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Ariya SS: Adhoori si dua..(Chap 9C - Last) 06/01 (Page 65)

Harman987 IF-Dazzler

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ll-Shilpa-ll IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 January 2013 at 7:27pm | IP Logged
Avantika I read this like three hours ago and I still haven't come up with a way to say how much I loved this update.

Thank god for all your warnings otherwise I would have had a silly grin on my face which would have made anyone sitting with me wonder about state of my mind.LOL

Seriously my gal this was as perfect as it gets and as hot it can get. 

Above was for part 9B.

While I was making a comment on 9B I realized that you actually posted the last chapter also, so I stopped and read it.

Anyway the ending was superb of course and it was so sweet. I remembered when you started writing this, and I was one of the ones who begged you to continue it and I am so glad you granted us our request.

You are so right this is the most beautiful story about love, marriage and parenthood, the most beautiful part of any couples life and portrayed it so well.

Thank you for making me smile, grin, laugh, cry and blush. Perfect ending to a perfect story.

Thanks so much for the PM.

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luvzindagi Goldie

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Posted: 08 January 2013 at 9:46am | IP Logged
Wow di Smile
Just read all the three parts...
Thanks for giving us such a beautiful piece of your work...

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Christeee IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 09 January 2013 at 2:29am | IP Logged
Oh too hot .will miss it it was really good
keep on writing more

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YeHoKyaRahaHai IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 10 January 2013 at 1:21am | IP Logged
Hey Avantika...thanks for the lovely chapter...couldn't be online because of exams...just read the last three's been such a pleasure reading this story...hope you write many, many more:)


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naughtykittyyy IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 10 January 2013 at 12:12pm | IP Logged

rd it...its cmplt...n I wana rd da whol ff 1nc agnSmile

andr fantstc drmyyy stry 4m u

seriously whr do u gt such rmntc ideas...n so welll presentsn of dem ...(as b4 sm hour I rd ur tjp its an awsm 1 n now asd) ur evryy stryy stord so much entrtnmnt 4 usClap

1st of all ye stryy hay hi drmyyy(as ariya r marrd n riya preggyyy)drmyyyDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming

Den da thrill of ds case...Its rockinggg avantika

Da hot alrt of rmnc woooEmbarrassed

It just melt me...arjun is so rmntc EmbarrassedEmbarrassedDay Dreaming

Da bathroom scn tk my breth...i realyyy wana b riya in ur stryyyWink

Whn riya clrd him n den he mk hr cln n der hotttnesss s brthtkngCensored

Riya werng his shirt n arjuns cmnt wooo...Embarrassed

Den bed scns...EmbarrassedEmbarrassed der kissEmbarrassedEmbarrassed arjuns feelng 4 riya n his princess r sooo touchy

Den he md hr ,his pillowDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay DreamingDay Dreaming

U always mk me jlous of riya...WinkLOL

I love da way u gv us da glimpse of der mrrd life ...which hvnt lost da charm whdr odr mrd couples lost da charm bt our ariya hv alll

wht can I say...or demnd dat gv us ds type of awsm stryyss agn plzz...


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IshqDewaani Goldie

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Posted: 10 February 2013 at 3:15am | IP Logged
oh My god!!!!
It was sooo awesome!!
i hve no words..
i m soo sorry couldnt commnet earlier..
i was caught up in work..
bt seriously..loved every bit of it!!!1
aweome yaar!!!
_TaNi_ IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 24 February 2013 at 11:00pm | IP Logged
Maine phir se aaj ASD read kiya 

beginning to end

Hug for writing such a marvelous work

it s my favorite-est works on arjun forum 

PLS request : ASD part 2 likh do na ...

i mean season 2 ...PLS

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