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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 7:07am | IP Logged
Originally posted by Debalina_Paul

Wow Mads.. Too good composition.. Each and every word are so touching.. I was being nostalgic while reading.. Beautiful.. 


thanks debu ...

my bachpannn ... I miss it CryCryCryCryCry

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Posted: 08 September 2012 at 8:14am | IP Logged
Most beautiful... 

It is such a coincidence that just yesterday, I took out my school autograph book and was reliving those carefree childhood days and today you wrote about it as if on a cue.

Sometimes when circumstances go beyond my control, I hug that insecure child within me and tell her that don't worry we will sail through, yet again...

Lovely poem.Hug


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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 1:10am | IP Logged
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My childhood was the time which is long gone
Tears flow from my eyes when i go back in my childhood
My childhood will never come back but
The child in me will never go...

 
Dhruthi, please do not let your childhood go. Things get complicated when we grow up. God job gir. Clap


Edited by A2ZV - 10 September 2012 at 2:27am
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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 3:40am | IP Logged
sorry for the late reply, but I really loved the poem, Dhruti must say, you are too too awesome, and the many timse tahts said its also less. . 

very well done, brilliant creativity Clap
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Posted: 09 September 2012 at 6:15pm | IP Logged
Originally posted by Madhura2105

My childhood was the time when i was innocent
When the world seemed to be fair
When my universe was around my toys



My childhood was the time when i lived in dreams
When everyone was selfless
When everyone appeared to be a friend



My childhood was the time when my life was full of colours
When sorrows never knocked my door
When smile was gift presented to everyone



My childhood was the time when love was pure
When there were no obligations
When tenderness prevailed



My childhood was the time which is long gone
Tears flow from my eyes when i go back in my childhood
My childhood will never come back but
The child in me will never go...




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Last stanza made me to cry  Cry.  I wish, we can all go back to our childhood. we were all lived like butterflies, with out worries. Nice post Maddy!!Clap, To most of the ppl, their childhood is a precious time in their life, no money can buy  that happy time.


Edited by Giafan - 09 September 2012 at 6:14pm

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Posted: 10 September 2012 at 8:06am | IP Logged
I love the poem Dhruti it awesome love it!
OMG i miss my childhood so muchhCryCry!!

sorry for late replay 
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Posted: 20 September 2012 at 6:52am | IP Logged
sorry for the late reply but i loved your poem.

no matter what my age i am still a child :P :D
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Posted: 20 September 2012 at 12:51pm | IP Logged
A childhood lost
A childhood mourned.
Be happy in the memories
And misty eyed in the past.

Loved your poem, Dhruti.  A time of innocence and gazed knees. Big smile

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