hey sis
finallyyy i read ur updates sis
it was awesome mind blowing update sis
it feels to me that today i was reading a update of a mature writer
seriously mahi u have matured very well in terms of writing
i can feels the level of maturity and greatness u have achieved since ur first update till yet
this is master piece mahi i loved it a lot
wow asad zoya tadka added by u adds beauty to this update
loved the way post marriage scenes were shown
arjun riya understanding and their growing relation ship was awe lovelyyy one
asad zoya love scenes with that arjun assertiveness towards riya was amazing outstanding sis
finally the end moment the confession and hug of Ariya the most magical confession knowing each others condition very well and accepting each other with not only heart but with soul too
seriously i loved this update a lot and lot sis
lovely ss ...
great work
hats off to u
keeep writng like this my novelist sis π
love sehr
Edited by sizzysehrish - 10 years ago
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