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Second chance...Kr n Ss SS Pt6 Pg 34 - Page 7

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Posted: 11 years ago
lovely update...
kriya is superb nd her idea too...
Swaron mission is already started.. mere kriyaansh ka kya hoga..??? 😭
loved kriyaansh convo..
but best part was when taani call kriya as bhabhi..
rey treat taani as his sister, then it means kriya is rey' wife... 😳 😳
loved it
update soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
awww awesome...

im loving it
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Posted: 11 years ago
wowww simply amazing!!:):)

Loved d update very much:):):)
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Posted: 11 years ago
~~PART 3~~

The group look down and went away...
Kria-Thanks swayam!!!...
Swayam shrugs...kria smiled...
Kria-Ohkay baba...mein apna thank you wapas leti hun!!...
Swayam smiled...
Swayam-Umm...kria...voh ek saal pehle jo hua usske liye i am really very sorry!!!...please forgive me!!...
Kria-Ab toh mein pakka maaf nahi karungi...go to hell...
Swayam-Accha baba...sorry..
Kria-Wapas??...
Swayam-Sorry for saying sorry...
They look at each other and laugh...kria smiled and hugged him...sharon's eyes wide in shock...
Kria-I missed my bestfriend!!...
Swayam-Maine bhi!!!...
The group standing a little far...
Neha-Awwh...kitne cute hain dono bestfriends!!...
All smiled...
Rey *in mind*-Sabko maaf kar dia tumne kria...mujhe kab karogi??/...
Kria as if heard his inner mind,...
Kria *in mind*-Its not easy rey..its not!!!...
The whole day sharon dint talk to kria...she ran behind her everywhere but sharon ignored her...at last they stop...they were in front of the group...
Kria-Tujhe toh mujhse baat hi nahi karni!!!...mein hi bhaagi jaa rahi hun tujhe sorry bolte bolte...and my mistake...maine mere bestfriend se baat ki!!!...sharon voh aisa nahi hain jaisa tum sochti ho!!!...and nahi baat karni mat baat karo...rudeness dekhaani hain dekhao!!!...
Kria was in tears...
Kria-Humesha se toh rudeness hi dekhi hain maine!!!...not a big deal...
Kria ran away from their...
Sharon-Shit!!!...kya kar dia tune sharon!!!...uff...i hate my ego!!...
All felt guilty they knew whose rudeness kria meant!!!...rey the most...he went to the fire escape and saw kria crying...
Rey-Baatcutter...
Kria looked up and saw him...she hugged him tightly...she was crying in his arms...
Meanwhile sharon tried to find kria everywhere but she couldnt find her...she suddenly slips and was about to fall down from the stairs when swayam caught her and pulled her back...sharon hugged him...she smiled in his arms...but moved back..
Sharon-Thanks...
Swayam-Kria fire escape mein hogi...
Sharon was about to go but swayam stoped her...
Swayam-Mat jao...rey hain usske saath...
Sharon nods...she dint say anything to him...they were walking...
On the other side in the rehersal hall...the louians *except kriyaansh and swaron and including taani*..were sitting their...
Rinni-Kria ne humein maaf toh kar dia lekin...
Nilesh-She still is hurt...
Vishakha-Hum kya karien usse manane ke liye!!!...
All thought...taani smiled...
Taani-Bhabi ki smile wapas laane ka tareeka hain!!...
All-Kya??...
Taani-Mein kria ko bhabi bolati hunb kyunki...
Bharat-Abe...humara matlab tha ki tera idea kya hain??..
Vicky-Hum jaante hain tu kria ko bhabi kyun bulati hain!!...
All nod...
Taani-Toh...bhabi ki smile sirf rey wapas laa sakte hain...and rey ki smile sirf bhabi...ri8??...
Amar-Sayi toh hain lekin isse kya hoga??...
Taani-Simple...swaron ko ek saath laate laate...kriyaansh ko bhi saath lao!!...
All-Kriyaansh?????...
Taani-Uff...jaise swayam and sharon is swaron...waise hi kria and reyaansh is kriyaansh..
All-Ohh...kriyaansh...
Fire escape..
Kria finally broke the hug...rey wiped her tears...
Rey-M sorry baatcutter...i hate myself...mein jaanta hun meri wajha se hi...
But kria puts her hand on his mouth...
Kria-Mujhe baatcutter bulate ho...and khudh hi bolte jaa rahe ho...mujhe bolne doge?????...
Rey smiled and nods...
Kria-Rey...mein jaanti ho you really are guilty for what you did...trust me...mujhe bhi aapko hurt dekh kar accha nahi lagta...soo...kya hum iss relationship ko ek aur chance de sakte hain...waise hi jaise humne shuru kia tha...as friends?????...sooo...MR.REYAANSH SINGHAANIA KYA AAP KRIA RAIPRAKASH KE DOST BANEGE????...
Rey smiled...
Rey-I would love to baatcutter...
Kria smiled and bites her lips..looking down...
Rey-Baatcutter abhi sirf dost bane hain..agar propose kar dia hota toh tum toh puri laal hojaati!!!...
Kria hits him and smiled...

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Posted: 11 years ago
awsome update...
Thankx 4 d pm
update soon
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awesome update
loved it
yay kriyam friends
finally kriya ne rey ko maaf kiya
n plzz i want a sharey seq. too..plzz
Edited by lovely7010 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
Awsome update..!
Loved it ..!
Update soon d next part ..!
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Posted: 11 years ago
amazing update..
loved it
kriyaansh scence were so cute...
kria ne swayam nd rey ko maaf kar diya...
par phir bhi woh dost hai.. chalu abhi isse hi kaam chala lugi... 😆
update soon
thnx for pm
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Posted: 11 years ago
awesome update
loved it
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Posted: 11 years ago
Wow. . .. . .
Kriya ne swayum ko maaf kr diya. . . .
Wow. . . .
N kriyum r back. . . . .
Kriyaansh became frndz. . . .
Wow. . . .
Chalo kum se kum unhone realtionshp ka 1st step toh liya. . .
M so happy 4 them. . .
Thankz 4 d update. . . .
Nxt part jaldi update krna. . .