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Posted: 11 years ago
This content was originally posted by: Madhura2105

My childhood was the time when i was innocent
When the world seemed to be fair
When my universe was around my toys



My childhood was the time when i lived in dreams
When everyone was selfless
When everyone appeared to be a friend



My childhood was the time when my life was full of colours
When sorrows never knocked my door
When smile was gift presented to everyone



My childhood was the time when love was pure
When there were no obligations
When tenderness prevailed



My childhood was the time which is long gone
Tears flow from my eyes when i go back in my childhood
My childhood will never come back but
The child in me will never go...




Feed back would be appreciated
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Last stanza made me to cry  😭.  I wish, we can all go back to our childhood. we were all lived like butterflies, with out worries. Nice post Maddy!!πŸ‘, To most of the ppl, their childhood is a precious time in their life, no money can buy  that happy time.
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Posted: 11 years ago
I love the poem Dhruti it awesome love it!
OMG i miss my childhood so muchh😭😭!!

sorry for late replay 
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Posted: 11 years ago
sorry for the late reply but i loved your poem.

no matter what my age i am still a child :P :D
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Posted: 11 years ago
A childhood lost
A childhood mourned.
Be happy in the memories
And misty eyed in the past.

Loved your poem, Dhruti.  A time of innocence and gazed knees. πŸ˜ƒ
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Posted: 11 years ago
kya boss aap bhi :P Rulake hi chodda :')

Beautifully written <3
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Posted: 11 years ago
Lively & lovely...
Missed my one...
Wish move to backward...
Thnx...