi  tarha  jis  tarha  sadiyo  pehle  humare  purwajo ne apni  beti  ko  apke  giraft se  bachaya tha'Aur  uska  badla  aapne  humare  riyasat  ko khatam  karke  li  par puri tarha  se  khatam  nahi kar  paye  kyuki  use pehle to aap khud  hi khatam  ho gaye!... "she smirks'''''"Jab  tak  hum   zinda  hai  ap  humari poti  ka kuch nahi bigar  sakte, kuch bhi  nahi'use  apne saath le  jana to door ki baat  hai"''.she said  to  herself with an affirmation'..

 

Yuvraaj Udayveer Singh was a powerful name in the country as well as in many foreign nations where Uday had made a dignified and respectable place for his chain of Hotels and business schools..'



In some places his hotels lit up with his name while some were mostly known by the name of Shaurya hotels and Restro-bars'..Students who wanted to make a name in the management industry dreamed of getting into Shaurya Pratap Business schools, where the best of the professors, shaped out the young minds into genius professionals'Manyata while was studying in London had a keen interest in business and wanted to join Shaurya schools of business studies about which her friends in London always used to talk about and one of her friend had said that the owner was a very charming and handsome prince himself'Manyata unknowingly had an interest in meeting him and knowing him herself..She felt as if she knew him somehow, and this name Shaurya was some kind of a legendary name for her which she thought, she must have heard from her mom or Dadisahab'''

Shaurya aka Yuvraaj Udayveer was sitting by the riverside of the jungle which Manyata had seen in her dreams..


This was the place where he always used to relax and hover over his past..After many years he had seen his life, his queen and he found immense peace and tranquility at the very thought of seeing her'.How could he forget how beautiful she looked when he had seen her for the first time in 16th century Chunargar, bathing and playing with water splashing over her friends Kurwaki and others in the same river by which he was sitting now'..She was half naked along with the other girls but his eyes were fixed on this unknown damsel which made his heart beat really wild and fast'He thanked his horse for forgetting its path in the jungle on that lucky day when he went out with his group for hunting and was left alone to die by the group..He realised it was a plot made by someone from the royal family but at that moment did not want to wreck his brain on that useless ploying stuff..All he wanted was to tell the other girls to leave and he himself jump into the river and get wet with this girl whom he decided to find out her real identification..He was still lost in his wild thoughts with his eyes tracing her nude and wet body when suddenly one of the girls' screams and shouts in anger, shame and disgust..

"Ohh I am caught''.."'.."Kya hua Shaurya?...kya bol rahe ho?..." Suddenly he realized the world around him, his whisky bottly nearby and his glass in hand and Kurwaki, his friend near him brought him back from his memories of yester years'''." Kuch  nahi   Kurwaki, bas purani  yadein  taza  ho gayi'.Ye jagah  humei   Chandralekha  ki  yad  dilate hai..Tumhe  to  pata  hai, pehli  bar  hum  yahi  pe  mile  the"'..and he becomes a bit lost again in his thoughts but Kurwaki decides to lighten up his mood'."Ha ha  kaise  bhul  sakte  hai'..Hum  bhi  to the  waha..tum  jab  besharamo  ki tarha  waha  hum  larkio  ko  dekh  rahe the  jo  bilkul  bhi rajwado  ki tarha bat  nahi thi'aur shukra hai  tur  who humne  bohot  dino  baad Chandralekha  ko uske pure  naam  se  bulaya'Varna  hum  Chand  sunte  sunte to us  asmaan ke chaand ko  bhool hi  gayi thi!"''''''"Asmaan ka Chand to sirf duniya  walo  ke liye  hai,  par humare liye  to ek  hi  chand  hai'  humari  Maharani" '''

For the world, Yuvraaj Udayveer was a successful young bachelor on whom luck had always smiled blissfully, but for him he had actually lost everything the day he lost his Queen. He had lost the glory of his riyasat and today was only trying to rebuilt the lost name and fame of Udaygarh

 

Precap: Everyone getting ready with their plans for the trip and Manyata shocked seeing the man of her dreams in her college!!





Edited by sweet_gargi - 16 November 2012 at 5:56am

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jus cant wait for next update...wanna c manveer meeting...i think manyatha is gonna faint aft seeing uday due to flsh back n stuff... nice update ... Smile Clap

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Originally posted by puggyy

jus cant wait for next update...wanna c manveer meeting...i think manyatha is gonna faint aft seeing uday due to flsh back n stuff... nice update ... Smile Clap


Each Day will become more shocking and surprising for her..Just wait and watchLOL

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wow awesum blossom gr8...finally atleast manveer moment tha...agle mein jyada honge na??
but without much manveer also epiz were mindblowing yar...
luved them...
update soon...
plz pm me...
mahi...

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