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Ariya SS: Adhoori si dua..(Chap 9C - Last) 06/01 (Page 64)

ll_piya_ll IF-Rockerz

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Posted: 07 January 2013 at 11:02am | IP Logged
Thats was lvly ending dr ,
amazing update

life93 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 January 2013 at 11:03am | IP Logged
thank u so much avantika diHugHug 4 writing ADHOORI SI DUA it was such an beautiful story that i read on forum a millins of thanx ti u i just loved its each n every word of it form the bottom of my soul...loved a lil bit sad ab to yeh bhi neh keh sekti ki update soonBroken Heart
well aap ek epilouge kyu nahi likhate of ariyan ther princess n etf' life after this time plz try
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Posted: 07 January 2013 at 11:10am | IP Logged
-Rajvi- Senior Member

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Posted: 07 January 2013 at 12:04pm | IP Logged
Read all the 3 parts in one go and they were absolutely fantastic...

In first part ARIYA romantic moments were too good...and the little conversation between Riya,Shree,Chotu and Arjun was very cute(especially Arjun's comment on Shree for waiting for few more yearsWink).
And what to say about 2 was super hawwttWinkwhile reading it,i was blushing like an idiotLOL

Ending was very good...especially the last was very touching...

Story was very beautifully written and narrated,hats off to you for that..ClapClap
and i have a request,if possible please do write a epilogue,its one among my ADHOORI SI DUAEmbarrassedEmbarrassed

Thanks a lot for the story and PM!

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Harman987 IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 07 January 2013 at 5:58pm | IP Logged
ll-Shilpa-ll IF-Sizzlerz

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Posted: 07 January 2013 at 7:27pm | IP Logged
Avantika I read this like three hours ago and I still haven't come up with a way to say how much I loved this update.

Thank god for all your warnings otherwise I would have had a silly grin on my face which would have made anyone sitting with me wonder about state of my mind.LOL

Seriously my gal this was as perfect as it gets and as hot it can get. 

Above was for part 9B.

While I was making a comment on 9B I realized that you actually posted the last chapter also, so I stopped and read it.

Anyway the ending was superb of course and it was so sweet. I remembered when you started writing this, and I was one of the ones who begged you to continue it and I am so glad you granted us our request.

You are so right this is the most beautiful story about love, marriage and parenthood, the most beautiful part of any couples life and portrayed it so well.

Thank you for making me smile, grin, laugh, cry and blush. Perfect ending to a perfect story.

Thanks so much for the PM.

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luvzindagi Goldie

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Posted: 08 January 2013 at 9:46am | IP Logged
Wow di Smile
Just read all the three parts...
Thanks for giving us such a beautiful piece of your work...

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Christeee IF-Dazzler

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Posted: 09 January 2013 at 2:29am | IP Logged
Oh too hot .will miss it it was really good
keep on writing more

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