Kairee - Rishta Khatta Meetha

My childhood (Poem) :D :D

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Posted: 11 years ago
My childhood was the time when i was innocent
When the world seemed to be fair
When my universe was around my toys



My childhood was the time when i lived in dreams
When everyone was selfless
When everyone appeared to be a friend



My childhood was the time when my life was full of colours
When sorrows never knocked my door
When smile was gift presented to everyone



My childhood was the time when love was pure
When there were no obligations
When tenderness prevailed



My childhood was the time which is long gone
Tears flow from my eyes when i go back in my childhood
My childhood will never come back but
The child in me will never go...




Feed back would be appreciated
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Posted: 11 years ago
as I said earlier as well, this is a very brililant poem, covers the essence of childhood pretty well, and the more i say it the more it seems less: but you are awesome Dhruti 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: Vinder90

as I said earlier as well, this is a very brililant poem, covers the essence of childhood pretty well, and the more i say it the more it seems less: but you are awesome Dhruti 👏 👏 👏 👏 👏



@ maron tell me something I dunno     😆😆😆


thanks dude 😳😳
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: Madhura2105



@ maron tell me something I dunno     😆😆😆


thanks dude 😳😳



i think i hav eused all positive words i cud think of for ur works, I believe my best bet to survive in this praising awesomeness will be to use some graphics from now lol. . . so a few words and some graphics for next time 😆 😃
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: Vinder90



i think i hav eused all positive words i cud think of for ur works, I believe my best bet to survive in this praising awesomeness will be to use some graphics from now lol. . . so a few words and some graphics for next time 😆 😃



lol... graphi talks are just fun... din yu see me n chor dung the other day 😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆😆
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Posted: 11 years ago
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arey waahhh.. it isgood yaar...

i thought.. poem must be chindi chor types.😳.. 😆but surprizingly it was ossum...👏

congrats
Edited by manishmodh - 11 years ago
Madhura2105 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: manishmodh

😆😊

arey waahhh.. it isgood yaar...

i thought.. poem must be chindi chor types.😳.. 😆but surprizingly it was ossum...👏

congrats




mereko kyaaa "AAPKE" jaisa chor samza hai kyaaa??????


Btw, thaks chor 😉😉😉
Edited by Madhura2105 - 11 years ago
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Posted: 11 years ago
hey madhura good one..loved reading this poem ...thanks made me to remebr my child hood days.

https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3187516


please comment and have a look and PM all the kairi members who are in ur list...
Madhura2105 thumbnail
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: bhavya

hey madhura good one..loved reading this poem ...thanks made me to remebr my child hood days.


https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/topic/3187516


please comment and have a look and PM all the kairi members who are in ur list...



dear i did see it, but yu know I hardluy know any1 here, so aint commenting
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Posted: 11 years ago
Originally posted by: Madhura2105




mereko kyaaa "AAPKE" jaisa chor samza hai kyaaa??????


Btw, thaks chor 😉😉😉



aaah .. You know.. how am I feeling after reading it

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