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SS: His Smiling Girl Thread 2: Part 21 Updt Pg 115 (Page 80)

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Posted: 15 September 2012 at 2:04am | IP Logged
I love Khushi's bubbly nature

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That was such an intense chapter, loved it <3

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what a fab update smita! love the song and loved the way you've used it :))) 

payal and khushi enacting it was super cute ;) 

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Khushi twirling her imaginary mustaches and lamenting that her jawani is getting wasted...ha ha ha , what a sight for Arnav...
And Smita, thanks to passionate scenes, my heart has developed a rather loud dhak dhak these days...

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Khushi and her antiques..LOL Arnav watching them.. Embarrassed Haww.. It was so cute.  .

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wow wonderful update luvd it

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Part 18


As Arnav bent to take Khushi's lips again, there was a sudden blackout. At first, he thought that his entire body had shut down in the anticipation of almost more pleasure than it could stand, but when the radio came to a silent stop and her room became shrouded in darkness, he realised that the problem must be with electricity.


Khushi opened her eyes to see darkness all around her. She whimpered like an infant, disoriented, and clutched hard at Arnavji's shoulders, burying her face in his neck.




(Illyria, thanx!)


He could feel her trembling. He smiled, running his hand down her back. He said, "Khushi, it is just a current failure. The lights will be back soon."

He tried to lift her face to drop a kiss on her forehead, but she resisted, keeping her face hidden in his neck.


Something was wrong. Terribly wrong. Such excessive fear of darkness! Maybe it had something to do with her parents' accident. Arnav hugged her closer, dropping a series of kisses on her hair, murmuring words of comfort, patting her back, rubbing her shoulders, trying to transfer his body heat to her chilled one.


The door to the bedroom opened slightly. A glimmer of light appeared in the gap.

"Khushi! Arnavji!", came Payal's tremulous call.

"Haan, Payal. Come in."

Payal entered the room with the candle, not in the least surprised to see Khushi in Arnavji's arms. She brought the candle close to Khushi and said, "Khushi, dekho, it is not dark anymore."

Khushi lifted her head slightly, saw the candle, and slowly withdrew from Arnav's hold.

Payal and Arnav led her to the bed and made her sit down. Arnav sat with her, her hold on his hand tight enough to crush his bones if he were a weaker man. Payal went to the kitchen to get a glass of water for Khushi.


Arnav pulled her gently into his arms. She lay against him, her head on his shoulder, his arm around her shoulders.

Payal made Khushi drink the glass of water, and then left the room.


Arnav looked at the pale girl resting against him, the smile absent from her lips. He closed his eyes in pain and hugged her tighter still. They sat together, silent in the darkness.


A while later, Khushi murmured, "W..we were going to the h...hospital."

"Hhmmm..."

"I... I was going to have a b..brother. A..Amma needed to go to the hospital at night. Amma, B..Babuji, & I were waiting for a rickshaw by the road. I...It was dark, except for a streetlamp..."

"Hhmmm..." Arnav swallowed.

"A truck... It turned the c...corner at a great speed. A...Amma, Babuji, m...my brother, all..." She swallowed the big lump in her throat. "I... I had seen a piece of shining paper stuck to a b...bush by the road. I...I had gone to look at it. It m...missed me..." She buried her face in the gap between his neck and shoulder, hot tears falling like a stream against his skin.

"T..The truck went away. A...Amma, B...Babuji, my b...brother... So much b...blood...I... I screamed for help. I couldn't get any s...sound out...There was n...no one around... It was d...dark... It started r...raining... The lightning & thunder...I... I kept on screaming...", she shook her head, caught in the nightmare of helplessness.  Arnav could feel tears filling his eyes and making their way down his cheeks into her hair.

"F...Finally, someone came. T...Then the hospital. A...Amma & B..Babuji lying there like two white bundles... My b...brother..." Tears overpowered her, sobs racking her body.

Arnav hauled her on to his lap, as close to him as possible. Her wet cheek lay against his, their tears intermingling. They stayed so for long, even after the current made a reappearance.

Then she whispered, "I am scared of speeding vehicles, of sleeping alone, of the dark, of thunder and lightning..."

Arnav nodded. Time passed. They remained unaware of it.

Arnav heard Babuji, Amma, & Buaji return from the temple.

He wiped the tears off Khushi's face with his fingers, and said, "Amma, Babuji, & Buaji are back."

She sat up, determined to clear all traces of crying from her face before her family saw them and worried far into the night.


Arnav cupped her face in his hands, looked into her moist eyes with red ones, and said, "Khushi, I promise. You will never be alone from tomorrow. I promise. I will be there with you always."

She nodded, "I know."

"If you need help, and call out, I will hear. I will be there. With you."

She nodded again.

Arnav carried her up in his arms and placed her on her bed. He covered her with her blanket, kissed her forehead, and whispered looking into her eyes, "This time, tomorrow night, we will be together."

She smiled at him.

He looked at her smiling face. He would do anything, anything to keep that smile on her face.


Part 19: http://www.india-forums.com/forum_posts.asp?TID=3185727&TPN=91






Edited by smitar - 16 September 2012 at 10:05am

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