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ajeeb se rishtey...!!!! pt 2 uptd (pg 3)

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 10:28am | IP Logged

hii everyone...this is purecure(neelima)...i havn't introduced myself in this froum bt do hav commented on few topics n hav been silent reader too!!

this first tym ever i wld b writing an os/ff/ss...so i jst hope u like it...
 
note:
 (1)the story is in narrative thn emotional rather thn having dialogue or thrill.
  (2)not sure if any topic related to it is posted ...bt idea is purely mine n nt extracted from any other topic...
(3) please be a ptient reader till d climax...as it's something different in end and unexpeced...mayb
(4)the story is not made to hurt any1's feelings or ideas...if any apoloy on my behalf..!!!!
(5)compliments, comments and rating (on scale of 5) is welcomed whole heartedly...(it wld help me to post further)
 
hope you like it...!!!


Edited by purecure - 13 September 2012 at 3:53am

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 10:30am | IP Logged
start it dear...

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 10:31am | IP Logged
please start dearSmile

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 10:36am | IP Logged

n now i wld like to welcum uto

 ajeeb se rishtey...
in this few relations wld b discovered and described in form of SS (may b LS-long story a bit) ...a kind of prediction too regarding d show...dat wat cld b d realtion b/w d leads of ETF team...(which many of us wld b thinking or posting regarding it)
in ajjeb se rishtry i hav 3 possibilities of relation:
(1)ETF aur sikander
(2)yaari aur rishtey
(3)yaari aur jalan
two of them deals wid makhsat and one deals wid friendship...

 
i feel like most of u will b interested wid ariya/arni/sikander n ol ...so i begin my first ss wis my first relation
ETF aur sikander
till now ETF together hav solve many cases together aur zyaadatar arjun ne akele hi sambhale as he said dat  he would not like to b a part of team...riya developed some feelings for arjun bt not able to accept as she believes dat he will never fall in love again...
 
After many cases...ETf chief rathore gets call from d commissioner dat dey got a new small link dat sikander thru his dealers wld b sending young girls to other countriies...n he says dat "sikander ke chote se chote iraade ko na kamyab karna hi hamare aim hai aur ustak pohchne ki
ek-ek seedi hai" and "is case un ladkiyo ko bachana hi hamara makhsat hai"...rathore shock to hear abt him n wid dat aggressiveness he goes to etf team where he asks dem to assemble in discussion room...he begins...

"ek bohot badii link mili hai aur mein chahta hoon ki sab is par bohot focus karein aur apna attention sirf iss par de...aur kuch logo se request hai gussa control kare aur is par personal reasons affect na hone de"(looking at arjun) shree: "kaisi link??" every1 lookin confused to rathore...rathore looks at arjun and one other member of etf too (who?Shocked ) in tensed manner...dat how dey will react...n he says  "sikander ki...".

as soon as arjun listens "sikander"  he stands up...n says " mujhe wo link chahiye, rathore"
rathore: " mujhe pata hai arjun tum itne utawle kyu ho raheho...lekin tum shayad kuch bhool rahe ho ki ye link etf team ko di gayii ha,i sirf acp arjun rawte ko nahii...to ye case etf waale handle karein har doosre case ki tarah...agar nahii toh tum is link se haath dho bethoge.samjhe ya samjhaun ( sry i kno it's arjun's punch line bt as we can c some or other way others hav begun to use it too in d show, so as did i)
But there was some1 else who had wetty eyes and anger within it...holding a pencil in the hand under table and ending with breaking it into two parts...but no1 noticed that...except rathore as he was aware abt it and der reaction, bt he appreciated hw 'da't etf member had ability to control and stay normal in situation...not like arjun who stood up in anger...
 
listening to rathore arjun sat down again...havin no option den to work wid it...!!!
every1 listened to d case and start planning according to it. (case investigation takes place)...and within two days dey wer able to locate them. ..bt dealers said dey will release gals on one condition if the female etf member comes for rescueing thm...
every1 shcked to listen dem...evry1 started looking at riya...especially arjun.he thinks n says "NO" (in his mind)...he wasn't sure y he didn't wanted t let her go bt may b it was bcoz of he working wid her especially in most of cases...(bt it was something more thn dat)...
bt riya assures dat she is ready to go ...n arjun assures dat he will not let her happen anything...and finally evry1...somewhr or othr agrees to do it. As being responsible cops dey hav to take dat decision to save d innocents...

Arjun even tho agreed b twasn't sue what shaal be exactly be done...for the first time he was restless and confused .Was he imaptient to get to sikander or was it riya, d real reason for her restlessness???...he couldn't figure out d real mystery within himself...


Now, every1 back to etf office...riya sitting on her couch bit nervous or tensed...as for first tym she have a great responsibility and everything depending on her...
even tho she waited for such an opportunity to prove herself from the beginning itself...shree and chotu is along wid her figuring out how n when plan is gonna go...call tracing , statistics ol goin on...

On other hand arjun figuring out how to plan out along with rathore in discussion room.
arjun: "rathore, kuch to chooth raha hai!!!"
rathore(irritated) : kya??
arjun:"dealers itni aasani se un ladkiyo ko nahii chondege , jahaan se call trace kiya aur jaahaan riya ko bulaya hai aur humaari information se jahaan ladkiyan hai wo do alag jagah hai...aur ek doosre se 1 gahnte ki doori par hai...Aaur sabse badi aur  pareshaani ki baat yeh hai ki riya ko kyu bulaya hai??? yeh case itna simple nahii ho sakta jitna yeh log humme bataana chahtein... samjhe ya samjhaun??"
rathore: " tum kehna kya chahte ho ki...hum riya ko naa bheje aur aisi hi yahaan tumhari cutting chai peete rahein...humare pass koi doosra option nahii hai riya ke alaava...uske thru hi hum un logo tak pohch sakenge or is racket ko rok sakenge"
arjun : "hmmm...lekin jo ho mujhe in dealers aur racket ko rokna hi hoga...!!!"
rathore: "tum shayad kuch bol rahe..."mujhe" nahii "humme" ...";
aarjun(angry): "jo bhi ho lekin mere liye ye case bohot matter karta hai,rathore...yaad rakhna!!!"
he goes away...
rathore:"sirf tumhare liye nahii...sab ke liye...yea humse zyaada kisi 'aur ek' ke liye"

arjun jst moved outside d discussion room n mistakely heard last words of rathore n said in mind: mere alaava 'aur ek' ...kaun??aisa kaun hai jisse mere alaava sikander ki khoj ho???

In riya's room...
shree: "riya, kya tum theek ho?"
chotu:"riya, daro mat hum sab hai na...tum to hamari ETF ki  "beauty with brains" ho..."
riya gets a smile out of her fear...
riya: "shree, may theek hoon...bas mein soch rahii hoon ki un sab ko kaise bachaaya jayeein...wo sab kis halat mein honge..."
chotu:"us sikander ke saare rackets or aatank ko rokna hi hoga...aur wo hum ETF waalein karke rehnge..."
shree:"aur haan... yeh case arjun sir ke liye bohot matter karta hai ..."
riya:"usi baat ka to dar hai...kahii mujhse koi galati...!!"
chotu(interuppts):"nahii...jo itne saalon se hote aa raha hai sikander ki wajah se...usse ab rokna hai, riya..."
riya:"sahii kaha jo pehle hua wo ab nahii hona chahiye..."
chotu n shree looked at each other confusingly...
riya:"matlab, jo doosro ke saath hua wo ab kisi ke saath nahii hona chahiye"
thn shree n chotu: "oh!"

arjun near etf car...wearing etf jacket n ready with gun n ol stuffz...(super duper hottiee)
He thinking: who could b dat other person ; whether it is rathore bt he says no it isn't possible ...
phir yea toh riya, shree ya chotu...chotu ki gf hai... shree aur riya ne abhi-abhi 6 months se case handle kar rahein. aur hamesha jokes crack karte hain...unhe sikander se  kya lena dena...iska matab ya rathore ya chotu...lekin!!!!
He figured out past n present of ol members bt couldn't get who really it cld b ...

Everyother member of ETF team came near car except  rathore.Riya looks tensed...seeing riya arjun too got tensed...he looked at her very caringly...
it clearly showed dat he wasn't sure yet dat riya should go or not...He moves towards  riya n said  " muhe pata hai ki tum kar sakti hoon aur yaad rakhna,mein hamesha...(he stopped)"
Bth of dem looking at each other eye-to-eye contact , amost forgot whr dey r ...
riya: aap kya,sir" (her heart wanted to hear something from him...bt  she knew dat wasn't possible)
n arjun was confused too n thinks "what he was going to say??" n he looked away moved a step behind n said"mera matlab hai ke hum tumhare saath hi hai"...
shree interuppts n says "sir, humme wahaan 20 min pohchna hai"...
 
To be continued with part 2
Coming up: arjun is unknowingly connected to the unknown member in past
 
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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 11:01am | IP Logged
nice...update it soon 

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 11:22am | IP Logged
Hey.. I liked the concept! Please continue soon.. Smile

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 11:23am | IP Logged
Continnue sooon dear...cant wait

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Posted: 11 September 2012 at 11:40am | IP Logged
nice story and interesting start...
Please continueSmile

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