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The prince and the pauper: completed! :) (Page 2)

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 6:42am | IP Logged
i love it suchi.. continue soon don fir aakar comment degi.. Approve

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 6:45am | IP Logged
lovely suchi connt soon

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 7:16am | IP Logged
you written it beautifully ...please continue soon

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 7:30am | IP Logged
Awesome - beauty in prose!!
 
Thanks.  Please continue.

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 7:51am | IP Logged
Aww Suchi Hug!!

Such a lovely Once upon a time tale... I am a complete sucker for fairy tales and you do spin such a lovely yarn. Kudos !! Beautiful expressions, fantastic illustration and expressions that leave me short of words to describe them Thumbs UpClap.

We have all the wisdom in all our nursery tales and we never think they are real. Yet see - how that cunning princess with a heart of stone and a beautiful face but ice-cold eyes is trying to drive a poisoned spear into the prince's heart so he can turn against his own family !!

But thankfully - we know that the poisoned apple did not really kill SnowWhite, it just stayed stuck in her throat and made her look dead - till the time she recieved a jerk and it can come out and she opens her eyes again.

Our Jagya too - like Snow-white was poisoned by the cold evil maiden and he too will spit out the poison and become his own clean self. I can see fate (read CV's) doing that in the very near future as I gaze into my crystal ball.

Am awaiting your next installment. btw, I love the new stranger who helped the princess and went his way. Really want to see how you will make him meet our lovely princess again .EmbarrassedHeartDay Dreaming

Will you make them fall in love ? Will her wayward husband spit out the poisoned apple before she marries another young man with a heart of gold ? Will she go back to the old fellow or move ahead with the new charming stranger ?

Oooh ! I just can't wait ...




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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 7:59am | IP Logged
suchiiiDay Dreaming
its just too good!!

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 8:31am | IP Logged
ThanQ 4 creating the wonderland...When will prince (Shiv) enter?as the prince-1 is the pauper...
Eagerly awaiting AnSh track of magic land n the charm of the prince Shiv...
Love my Anandi in princess with sword...marvellous!

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 8:55am | IP Logged
Omg Suchi, now I am in la la land...dreaming about Prince Shiv and Princess Anandi!Day Dreaming I loved it to bits yaar! Heart Very beautifully written...do continue soon! Clap Clap Embarrassed

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